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Basically MC's log. Barely any story happening just what MC did on the day. It's also a bummer that he was piggybacking the canon gang during the Hunter exams.
I can't say that it's a great novel, in the way of writing and what is written, but as the Lord taught me, "take one step at a time".....................
Very neat concept but it is written really badly. The chapter are like just 3 mega paragraphs and it is all just describing what is happening from the perspective of the MC. If the author wants to remake this then they should create actual dialogue as well as slow down pace a little. We don’t know anything about the MC we are just told he is a genius and can do anything and learn anything really well. Also they kind of just warp the power system a little bit to fit their needs and just have the MC create a bunch of Hatsus.
literally just a diary about mc journey.just recap of what he has done so far. at chapter 8 atm.
Great potential 👍 and has the potential of a top tier HXH fanfic. The concept is one of the greatest HXH concepts to start with in a fanfic , the man is the secret child of beyond netero and the 10th prince of the kaken empire and half brother to the terror sandwich 🥪 himself , as child of beyond netero he’s born with nen + once he finishes the anime timeline he gets his own Nen beast ( stand ) via the urn ⚱️ which could make the succession war in this fanfic more wild than it already is So by the end of this he can legitimately be a king of V5/V6 nation , the chairman of the hunter association and beyonds successor if he were to die somehow 😉 And he could be one of the best Nen user in the history of humanity and all this is before he gets to the Dark continent … So much hype and great potential so I hope this keeps going till the end .
Basically MC's log. Barely any story happening just what MC did on the day. It's also a bummer that he was piggybacking the canon gang during the Hunter exams.
I can't say that it's a great novel, in the way of writing and what is written, but as the Lord taught me, "take one step at a time".....................
Very neat concept but it is written really badly. The chapter are like just 3 mega paragraphs and it is all just describing what is happening from the perspective of the MC. If the author wants to remake this then they should create actual dialogue as well as slow down pace a little. We don’t know anything about the MC we are just told he is a genius and can do anything and learn anything really well. Also they kind of just warp the power system a little bit to fit their needs and just have the MC create a bunch of Hatsus.
literally just a diary about mc journey.just recap of what he has done so far. at chapter 8 atm.
Great potential 👍 and has the potential of a top tier HXH fanfic. The concept is one of the greatest HXH concepts to start with in a fanfic , the man is the secret child of beyond netero and the 10th prince of the kaken empire and half brother to the terror sandwich 🥪 himself , as child of beyond netero he’s born with nen + once he finishes the anime timeline he gets his own Nen beast ( stand ) via the urn ⚱️ which could make the succession war in this fanfic more wild than it already is So by the end of this he can legitimately be a king of V5/V6 nation , the chairman of the hunter association and beyonds successor if he were to die somehow 😉 And he could be one of the best Nen user in the history of humanity and all this is before he gets to the Dark continent … So much hype and great potential so I hope this keeps going till the end .
nice