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Perfect it's perfect. A very beautiful and wonderful story. The writing style is good and the characters are good. I hope it continues.♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
This Fanfic is by far one of the best i've read in a long while, id say its almost as good as "The Wind Calamity" by Devil_Hex. I cant say i didn't had my doubts at the start, i hate fanfic's with concepts such as systems or anything related to it, after all, humans are not computers. However i bore with it and was astonished on how someone can write so well on their very first fanfic. The fanfic does not include a gaming system, thank god, however when the MC gets reincarnated he does get benefits that does not ruin the story but instead make it better, even tho i had my doubts. Writing quality is speak, better than 90% of other fanfics i've read so far, with only a few spelling mistakes here and their. Story development is absolutely peak and thats not even mentioning character development, its so astonishing on how the author discribes the characters feelings and emotions while exploring MC's thought process. However i would suggest making it clear when the characters are talking and thinking, and highlighting when a jutsu is casted ( not literary), Overall minor things. This Fanfic has a huge amount of potential and if honed can be distinguished among the rest, good luck.
Fire book. One of the best naruto fanfictions I've ever read. Just wish it would update more frequently.
Amazing fanfic for everyone the only problem is the update stability otherwise 10/10
This was sooo good. I was looking forward to where this went. But i have a rule if 1 month goes by without update i drop the novel. hope u come back to update this again.
I think It would be cool if he created a kekkei genkai. like nightmare release he could make chakra constucs. of nightmares and demons like flesh crawling up someone's legs. zombies running at them. I would be made using yin and wind. like solid illustrations. it would be like sudo reality manipulation
Literally speechless, just read it to find out how magnificent this book is. I love it and I can’t wait for more chapters to come. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I found this really enjoyable to read. I like the training and slice of life moments. The writing quality is really well written. I don't recall ever seeing any errors.
a gem fan fic a real peak Naruto fanfic here[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]
Story - Peak Plot - Peak characters - peak progression - peak This is definetely one of the best naruto fanfics out there. The only issue I have with this is the chapter release rate. Its too damn slow. Author, please improve on that. Good work with this novel. I greatly enjoyed reading this.
Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! .Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! .Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! .
great novel....................................................... now when is next ch coming out bro......................................................
First of all, I have to say that this is one of the best fics I have ever read. It is clear that the story has a direction, the character semms real which shows when he makes mistakes and develops by making sure he won't repeat them. The characters overall show their different personalities, not just with words but their actions as well that change according to the situation they are in. Overall it's an amazing story with only one disadvantage. The random updates.(Which I can overlook since it is clear that real efford is put into writing each individual chapter.)
🙋🏻♀️peeps, this is such a great fan-fix, it’s well grounded (albeit the op ish abilities) but the homeliness and relationship building is so welcome. 🙏🏼 if only chapters could b increased, though I’m fine waiting for for batches at a time. 🙉 can’t wait for more , ✌️ out
I really like this book but the updating speed is abismal. Love the story though. I can’t wait for more. Please don’t drop.
Once in a while masterpiece. Was hesitant at first, and even delayed reading it. But, when I started, it immediately got me hooked. Keep up the awesome work, and please continue it. Completing it would be amazing too, but considering the potential it has, less than a hundred chapters is an injustice to it. 🖤
Update stability rn is trash... apart from that the story is good .............................................................................................................................
I have fallen in love with the characters and the dialog especially. Please for all the things you believe in, don't drop this!
Hmm... I'll be direct because overall I enjoyed the book. The MC is a little genius who wants to graduate early in Naruto. That already says a lot for those who have read many Naruto fanfics. At the age of 5, the MC had already created several useful ninjutsus for war, acted as the center of attention, defeating the genius Uchiha Shisui on the first day of school, defeating an Uchiha within the Uchiha clan, having the support of the elders, who are shocked by several jutsus created by the MC and his unmatched talent. Well... I could swallow it if that was all, but he's going to jump through the classes, showing his genius more and more... To be fair, that's not so bad, but when I started reading a Yamanaka story, I expected an intelligent MC growing up little by little, not the typical Chinese trope of a genius MC who slaps you in the face. not even the trope of MC who creates Pizza and Hamburger in the Eastern world, in addition to "creating" Western instruments and etc... that's it, you can read it if it interests you.
Spoiler de révélation
The story is extremely boring, with the protagonist being at Jōnin level as a 4-year-old... The writing quality is decent, but everything else falls flat. This story is only recommended for those who don't mind completely mindless content.
I'm so glad I found this story. It's made my day plus this story is exactly what I've been looking for. I love the characters and the plot. I can't wait for the next chapter!
It's not Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius it's make the Yamanaka clan great again It's not Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius it's make the Yamanaka clan great again
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Mad][img=golden ticket][img=Your move][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Moneybags][img=Your move][img=Shocked][img=Moneybags]
Expressing feeling type of scene is very western like. doesn't suit naruto world. other wise, perfect fanfiction so far !
