23Critiques
4.88
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
Desde el principio remarca que tiene una defensa natural muy fuerte al punto de que con 8 años ni los reyes marino podían hacerle daño.... Luego llego lo que para mí es la estupidez más grande del fanfic encontró una fruta del diablo y así sin saber en absoluto si era una buena fruta o la pero basura que exista la come..... Resultando en una fruta inventada del autor, ojo no es eso lo que me molesta parece una buena fruta pero si te soy sincero estoy arto de basura de frutas del diablo nunca pude leer un buen fanfic con un guerrero puro sin fruta, sinceramente ya me dan asco todos los fanfic de One Piece con la misma basura una y otra vez así que chau. Seguro es buen fanfic denle una oportunidad una que yo no dare
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I just finished till chapter 121 this is definitely one of the best One Piece fic out there also when will mc gonna have children with bigmom?
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HARÉM HARÉM HARÉM HARÉM
Esta novela es una de las mejores fanfic de One Piece que he leído y no solo lo digo porque el MC es un mestizo entre lunarian y gigante con un físico y talento monstruoso jajaja sino porque la historia se desarrolla en la época de Rocks cuando todos los grandes personajes estaban en su juventud y con grandes batallas, y para ser honesto me interesa más esta época mucho más que la de luffy ya que hay demasiadas de él, hasta el momento el desarrollo personal del MC es genial junto con sus metas y el desarrollo de sus compañeros y sus fuerzas, se agradece mucho la calidad de la gramática y traducción ya que hace más fluida la lectura 👌🏻 realmente recomiendo esta novela
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very interesting ..................................................................................................................................
It's a pretty good One Piece fic, with plenty of novel ideas (Nobody can take that same reincarnation + system trope anymore). We're early in the story but I'm hyped to see where it's going.
Not bad! [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] Here a present! #288276
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Speechless][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Nice. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...
can you let him have shaky rip off as his wife or just one wife going with linin ? she is info broker right? can help him just this 2 i dont remmber good waifu from rock d xbac time good story btw keep going
THIS IS GOLD WERE IS THE RAW .I LOVE THIS NOVEL..THEIR NO NOVEL ABOUT BIG MOM ONLY DUMB NOVLES,, THIS IS GOLD BECAUSE WE SEE BIG MOM IN A NEW LIGHT AND ROMANCE STORY ABOUT HER..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT THIS NOVE; IS AWESOME STOYR GOLD..those one-pieces hate women because women are trash in one-pieces or sexist.
[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
A story about El, who was reincarnated as a half-Lunarian, half-Giant child. He grows stronger and aims to become the King of the World. A Harem FF, Charlotte Linlin is the Main. Here's the Cover pic!
Desde el principio remarca que tiene una defensa natural muy fuerte al punto de que con 8 años ni los reyes marino podían hacerle daño.... Luego llego lo que para mí es la estupidez más grande del fanfic encontró una fruta del diablo y así sin saber en absoluto si era una buena fruta o la pero basura que exista la come..... Resultando en una fruta inventada del autor, ojo no es eso lo que me molesta parece una buena fruta pero si te soy sincero estoy arto de basura de frutas del diablo nunca pude leer un buen fanfic con un guerrero puro sin fruta, sinceramente ya me dan asco todos los fanfic de One Piece con la misma basura una y otra vez así que chau. Seguro es buen fanfic denle una oportunidad una que yo no dare
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I just finished till chapter 121 this is definitely one of the best One Piece fic out there also when will mc gonna have children with bigmom?
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HARÉM HARÉM HARÉM HARÉM
Esta novela es una de las mejores fanfic de One Piece que he leído y no solo lo digo porque el MC es un mestizo entre lunarian y gigante con un físico y talento monstruoso jajaja sino porque la historia se desarrolla en la época de Rocks cuando todos los grandes personajes estaban en su juventud y con grandes batallas, y para ser honesto me interesa más esta época mucho más que la de luffy ya que hay demasiadas de él, hasta el momento el desarrollo personal del MC es genial junto con sus metas y el desarrollo de sus compañeros y sus fuerzas, se agradece mucho la calidad de la gramática y traducción ya que hace más fluida la lectura 👌🏻 realmente recomiendo esta novela
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very interesting ..................................................................................................................................
It's a pretty good One Piece fic, with plenty of novel ideas (Nobody can take that same reincarnation + system trope anymore). We're early in the story but I'm hyped to see where it's going.
Not bad! [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] [img=strong] Here a present! #288276
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Speechless][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Nice. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...
can you let him have shaky rip off as his wife or just one wife going with linin ? she is info broker right? can help him just this 2 i dont remmber good waifu from rock d xbac time good story btw keep going
THIS IS GOLD WERE IS THE RAW .I LOVE THIS NOVEL..THEIR NO NOVEL ABOUT BIG MOM ONLY DUMB NOVLES,, THIS IS GOLD BECAUSE WE SEE BIG MOM IN A NEW LIGHT AND ROMANCE STORY ABOUT HER..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT THIS NOVE; IS AWESOME STOYR GOLD..those one-pieces hate women because women are trash in one-pieces or sexist.
[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
A story about El, who was reincarnated as a half-Lunarian, half-Giant child. He grows stronger and aims to become the King of the World. A Harem FF, Charlotte Linlin is the Main. Here's the Cover pic!