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excellent story line with a refreshing MC, incredibly cute interactions with characters, and there's minimal fluff, the author is fairly to the point without any long drawn out explanations that either treat the reader as having low intelligence or as chapter filler. It's a great novel and my new favorite, I just hope author can spice things up in the future
In the first five chapters I read, I thought the main character was stupid, a simp, and useless. However, I decided to give it a chance and read all the free chapters first, slowly unlocking more. I found that the story kept getting better and better. If I hadn’t continued reading, I might have given up on this story. Honestly, this story is good. It’s true what they say: don’t judge a book by its cover or its opening chapters. This has become one of my favorites now. I really love how the author writes the story, how it progresses, and how well the dialogue is crafted. Yes, I know there are some errors and confusing parts, but that’s typical for a new author. For me personally, a 5-star rating is well-deserved. I can only imagine how awesome this novel would be if it were adapted into an anime. So for everyone who wants to read it, don’t stop at the first or second chapter. There are over 50 free chapters available. Try reading more before making a judgment.
I personally came to Webnovel because of this novel. I started reading it on Royal Road but wondered why there hadn't been any updates after chapter 28. I Googled it and found it here. As for me, I don't mind if the main character comes off as a simp at first or if he seems confused about being reborn or anything like that. I just want to read a story like this. To me, this story is good enough to keep me engaged. Sure, there are a few errors here and there, but that's typical for a new author. So for me, I don't mind giving this story a 5-star rating.
story development slow. I think he has been stuck on 11 years old for a while now. like, come on, get in trouble enough that you gota go rescue liana. or liana gets taken unless he shows his true self. forced to go school. something.
It’s worth reading.The story is good, and I like how the author writes. It's easy to understand, and the character interactions are engaging.The story flows well, keeping me invested in reading.Definitely worth my time reading this! Keep up the good work🥰
After reading this story up to chapter 72, all I can say is that it’s good. The flow of the story is easy to understand, and the main character is refreshing. The dialogue is also well done. This is my favorite book so far. Keep up the good work, and I hope this book continues to be as enjoyable 😘😘
I love it,the opening and the current flow of chapter.I was hoping to read more of this.Keep up good work,author.
excellent story line with a refreshing MC, incredibly cute interactions with characters, and there's minimal fluff, the author is fairly to the point without any long drawn out explanations that either treat the reader as having low intelligence or as chapter filler. It's a great novel and my new favorite, I just hope author can spice things up in the future
In the first five chapters I read, I thought the main character was stupid, a simp, and useless. However, I decided to give it a chance and read all the free chapters first, slowly unlocking more. I found that the story kept getting better and better. If I hadn’t continued reading, I might have given up on this story. Honestly, this story is good. It’s true what they say: don’t judge a book by its cover or its opening chapters. This has become one of my favorites now. I really love how the author writes the story, how it progresses, and how well the dialogue is crafted. Yes, I know there are some errors and confusing parts, but that’s typical for a new author. For me personally, a 5-star rating is well-deserved. I can only imagine how awesome this novel would be if it were adapted into an anime. So for everyone who wants to read it, don’t stop at the first or second chapter. There are over 50 free chapters available. Try reading more before making a judgment.
I personally came to Webnovel because of this novel. I started reading it on Royal Road but wondered why there hadn't been any updates after chapter 28. I Googled it and found it here. As for me, I don't mind if the main character comes off as a simp at first or if he seems confused about being reborn or anything like that. I just want to read a story like this. To me, this story is good enough to keep me engaged. Sure, there are a few errors here and there, but that's typical for a new author. So for me, I don't mind giving this story a 5-star rating.
story development slow. I think he has been stuck on 11 years old for a while now. like, come on, get in trouble enough that you gota go rescue liana. or liana gets taken unless he shows his true self. forced to go school. something.
It’s worth reading.The story is good, and I like how the author writes. It's easy to understand, and the character interactions are engaging.The story flows well, keeping me invested in reading.Definitely worth my time reading this! Keep up the good work🥰
After reading this story up to chapter 72, all I can say is that it’s good. The flow of the story is easy to understand, and the main character is refreshing. The dialogue is also well done. This is my favorite book so far. Keep up the good work, and I hope this book continues to be as enjoyable 😘😘
I love it,the opening and the current flow of chapter.I was hoping to read more of this.Keep up good work,author.