The best fic I've read this month [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Perfect it's perfect. A very beautiful and wonderful story. The writing style is good and the characters are good. I hope it continues.♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
This Fanfic is by far one of the best i've read in a long while, id say its almost as good as "The Wind Calamity" by Devil_Hex. I cant say i didn't had my doubts at the start, i hate fanfic's with concepts such as systems or anything related to it, after all, humans are not computers. However i bore with it and was astonished on how someone can write so well on their very first fanfic. The fanfic does not include a gaming system, thank god, however when the MC gets reincarnated he does get benefits that does not ruin the story but instead make it better, even tho i had my doubts. Writing quality is speak, better than 90% of other fanfics i've read so far, with only a few spelling mistakes here and their. Story development is absolutely peak and thats not even mentioning character development, its so astonishing on how the author discribes the characters feelings and emotions while exploring MC's thought process. However i would suggest making it clear when the characters are talking and thinking, and highlighting when a jutsu is casted ( not literary), Overall minor things. This Fanfic has a huge amount of potential and if honed can be distinguished among the rest, good luck.
Fire book. One of the best naruto fanfictions I've ever read. Just wish it would update more frequently.
Amazing fanfic for everyone the only problem is the update stability otherwise 10/10
This was sooo good. I was looking forward to where this went. But i have a rule if 1 month goes by without update i drop the novel. hope u come back to update this again.
I think It would be cool if he created a kekkei genkai. like nightmare release he could make chakra constucs. of nightmares and demons like flesh crawling up someone's legs. zombies running at them. I would be made using yin and wind. like solid illustrations. it would be like sudo reality manipulation
Literally speechless, just read it to find out how magnificent this book is. I love it and I can’t wait for more chapters to come. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I found this really enjoyable to read. I like the training and slice of life moments. The writing quality is really well written. I don't recall ever seeing any errors.
a gem fan fic a real peak Naruto fanfic here[img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]
Story - Peak Plot - Peak characters - peak progression - peak This is definetely one of the best naruto fanfics out there. The only issue I have with this is the chapter release rate. Its too damn slow. Author, please improve on that. Good work with this novel. I greatly enjoyed reading this.
Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! .Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! .Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! Tanks! .
great novel....................................................... now when is next ch coming out bro......................................................
First of all, I have to say that this is one of the best fics I have ever read. It is clear that the story has a direction, the character semms real which shows when he makes mistakes and develops by making sure he won't repeat them. The characters overall show their different personalities, not just with words but their actions as well that change according to the situation they are in. Overall it's an amazing story with only one disadvantage. The random updates.(Which I can overlook since it is clear that real efford is put into writing each individual chapter.)
🙋🏻♀️peeps, this is such a great fan-fix, it’s well grounded (albeit the op ish abilities) but the homeliness and relationship building is so welcome. 🙏🏼 if only chapters could b increased, though I’m fine waiting for for batches at a time. 🙉 can’t wait for more , ✌️ out
I really like this book but the updating speed is abismal. Love the story though. I can’t wait for more. Please don’t drop.
Once in a while masterpiece. Was hesitant at first, and even delayed reading it. But, when I started, it immediately got me hooked. Keep up the awesome work, and please continue it. Completing it would be amazing too, but considering the potential it has, less than a hundred chapters is an injustice to it. 🖤
Update stability rn is trash... apart from that the story is good .............................................................................................................................
I have fallen in love with the characters and the dialog especially. Please for all the things you believe in, don't drop this!
Hmm... I'll be direct because overall I enjoyed the book. The MC is a little genius who wants to graduate early in Naruto. That already says a lot for those who have read many Naruto fanfics. At the age of 5, the MC had already created several useful ninjutsus for war, acted as the center of attention, defeating the genius Uchiha Shisui on the first day of school, defeating an Uchiha within the Uchiha clan, having the support of the elders, who are shocked by several jutsus created by the MC and his unmatched talent. Well... I could swallow it if that was all, but he's going to jump through the classes, showing his genius more and more... To be fair, that's not so bad, but when I started reading a Yamanaka story, I expected an intelligent MC growing up little by little, not the typical Chinese trope of a genius MC who slaps you in the face. not even the trope of MC who creates Pizza and Hamburger in the Eastern world, in addition to "creating" Western instruments and etc... that's it, you can read it if it interests you.
Spoiler de révélation The story is extremely boring, with the protagonist being at Jōnin level as a 4-year-old... The writing quality is decent, but everything else falls flat. This story is only recommended for those who don't mind completely mindless content.
I'm so glad I found this story. It's made my day plus this story is exactly what I've been looking for. I love the characters and the plot. I can't wait for the next chapter!
It's not Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius it's make the Yamanaka clan great again It's not Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius it's make the Yamanaka clan great again
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Mad][img=golden ticket][img=Your move][img=Shocked][img=Shocked][img=Moneybags][img=Your move][img=Shocked][img=Moneybags]
Expressing feeling type of scene is very western like. doesn't suit naruto world. other wise, perfect fanfiction so far !
The best fic I've read this month [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]