Chapitre 20: Notice
After rethinking it for a while, I decided to rewrite this novel. Due to the fact that I literally had no plan for this think and just started writing whatever came into my mind (honestly surprised how good this novel did) I hit a block for chapter 20.
Most of the events in this one will go to the new one, as well as new things happening in the novel. Since my writing has also improved I think it'll be easier to read. Here's a sample
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Kyled falls out of a portal from the sky and lands on the grass. He groans in pain and lays in the floor for a few seconds then tries to get up.
As he tries to get up a wooden chest falls out of the portal and lands straight on his back, making him collapse and meet the floor once again, groaning in pain.
"Bastard…"
—Earlier—
Klyde's enters sleek, modern room. The room had white walls and a birch floor. Three couches surround a table at the center which had holographic screens and objects above it.
A man wearing grey futuristic armour was leaning against the wall. He was dark skinned and his hair was black with blue tips. His helmet was on the floor next to him, as well as his buster sword.
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So yeah, I'd really appreciate if you read the new version. I don't want to, it's understandable.
— Un nouveau chapitre arrive bientôt — Écrire un avis
État de l’alimentation hebdomadaire
-- Classement
Power Stone 
-- Power
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