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I haven't seen to many elden ring fics so far. I can't wait to see where this goes......................................................................
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Great novel keep updating ⭐️❤️ I hope you don't drop it ……………………………… …………………………. ……………………… ……………….. ………….. …….… ….. ..
5 star becouse its elden ring please dont drop just keep going thx[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
it's a p*rnfic, that basically sums it up, the story revolves around the mc sleeping around and nothing else, everyone is one dimensional and everything just lines up perfectly for the mc to just sleep with any girl he runs into, heck even in-game lore has been changed to accommodate this, like how apparently he can turn any "pure" woman into a maiden by basically sleeping with her, or how he can strengthen himself with runes by having s*x with his maiden, I feel so stupid for expecting anything else from it
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The story is convoluted and forced and the character interactions are painful to read, the only halfway decent parts of this fic are the lemons and even they are average at best. Don't waste your time with this, just go read Maidenless No Longer, it's 1000X better.
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I really enjoy the way time is fractured, and Vyke as the main character, especially his maidenless status. However, I’m disappointed by the lack of grace and images.
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No comments hehehe I'm really enjoying this novel good work . . . . .... ....................................................................
You had me at the female miquela part. I always hated that miquella was for some reason a damn femboy.
I don't understand some stuff. Like what army can you get in elden ring? There is no sane people,only handful of npc.Most of mobs got insane. Like hollows from souls series. So what people do you find,and why do you need castle when you literally need to grind the whole world? Weird choice,but whatever. Ghostflames or bootleg shadow monarch is even more weird . The dude literally stand on corpse,and like "i could summon some weird flame,and it's makes me stronger!" What? I mean,the design if fine,but where this comes from,how would he know how to use it... whatever. The leveling is weird too. After first time,he literally doesn't collect any more runes and doesn't get anything... Why? ... Whatever. Well, that's pretty much sums it up. Whatever.
I haven't seen to many elden ring fics so far. I can't wait to see where this goes......................................................................
Quite good. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
fkin amazing..................................................................................................................................................................................
Great novel keep updating ⭐️❤️ I hope you don't drop it ……………………………… …………………………. ……………………… ……………….. ………….. …….… ….. ..
5 star becouse its elden ring please dont drop just keep going thx[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
it's a p*rnfic, that basically sums it up, the story revolves around the mc sleeping around and nothing else, everyone is one dimensional and everything just lines up perfectly for the mc to just sleep with any girl he runs into, heck even in-game lore has been changed to accommodate this, like how apparently he can turn any "pure" woman into a maiden by basically sleeping with her, or how he can strengthen himself with runes by having s*x with his maiden, I feel so stupid for expecting anything else from it
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The story is convoluted and forced and the character interactions are painful to read, the only halfway decent parts of this fic are the lemons and even they are average at best. Don't waste your time with this, just go read Maidenless No Longer, it's 1000X better.
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I really enjoy the way time is fractured, and Vyke as the main character, especially his maidenless status. However, I’m disappointed by the lack of grace and images.
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No comments hehehe I'm really enjoying this novel good work . . . . .... ....................................................................
You had me at the female miquela part. I always hated that miquella was for some reason a damn femboy.
I don't understand some stuff. Like what army can you get in elden ring? There is no sane people,only handful of npc.Most of mobs got insane. Like hollows from souls series. So what people do you find,and why do you need castle when you literally need to grind the whole world? Weird choice,but whatever. Ghostflames or bootleg shadow monarch is even more weird . The dude literally stand on corpse,and like "i could summon some weird flame,and it's makes me stronger!" What? I mean,the design if fine,but where this comes from,how would he know how to use it... whatever. The leveling is weird too. After first time,he literally doesn't collect any more runes and doesn't get anything... Why? ... Whatever. Well, that's pretty much sums it up. Whatever.