The Novel’s Antagonist: I walk the path of a Villain

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Eldeel

Ok I am gonna give it straight First 30 chapters almost garbage from a readers perspective Are they important to the story? Yes very important. They set an important framework for the whole story. The story after that is quite enjoyable, I binge read all the way until I caught up with the story. The reason I have such disdain for the first 30 chapters is that, we as the readers have no context , who is Ryan? Asmodius? What blessing? Who is the girl? Why every girl wants to hit Ryan? I really wished I had clear info abt this story construction from the synopsis. Also the synopsis dosent really cover the actual of the story at all. Good thing abt the story is that the writing quality is pretty decent, unless there is major info dump. There is enough intrigue to hook the reader. I concept of the book is quite intresting. Some problems I would say are that there are too many characters introduced too early and at once. As a result everyone has a shallow personality. Currently only 2 people in the story have a proper personality: Ryan and Arian. Other than everyone else is superficial. Also this is clearly not a villain novel yet, bad marketing is never good. Some recommendations(you know best author, these are just personal opinions) More slice of life chapters: like mc and Selenea went on a ‘date’. You could have taken this aspect slow. Give us more perspective on what he is feeling which walking with her, them asking questions about each other. Maybe it will actually give an idea why Ryan started falling in love with Selena cause all I see is he got forced to say she is is gf, she bullied him into going places, she life when he complements her. Another thing I would say is add a few filler chapters, this adds on to the Slice of life aspect. Like mc talking abt the sword he got or a chapter abt him finding out that the fairy is enslaved by the earring. I am just saying the story does not need to go from one bug event to the next. You can slow down a bit and build the world. Also dial down the annoyingness of the mc. He has experience of 20+ years due to his 2 life’s. He dosent need to act childish or immature when talking with every single character. I would also appreciate chapter from other chapters pov(not too many but enough to give an idea) Again I am not saying the story is bad. I am just saying it is not refined enough to reach his full potential.

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Just_Jam

So I've read 16 chs in and mc is constantly getting beaten or insulted every other ch, he can choose to accept the 'blessing' to become powerful, it's some sort of innate ability/talent of that world but he chose not to and thereby becoming the weakest student of the academy and getting constantly bullied. Story might progress well as I've not even completed 20 ch but I am tired of seeing mc getting pushed around all the time. It's like the other novel where mc is the son of villainess where he is insulted every chapter and getting literally bloddied every four chs or so. The character design is good but it gets a bit confusing when the narration changes from people to people.

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AllaroundBaka

ey some of u may not like the early chapters (especially me cuz this reminds me of 'Reincarnated as the Villainess' Son' and my reading status on that novel is on a On and Off status cuz i just can't endure the MC's pitiful life) but this story? is good as a Fried Chicken cooked by your Mom, like at first I found it annoying that the MC is like well suffering (cuz he reminds me of myself back then😥) but as the story goes, I started to enjoy it though there are times where i cringed reading a dialogue or paragraph. Btw author if you read this, keep up the good work man, it's alright if you can't upload everyday you can just stock up some chapters and release them one by one if you have a free time and also Love the story man👍

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Brightlitt_MoonGod

I like how the story has progressed so far but it’s also quite confusing as you don’t exactly understand what’s going on. But LOOKS like a fantastic read, so I will keep on reading.

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AlfDeT_Valedstorm

Absolutely freaking love this novel enough to give a review which i do rarely, ok the main reason is that I don't know what to write but anyway I love it.

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Dozer_2600

Great book. :)

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Abil_Ahmad

finally this novel have many chapters, i have been waiting for a month to read this novel and i really enjoyed the novel, i hope this novel doesn't stop in the middle of the story like other novels

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EPJ007

sorry my bad, forgot to review amazing novel pls keep up the good work 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🤠🤠🤠🤠😳😳.

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kanak_18

amazing novel great work.starting 20 chapter are boring then it become good .

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DaoistFo5gWB

More, More, More charters's I hope there will be r18 chapters and many! I'm waiting for reverse rape 😂

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Dman_Gonz_5757

Good story, well written good style, characters well thought out, everything is good, great novel👍👍👍👍👍🫡

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Secretly_A_Villian

Alright here is my review. Ask any questions you have here.

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viorion2

It's good I just hope it's actually finished.

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i_read_ur_book

most of the authors books are fun to read mainly author knows to build romance with every heroine unlike other dumb harem novels , plot is intresting and I recommend everyone to try it upto 25 chapters it gets u hooked up easily

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Dragon_Ak

I read Arthur novel but this is my favourite 😊😊😊😊 i like the but these chapters are small