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i've read 3 chapter. and i can say it looks interesting will be back after i read more
a bit hard to understand coz of pronoun being him and her and he and she coz not native
it is a very good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it
the basic idea seems appealing but got distracted by grammatical errors and confusing phrases... the English must be revised. keep it going dear Author!
Interesting. Keep writing may inspiration always find you and an omelette in your pocket 😂
i've read 3 chapter. and i can say it looks interesting will be back after i read more
a bit hard to understand coz of pronoun being him and her and he and she coz not native
it is a very good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it
the basic idea seems appealing but got distracted by grammatical errors and confusing phrases... the English must be revised. keep it going dear Author!
Interesting. Keep writing may inspiration always find you and an omelette in your pocket 😂
Good story. Captivated from the first few chapters.