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is this original, if not pls share source link or raw name b/w nice plot and story 😁😁
damn already all the chaptee and craving more the mc personality was nice exceptnfor the enemies though some chapters are kinda short but overall nice work author
Enjoying it so far I think the mc ain’t evil enough though and the women falling in love so soon is stupid the author should change it. It’s good that mc forced it and took what he needed but this 1 time = love is quite stupid other than that quite interesting
I really enjoyed the story so far and hope you'll continue the good work author~~
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is this original, if not pls share source link or raw name b/w nice plot and story 😁😁
damn already all the chaptee and craving more the mc personality was nice exceptnfor the enemies though some chapters are kinda short but overall nice work author
Enjoying it so far I think the mc ain’t evil enough though and the women falling in love so soon is stupid the author should change it. It’s good that mc forced it and took what he needed but this 1 time = love is quite stupid other than that quite interesting
I really enjoyed the story so far and hope you'll continue the good work author~~
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