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Story was going nicely but everyone knowing rinnegan and ten tails is dumb asf and why he revealing everything like a bum go eat shit mc, MC is gayyy asf
Well... Not that bad ,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,., .,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,
I am the type of person who does not like the slow pattern in the development of the story And I do not like the abundance of narration that makes the mind rejoice in topics unrelated to the subject of the story Secondly, I do not like to go out of the main story style I hate being ridiculously overpowered by the forces of hostility so that the hero becomes, rather than his, in the plot
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Historia muy bien hecha, entretenida........,......,..........,.....,.......,........................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,...................................
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It is a good Naruto fanfic, but at the same time the plot feels so forced. There are various examples but I won't give out any spoilers.
really a very impressive story, I have never felt so excited reading one and the quality of the translation is truly the best I have seen, if it were not for seeing the introduction and reading that it is Chinese I would never have noticed it, impeccable work and an equally incredible story
I've read countless Naruto fanfics and this is definitely one of the best, excellent work by the author, 100% recommended! No harem, no cheating, no nonsense, the only thing I don't like is that the protagonist seems to lack purpose!
I understand that you are translating this story in the same chapter structure as it was written, but OMG, how it annoys me. The chapters are basically “he wanted to go somewhere so he stepped out of his house <end>. <new chapter> he crossed the street, greeted someone<end>….” and so on.
Great story so far, with a good quality of translation for the most part. I look forward to seeing where this goes.The only critique I might have, is when can we expect romance lol.
what a coincidence, how very convinient. thats the story so far, frankly if you have nothing else to read this fic is up for the task.
Pretty good fanfic, nice work...................................................................................................................
Overall a nice piece of fiction. However the chapters are rather short, cutting in the middle of a fight and such. And there are some mistakes here and there.
So far, at 33 chaps, the story is going pretty good, the characters are accurate, the conversation styles feel distinct enough and the writing quality is amazing. Although the protag seems to be one of those," I am not a saviour.", maybe it's because I have been reading too much of the same stuff but it is getting a bit old to me. At least as of yet, I don't have anything else to complain about. Very nice, Very good. 👌
After reading this fanfic, please consider leaving a review! I think many people skip over this story because it doesn't have enough reviews, even though it's genuinely a great read. I'd write one myself, but since it's my own fanfic, I wouldn't be the most unbiased reviewer. I would really appreciate your thoughts—thank you so much!
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Didn't expect much of the story and boy was I proven wrong. A solid update schedule and the maintenance of quality will surely make this a gem.
Hey guys! I’m super excited about this fanfic I’m translating—it’s such a cool, unique take on the Naruto world. The main character gets thrown into the middle of the Third Shinobi World War and has this intense, clever way of navigating the chaos, even “borrowing” an eye from Kakashi. It’s packed with action, wit, and all those gritty Uchiha vibes we love. Give it a shot, and if you like it, let me know what you think!
There's a site where this fanfic has further chapters. If you're considering continuing the translation let me know.
Spoiler de révélation Story was going nicely but everyone knowing rinnegan and ten tails is dumb asf and why he revealing everything like a bum go eat shit mc, MC is gayyy asf
Well... Not that bad ,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,., .,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,
I am the type of person who does not like the slow pattern in the development of the story And I do not like the abundance of narration that makes the mind rejoice in topics unrelated to the subject of the story Secondly, I do not like to go out of the main story style I hate being ridiculously overpowered by the forces of hostility so that the hero becomes, rather than his, in the plot
Spoiler de révélation Historia muy bien hecha, entretenida........,......,..........,.....,.......,........................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,................................... ....................,.....,...................................
Spoiler de révélation It is a good Naruto fanfic, but at the same time the plot feels so forced. There are various examples but I won't give out any spoilers.
really a very impressive story, I have never felt so excited reading one and the quality of the translation is truly the best I have seen, if it were not for seeing the introduction and reading that it is Chinese I would never have noticed it, impeccable work and an equally incredible story
I've read countless Naruto fanfics and this is definitely one of the best, excellent work by the author, 100% recommended! No harem, no cheating, no nonsense, the only thing I don't like is that the protagonist seems to lack purpose!
I understand that you are translating this story in the same chapter structure as it was written, but OMG, how it annoys me. The chapters are basically “he wanted to go somewhere so he stepped out of his house <end>. <new chapter> he crossed the street, greeted someone<end>….” and so on.
Great story so far, with a good quality of translation for the most part. I look forward to seeing where this goes.The only critique I might have, is when can we expect romance lol.
what a coincidence, how very convinient. thats the story so far, frankly if you have nothing else to read this fic is up for the task.
Pretty good fanfic, nice work...................................................................................................................
Overall a nice piece of fiction. However the chapters are rather short, cutting in the middle of a fight and such. And there are some mistakes here and there.
So far, at 33 chaps, the story is going pretty good, the characters are accurate, the conversation styles feel distinct enough and the writing quality is amazing. Although the protag seems to be one of those," I am not a saviour.", maybe it's because I have been reading too much of the same stuff but it is getting a bit old to me. At least as of yet, I don't have anything else to complain about. Very nice, Very good. 👌
After reading this fanfic, please consider leaving a review! I think many people skip over this story because it doesn't have enough reviews, even though it's genuinely a great read. I'd write one myself, but since it's my own fanfic, I wouldn't be the most unbiased reviewer. I would really appreciate your thoughts—thank you so much!
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Spoiler de révélation Didn't expect much of the story and boy was I proven wrong. A solid update schedule and the maintenance of quality will surely make this a gem.
Hey guys! I’m super excited about this fanfic I’m translating—it’s such a cool, unique take on the Naruto world. The main character gets thrown into the middle of the Third Shinobi World War and has this intense, clever way of navigating the chaos, even “borrowing” an eye from Kakashi. It’s packed with action, wit, and all those gritty Uchiha vibes we love. Give it a shot, and if you like it, let me know what you think!
There's a site where this fanfic has further chapters. If you're considering continuing the translation let me know.
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