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Chapitre 30: Chapter 30: The Trials of the Heaven Gate

As Shubhu and his companions stepped through the massive archway of the Heaven Gate, an odd sensation washed over Shubhu. The moment his foot crossed the threshold, he felt a sharp, almost tangible pull in his chest, as if a part of him—his spiritual connection—was being severed. It was an unsettling feeling, like losing a thread that had held him together for as long as he could remember.

For a brief moment, Shubhu staggered, disoriented. His bond with his spirits—the voices that had guided him, advised him, and even protected him for so long—was gone. There was only silence now, the emptiness filling his mind where once their whispers had been constant. The feeling was alien and uncomfortable, but Shubhu forced himself to ignore it.

"What's wrong?" Tara asked, noticing the shift in Shubhu's demeanor.

Shubhu looked at her, his expression unreadable. "I... I don't know," he said slowly, trying to shake off the feeling. "Something's different here. But let's keep moving."

Kavi, who had been absorbed in his newfound powers, barely looked up. "Don't overthink it. We're here for a reason."

The strange emptiness gnawed at Shubhu, but he did his best to push it aside and focus on what lay ahead. The trials had already begun.

The First Trial: Controlling Power

The first chamber was an open, dimly lit space with towering stone pillars. In the center stood a massive statue, its hands raised in a defensive posture, one wielding a sword, the other a shield. As they entered, the statue's eyes began to glow, and a deep rumble shook the ground beneath them.

Without warning, the statue's sword swung down with incredible force, aimed directly at Shubhu. Instinctively, he raised his arm, but he wasn't quick enough. The sword clashed against an invisible barrier of energy, sending a shockwave through the room.

Kavi stepped forward, his hands glowing with the power of metal-bending. "I can take care of this. Just... give me a moment," he said, his voice steady but strained.

But the statue was relentless. The sword kept coming, faster now, and Shubhu knew that they couldn't just stand there waiting.

"Kavi, don't fight it head-on!" Shubhu shouted, his voice cutting through the tension. "Use the environment. Adapt."

Kavi's eyes narrowed in concentration. "Right."

He slammed his palms to the ground, bending the stone beneath him. The floor shifted, and large chunks of rock shot up to intercept the statue's attacks. The stone barrier held long enough for Kavi to advance, and with one quick motion, he sent a shard of rock flying, knocking the sword from the statue's hand.

But the statue wasn't finished. With a mechanical groan, it shifted, raising its shield to strike. Tara, always alert, saw it coming and sprang into action. She lunged forward, using her agility to dodge the shield's powerful swing. At the last moment, she grabbed the shield's edge and wrenched it from the statue's grip.

Now without its weapon, the statue froze, its glowing eyes dimming. The trial was over.

"That was too close," Kavi said, wiping sweat from his brow. "But I can feel it... this place is testing our strength. Not just physically, but mentally too."

Tara nodded, her gaze scanning the chamber. "We're not just battling these constructs. We're battling ourselves—our limitations, our fears."

Shubhu looked around, still unsettled by the loss of his connection to his spirits. He couldn't shake the feeling that something was watching them, something far greater than the trials themselves.

The Second Trial: Faith and Unity

The next room was vast, its ceiling lost in shadow. A strange, almost otherworldly glow emanated from the floor, illuminating the paths ahead. But as they ventured deeper, a sudden rumbling sound echoed from all directions, and massive stone walls began to rise, splitting the chamber into isolated sections.

As the walls closed in, a figure appeared before each of them—a spectral manifestation of their own fears and doubts.

For Shubhu, it was the figure of a powerful, glowing entity—the spirit that had once guided him, his mentor and protector. But now, the spirit's face was twisted in anger, its eyes burning with disappointment.

"Shubhu," the spirit said, its voice booming in the cavernous space, "You have failed your purpose. You think you can lead them? You are weak. Alone."

Shubhu staggered, his heart pounding in his chest. He felt the weight of the spirit's words, the doubt creeping in. Was it true? Was he really fit to lead this group? The burden of leadership was crushing him.

