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brooo this shit is lowkey funny. idk if they are doing it on purpose but, they keep switching names or using the same name for multiple people in one conversation
The story isn't so bad, but the MC's name is "Itsu" in the description, "Shi" in the first chapter, then "Clan" in the second. I think that should be enough explanation. Apart from these frequent errors, the quality is good for something machine translated.
After a long time ive read such a nice fanfic . Honestly this book is awesome . The story progression , power progression everything is super good. The translation itself however needs some work . Its way better than any mtl considering this translation is also an mtl, but it still doesn’t translate the names properly so it creates confusion . Aside from the name the translation is fine. The story is far superior to other fanfic , the only problem i have is it drags fight scenes for too long. Other than that, top tier fanfic.
brooo this shit is lowkey funny. idk if they are doing it on purpose but, they keep switching names or using the same name for multiple people in one conversation
The story isn't so bad, but the MC's name is "Itsu" in the description, "Shi" in the first chapter, then "Clan" in the second. I think that should be enough explanation. Apart from these frequent errors, the quality is good for something machine translated.
After a long time ive read such a nice fanfic . Honestly this book is awesome . The story progression , power progression everything is super good. The translation itself however needs some work . Its way better than any mtl considering this translation is also an mtl, but it still doesn’t translate the names properly so it creates confusion . Aside from the name the translation is fine. The story is far superior to other fanfic , the only problem i have is it drags fight scenes for too long. Other than that, top tier fanfic.