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A great novel .good writing and good world building 'better than 99% of the fanfic novels I have read . Keep it up 🔥 and keep uploading it as fast as you have.
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This story is one of the best stories i have read till now and i love it . the MC is very good and the idea of the story is also good no spoilers for others as i don't want them to get sad?
I'm going to give this story a 10 out of 10 because I wish that he had the power to change anybody's DNA to make them their biologically children so just in case you have doubt the children he can change their DNA to match his
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its a pretty decent novel with an MC and system that i can respect. Only problem is that i finished reading the latest chapters lol
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Well written compared to 90% of slop on this platform. The pacing is a bit slow for my liking.
good, but im not really into the hiding trope, especially if the current established annoying antagonist gets a final laugh at everything that the mc fails to do on purpose.
I thought this novel would be bs just like the other Naruto ff with the same concepts but this is a good read without a doubt.
So far (29th chapter) story was not so so great but also not bad at all. I would say that altho some things that i personally don't like (like him getting strong too fast, another story where mc gets sharingan but can't use it openly or the fact that he's able to take down jonin while being just 5 years old) i am geniually happy to have another enjoing story in my library. I like the fact that there are early hints on love pairings instead of 100+ chapters that focus only on getting stronger. Like come on, no sane person would be able to live in constant stress. There are some slice of lifes moments which is good for me since i enjoy more that kind of stories than full packed with action and training. Comedy? There were some scene that you can say are funny but we will see how it's gonna be in the future. So far chapter updates are regular which is a green flag, but just like with everything else, we will see how it goes. Overly like i wrote at the beggining, story is enjoyable, not without issues (in my opinion ofc) but also can't say that it's bad. I will wait for future chapters to read.
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please put it on patreon I want to know what's coming later but I can't find it on your patreon, dragon if you read this please give me an answer
Looking forward to the more chapters, the story is great, and I am looking forward to what happened next if he or they join the leaf village or go there separate way till next time.
I am really enjoying reading this novel; I truly hope it continues this way. I will eagerly wait for the upcoming chapters. I highly recommend it without any doubt.
A great novel .good writing and good world building 'better than 99% of the fanfic novels I have read . Keep it up 🔥 and keep uploading it as fast as you have.
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This story is one of the best stories i have read till now and i love it . the MC is very good and the idea of the story is also good no spoilers for others as i don't want them to get sad?
I'm going to give this story a 10 out of 10 because I wish that he had the power to change anybody's DNA to make them their biologically children so just in case you have doubt the children he can change their DNA to match his
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its a pretty decent novel with an MC and system that i can respect. Only problem is that i finished reading the latest chapters lol
[img=Sigh][img=Shocked][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Good night]
Well written compared to 90% of slop on this platform. The pacing is a bit slow for my liking.
good, but im not really into the hiding trope, especially if the current established annoying antagonist gets a final laugh at everything that the mc fails to do on purpose.
I thought this novel would be bs just like the other Naruto ff with the same concepts but this is a good read without a doubt.
So far (29th chapter) story was not so so great but also not bad at all. I would say that altho some things that i personally don't like (like him getting strong too fast, another story where mc gets sharingan but can't use it openly or the fact that he's able to take down jonin while being just 5 years old) i am geniually happy to have another enjoing story in my library. I like the fact that there are early hints on love pairings instead of 100+ chapters that focus only on getting stronger. Like come on, no sane person would be able to live in constant stress. There are some slice of lifes moments which is good for me since i enjoy more that kind of stories than full packed with action and training. Comedy? There were some scene that you can say are funny but we will see how it's gonna be in the future. So far chapter updates are regular which is a green flag, but just like with everything else, we will see how it goes. Overly like i wrote at the beggining, story is enjoyable, not without issues (in my opinion ofc) but also can't say that it's bad. I will wait for future chapters to read.
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please put it on patreon I want to know what's coming later but I can't find it on your patreon, dragon if you read this please give me an answer
Looking forward to the more chapters, the story is great, and I am looking forward to what happened next if he or they join the leaf village or go there separate way till next time.
I am really enjoying reading this novel; I truly hope it continues this way. I will eagerly wait for the upcoming chapters. I highly recommend it without any doubt.