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Well a story with great potential but in great need of edit in errors in grammar. As for other things I can't ask for much with just 3 chapters so I just want to see how strong 15 years old Garp is
Well a story with great potential but in great need of edit in errors in grammar. As for other things I can't ask for much with just 3 chapters so I just want to see how strong 15 years old Garp is