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La historia es buena, mc no es Op, pero tiene el potencial para serlo, mc no parece un idiota obsesionado, como muchos mc chinos, y hasta tiene una relación decente con Aizen, que no se basa en manipulaciones y mentiras, ambos simplemente se llevan bien a su manera,con algunas amenazas aquí y allá, dónde cualquier cosa puede pasar, Lo recomiendo, léanlo.
i think i read this one somewhere, in patreon, but yours are much more better translation, becos the i read use a really long name of zanpakutou something like tenji no something no something, and the mc name is Chinese,
is it harem or not and who is his love interest ....................................................................................................................................................................
~~ As of Chapter 152 ~~ I’ve really enjoyed the story so far! The writing quality is pretty solid. There are a few minor errors here and there, but I can always understand what the author’s trying to say, and that’s what matters to me. So, writing quality gets a 5/5 from me. The story’s development is really well paced. There haven’t been any big frustrating or logic breaking moments just to push the plot forward, which I appreciate. Another easy 5/5 for this. Now, the character design is where this novel really shines, in my opinion. It’s not just the MC, every character has their own unique personality and vibe. It’s not a bunch of cookie cutter interactions, which keeps things fresh. I also love how the MC’s abilities have a lot of potential but aren’t overpowered (yet). Instead, he relies on his intelligence and self awareness to manipulate situations to his advantage. But here’s the surprising plus point: his plans can fail. He’s not some perfect, untouchable MC, which makes him feel more real. Definitely a 5/5 for character design. Update stability? Well, I binge read up to Chapter 152 in one go, so no complaints there! Another 5/5. The world building is solid. The author clearly took inspiration from Bleach but added their own twists to make it feel fresh. While some major plotlines are similar, the way they unfold is different and interesting enough that it doesn’t feel like a direct copy paste. Overall, this has been a really enjoyable read for me. Sure, there are a few things I might have done differently (personal preference), but the results are still satisfying. Full marks, 5/5! ~~As of Chapter 152 ~~
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The mc has the pride to not kneel and beg for mercy but contradictally can’t stop the world walking all over him. If the end of the book doesn’t have everyone kissing his feet this truly is the biggest cuck beta mc I’ve read in a few years
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Haven't read it yet, but the synopsis really sold the story to me. Going to read it now.
Well it was pretty good, I read it until the end. As a bleach fanfic, this one is pretty good overall. For anyone who wonder if this already end or not, the answer is yes, this fanfic already ended at 841 chapter. Quite fresh in my opinion, cause this is the only fanfic that develop some interaction with Aizen (a bit of spoiler but yeah, MC and Aizen kinda have enemy ~ friend relationship).
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Hi reader's, please do drop a review if you caught up with the chapters. TIA! Btw, im only translating this and i do not own any right in the original work.
This novel translation is very good and the character interactions and personalities match the original series and it's enjoyable fanfic. As of Chapter 81 the MC hasn't fought any fight and there have been only one fight where he got injured severely one-sidedly. It's not that he couldn't fight but he didn't want to. As of current development it is emphasizing on character interactions and schemes so I don't expect this fic to be action packed. If you are a type to only like action packed stories you can skip this one but overall it's a good story.
Spoiler de révélation La historia es buena, mc no es Op, pero tiene el potencial para serlo, mc no parece un idiota obsesionado, como muchos mc chinos, y hasta tiene una relación decente con Aizen, que no se basa en manipulaciones y mentiras, ambos simplemente se llevan bien a su manera,con algunas amenazas aquí y allá, dónde cualquier cosa puede pasar, Lo recomiendo, léanlo.
i think i read this one somewhere, in patreon, but yours are much more better translation, becos the i read use a really long name of zanpakutou something like tenji no something no something, and the mc name is Chinese,
is it harem or not and who is his love interest ....................................................................................................................................................................
~~ As of Chapter 152 ~~ I’ve really enjoyed the story so far! The writing quality is pretty solid. There are a few minor errors here and there, but I can always understand what the author’s trying to say, and that’s what matters to me. So, writing quality gets a 5/5 from me. The story’s development is really well paced. There haven’t been any big frustrating or logic breaking moments just to push the plot forward, which I appreciate. Another easy 5/5 for this. Now, the character design is where this novel really shines, in my opinion. It’s not just the MC, every character has their own unique personality and vibe. It’s not a bunch of cookie cutter interactions, which keeps things fresh. I also love how the MC’s abilities have a lot of potential but aren’t overpowered (yet). Instead, he relies on his intelligence and self awareness to manipulate situations to his advantage. But here’s the surprising plus point: his plans can fail. He’s not some perfect, untouchable MC, which makes him feel more real. Definitely a 5/5 for character design. Update stability? Well, I binge read up to Chapter 152 in one go, so no complaints there! Another 5/5. The world building is solid. The author clearly took inspiration from Bleach but added their own twists to make it feel fresh. While some major plotlines are similar, the way they unfold is different and interesting enough that it doesn’t feel like a direct copy paste. Overall, this has been a really enjoyable read for me. Sure, there are a few things I might have done differently (personal preference), but the results are still satisfying. Full marks, 5/5! ~~As of Chapter 152 ~~
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The mc has the pride to not kneel and beg for mercy but contradictally can’t stop the world walking all over him. If the end of the book doesn’t have everyone kissing his feet this truly is the biggest cuck beta mc I’ve read in a few years
Looks good. Need more plz[img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud]
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Haven't read it yet, but the synopsis really sold the story to me. Going to read it now.
Well it was pretty good, I read it until the end. As a bleach fanfic, this one is pretty good overall. For anyone who wonder if this already end or not, the answer is yes, this fanfic already ended at 841 chapter. Quite fresh in my opinion, cause this is the only fanfic that develop some interaction with Aizen (a bit of spoiler but yeah, MC and Aizen kinda have enemy ~ friend relationship).
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Hi reader's, please do drop a review if you caught up with the chapters. TIA! Btw, im only translating this and i do not own any right in the original work.
This novel translation is very good and the character interactions and personalities match the original series and it's enjoyable fanfic. As of Chapter 81 the MC hasn't fought any fight and there have been only one fight where he got injured severely one-sidedly. It's not that he couldn't fight but he didn't want to. As of current development it is emphasizing on character interactions and schemes so I don't expect this fic to be action packed. If you are a type to only like action packed stories you can skip this one but overall it's a good story.
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