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I've read a few more chapters, the fanfic is still fresh but so far it's very good, keep it up, I recommend you don't force the breakup of the relationship between Ageon and Rhaenyra like it happens in many fanfics for the Dance of the Dragons, I hope Ageon becomes king of the seven kingdoms P.S. I hope he will be a second conqueror;)
So far, this novel is a great work. The Author has good writing and is also coherent. Furthermore, it doesn't rush future events and gives us chapters with lots of detail. In addition to a powerful MC, I really like an intelligent and insightful MC, even more so in a FANFIC like this. In short, a great job that the Author is doing so far. Just one criticism. It would be about updates to the novel, as the Author is mysteriously inactive for a while, as well as not having an update schedule. However, this is a FANFIC and I understand that the Author can do whatever he wants, it is not his obligation to write, so I even suggest one thing. If the Author is discouraged, they can easily create a Patreon to earn income and increase their interest in writing. If it was an affordable price, I think everyone would join, because the novel is really good. However, I would first create a good audience for this, as the novel currently only has a few chapters, it wouldn't be very good. I believe that when the work is a little more progressed, it would be possible to create a Patreon. Finally, I hope the Author doesn't abandon the work, as it is a great FANFIC.
I've read a few more chapters, the fanfic is still fresh but so far it's very good, keep it up, I recommend you don't force the breakup of the relationship between Ageon and Rhaenyra like it happens in many fanfics for the Dance of the Dragons, I hope Ageon becomes king of the seven kingdoms P.S. I hope he will be a second conqueror;)
So far, this novel is a great work. The Author has good writing and is also coherent. Furthermore, it doesn't rush future events and gives us chapters with lots of detail. In addition to a powerful MC, I really like an intelligent and insightful MC, even more so in a FANFIC like this. In short, a great job that the Author is doing so far. Just one criticism. It would be about updates to the novel, as the Author is mysteriously inactive for a while, as well as not having an update schedule. However, this is a FANFIC and I understand that the Author can do whatever he wants, it is not his obligation to write, so I even suggest one thing. If the Author is discouraged, they can easily create a Patreon to earn income and increase their interest in writing. If it was an affordable price, I think everyone would join, because the novel is really good. However, I would first create a good audience for this, as the novel currently only has a few chapters, it wouldn't be very good. I believe that when the work is a little more progressed, it would be possible to create a Patreon. Finally, I hope the Author doesn't abandon the work, as it is a great FANFIC.