Meanwhile, Tara was facing a vision of her own—one of her lost family members, calling her to abandon the trials and return home, to safety. Kavi was confronted by his past, a vision of his old, more reckless self who had embraced his power without regard for the consequences.

"Shubhu, focus!" Tara's voice broke through his thoughts. She was already battling her vision, slashing at the phantom figure that loomed over her. Kavi, too, was breaking free from the grip of his past.

Shubhu's gaze flickered between his companions and the spirit before him. "I'm not alone," he whispered to himself. "We're not alone."

With that realization, the image of the spirit began to crack and fade, vanishing into the air. The walls that had divided them began to fall, and the path ahead cleared.

Tara, breathless but determined, met Shubhu's gaze. "We did it. Together."

Kavi smiled, though his expression remained serious. "This trial wasn't just about fighting monsters or breaking through barriers. It was about trusting each other, trusting ourselves."

Shubhu, though still uneasy, nodded. The trial had tested their bond, and though it had been painful, it had strengthened them. But he couldn't shake the feeling that there was something more waiting for them.

The Third Trial: The Silence Within

They stepped into the final chamber, a vast, icy expanse. The temperature dropped immediately, and the silence was absolute. There were no sounds of wind, no echoes of their footsteps—just an overwhelming, oppressive stillness.

"The air here feels... thick," Kavi murmured, looking around nervously.

Tara's eyes scanned the surroundings. "This place is different. It's like... it's inside our heads."

Shubhu felt it too. The longer they stood there, the more the weight of the silence pressed down on them. It was as though their very thoughts were being suffocated.

And then, the trial began.

The space around them seemed to stretch and warp, pulling them in different directions. Visions of their greatest fears flashed before their eyes. Shubhu saw himself alone, his friends gone, facing insurmountable odds. Kavi saw his powers spiraling out of control, while Tara was trapped in a cage of her own making.

It was clear now—this trial was not one of strength, but of inner peace. They had to find the silence within themselves, the stillness that would allow them to push through the chaos of their minds.

Shubhu closed his eyes and breathed deeply, focusing on his center. It was hard, but he slowly began to regain control of his thoughts. He reached out, feeling the presence of Tara and Kavi nearby, their energy like a guiding light through the storm of illusions.

"You have to let go," Tara's voice echoed in his mind. "Release your doubts. Trust your strength."

Slowly, the cold began to lift. The oppressive silence faded, and the air became lighter. When Shubhu opened his eyes, the chamber was no longer a desolate ice field but a serene, peaceful place bathed in warm light.

Conclusion:

As the final trial ended, Shubhu felt something change within him. He still didn't have the spirits' guidance, but he no longer needed them. His connection with Tara and Kavi had become his new strength. They had passed the trials together, and that unity was more powerful than anything he had ever known.

But there was still something lurking in the shadows, something beyond the trials. And they were about to face it.


L’AVIS DES CRÉATEURS
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As the author, I find this chapter essential in showing the growth of Shubhu and his companions. The severing of Shubhu’s bond with his spirits marks a pivotal moment in his journey. It's unsettling for him, but it forces him to rely on his inner strength rather than external guidance, signaling his evolution as a leader.

The trials are not just physical tests but emotional and mental challenges that force the group to confront their fears, doubts, and inner turmoil. The first trial emphasizes control over power, Kavi’s growth, and teamwork. The second trial focuses on trust and unity, pushing the characters to face their deepest fears and grow stronger together. The third trial is about finding inner peace amidst chaos, symbolizing the mental clarity needed to continue their journey.

What I find most compelling is that these trials show that true growth doesn’t come from defeating monsters but from understanding who you are and learning to rely on each other. Shubhu, especially, is discovering that his inner strength is just as powerful as any external force, and the bond with his companions is key to overcoming the challenges ahead.

This chapter sets the stage for the characters' deeper transformation, and I’m excited to see how they will face even greater trials as they continue their journey through the Heaven Gate.

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