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I like it! I'm a big fan of the "I just want to chill but my system won't let me" trope. It's a bit too much when he suddenly has a bunch of plans and a bunch of allies spread out. But at the same time, I quite like Karin's mother alive, so I'm happy. Overall It's a very interesting story, and while the translation has hiccups, it's still clearly good enough. Keep it up!
Good piece of content!!. Funny but also serious about something. I just don't know if the author will start adding serious part like danzo movement behind the scenes or the consequences of the things did by the main character. It would be best if author just keep it funny and the story follow the original, or you can just destroy the canon and create your own. Doing first will be easier and more in line with the story. 👍👍👍👍😁😁👌👌👌👌 Good luck!! looking forward to more chapters.🧐🧐🫵✍️✍️🤝👍
Not gonna lie, this is pretty hilarious if you ignore the grammatical mistakes. While it is sometimes hard(mtl) to read, the reader does get warned to turn off their brain. Just read it and decide for yourself. Keep going Author, cook!
I like it! I'm a big fan of the "I just want to chill but my system won't let me" trope. It's a bit too much when he suddenly has a bunch of plans and a bunch of allies spread out. But at the same time, I quite like Karin's mother alive, so I'm happy. Overall It's a very interesting story, and while the translation has hiccups, it's still clearly good enough. Keep it up!
Good piece of content!!. Funny but also serious about something. I just don't know if the author will start adding serious part like danzo movement behind the scenes or the consequences of the things did by the main character. It would be best if author just keep it funny and the story follow the original, or you can just destroy the canon and create your own. Doing first will be easier and more in line with the story. 👍👍👍👍😁😁👌👌👌👌 Good luck!! looking forward to more chapters.🧐🧐🫵✍️✍️🤝👍
Not gonna lie, this is pretty hilarious if you ignore the grammatical mistakes. While it is sometimes hard(mtl) to read, the reader does get warned to turn off their brain. Just read it and decide for yourself. Keep going Author, cook!