3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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The story is overall good and good world background but it's uploading time is not fixed ....i remember it was uploaded in every Thursday but sometimes it comes little late ....mmm but okay i can wait ....can't wait for other chapters
The strory was actually good ngl, the writing, the way the characters are described are all great. The writing style is impressive, and the characters feel real. The story's engaging, with well-crafted characters and vivid descriptions. However, it sometimes lacks depth in plot and pacing could be tighter.
The story is overall good and good world background but it's uploading time is not fixed ....i remember it was uploaded in every Thursday but sometimes it comes little late ....mmm but okay i can wait ....can't wait for other chapters
The strory was actually good ngl, the writing, the way the characters are described are all great. The writing style is impressive, and the characters feel real. The story's engaging, with well-crafted characters and vivid descriptions. However, it sometimes lacks depth in plot and pacing could be tighter.
the story is going good bro , will waited for next Chapter