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so far its pretty interesting and it definitely has potential. don't drop it and keep cooking...............................................
At first, the story was a bit confusing. But as the story progresses, it becomes very interesting and amazing, to say the least. Please, Noir-Sama, continue the story, and congrats for getting a contract!
This novel is written so beautifully, making its easy for us to get lost in the story. The updates are always on time as well. The story keeps getting better and better. The characters feel real and relatable and the background story is engaging! Overall, everything about this novel is perfect! ⭐
We need more!! This novel has great potential! Please update author-nim! [img=Loving it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
This book is great from the first and last chapter, It does not explain anything so much. like, not using in-depth sentences to every paragraph, making it not so boring to read at all. Also the cliffhanger and mystery is also well planned, need more chapter😊
It’s a great mysterious and compelling story. I can’t wait to read more. I hope you will mass publish at least 5 chapters.
THERE WAS A LITTLE SMILE ON MY FACE WHEN I READ IT AND COMPLETED IT KEEP IT UP MY POOKIE 🎀💗
I really liked the genre the author adapted. Putting high hopes in this new novel!! yippee! 🌸 a lil typos though but, we can definitely overlook it!!! All the best Author! FEED US MORE!!
i like the mysteries in it and the way he lost his memories is damn good. i want to see him fighting and i want to know who is his parents upload NEW CHAPTERS FAST FAST
I KNEW YOU COULD DO ITT, CANT WAIT TO READ MOREEEEE!!! :D 🎉🎉✨️✨️🎉🎉🎉✨️✨️✨️🎉🎉✨️🎉 And Fr it was great, I enjoyed reading it and it actually also made my day. Just knowing that you put one of your stories on here! Congratulations!!!! ~Vex_MoonLight
you did great job and I like the type where mc is forgotten his memories and that gurl is his memories just makes is more interesting waiting for more chapters so make it quoickly have a great day
wow man you write so well and this story is very good you should be a writter full support from my side ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
SPECTACULAR MISTER BILLI!!! I love it!! The way you wrote it is just so good and impressive. I can literally imagine all the situation. It's incredible. Write more about it!! I wanna read it so bad.
so far its pretty interesting and it definitely has potential. don't drop it and keep cooking...............................................
At first, the story was a bit confusing. But as the story progresses, it becomes very interesting and amazing, to say the least. Please, Noir-Sama, continue the story, and congrats for getting a contract!
This novel is written so beautifully, making its easy for us to get lost in the story. The updates are always on time as well. The story keeps getting better and better. The characters feel real and relatable and the background story is engaging! Overall, everything about this novel is perfect! ⭐
We need more!! This novel has great potential! Please update author-nim! [img=Loving it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
This book is great from the first and last chapter, It does not explain anything so much. like, not using in-depth sentences to every paragraph, making it not so boring to read at all. Also the cliffhanger and mystery is also well planned, need more chapter😊
It’s a great mysterious and compelling story. I can’t wait to read more. I hope you will mass publish at least 5 chapters.
THERE WAS A LITTLE SMILE ON MY FACE WHEN I READ IT AND COMPLETED IT KEEP IT UP MY POOKIE 🎀💗
I really liked the genre the author adapted. Putting high hopes in this new novel!! yippee! 🌸 a lil typos though but, we can definitely overlook it!!! All the best Author! FEED US MORE!!
i like the mysteries in it and the way he lost his memories is damn good. i want to see him fighting and i want to know who is his parents upload NEW CHAPTERS FAST FAST
I KNEW YOU COULD DO ITT, CANT WAIT TO READ MOREEEEE!!! :D 🎉🎉✨️✨️🎉🎉🎉✨️✨️✨️🎉🎉✨️🎉 And Fr it was great, I enjoyed reading it and it actually also made my day. Just knowing that you put one of your stories on here! Congratulations!!!! ~Vex_MoonLight
you did great job and I like the type where mc is forgotten his memories and that gurl is his memories just makes is more interesting waiting for more chapters so make it quoickly have a great day
wow man you write so well and this story is very good you should be a writter full support from my side ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
SPECTACULAR MISTER BILLI!!! I love it!! The way you wrote it is just so good and impressive. I can literally imagine all the situation. It's incredible. Write more about it!! I wanna read it so bad.
good novel, my gr8te author. Looking for more updates