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It is well written but is is clear for all to see that it was written with no planning and no research. Author just waves away all the inconsistencies with saying ''It's AU''. Vegeta is good all of a sudden and is in a relationship with Bulma weeks after Namek Saga, - Author:''Its AU'' Dende is Earth's Kami after Namek Saga - Author:''Its AU'' Dende's Eternal Dragon only granting one wish - Author:''I forgot and Its AU'' Vegeta being Super Saiyan weeks after Namek Saga - Author:''Its AU'' Cold Empire being fractured days after Namek Sage - Author:''Its AU'' Any weird, lore breaking thing happening - Author:''Its AU'' If you had shown the reader the cause of the changes that made the ''AU'' no one would have cared. It's just lazy writing with no research and no planning...
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Starts off real promising but then has spent a crazy amount of chapters just sat in a room repeating spirit control & god ki without doing anything which is a real shame.
this is better than most cus frieza is still frieza with some headstart, has clear goals and utilizes dragon balls, great kingdom building, chad mindset and great development
The author is developing a masterpiece so far as I am this review it is at chapter 30 the author manages to grab the essence of Freiza perfectly and masterfully writes the story since I am mobile I have to do a minimum of 130 words so ignore the rest fee fi fo fum you grabbed my golden goose puny human prepare to be crushed
Muy buena historia...................... Me gustaría que sigas así hasta que la termines, pocas son las historias sobre este emblemático emperador del mal. Sigue así autor
There aren't many frieza fan fics I hope author doesn't drop it . like many author does
I know bangers and this is going to be a banger p.s please don't drop you can take my power stones
This is one of the best Dragon Ball fanfic I've read. The quality of this is just topnotch. Can't wait for more chapters. I hope the author finishes this story with the same quality till the end.
I have always thought why there is no fanfic as friza? I have procrastinated and made at least 4 versions of it in my mind!!! Seeing this i can already tell you have a great mind as we think alike!!!
Read up until chapter 8 this is my first time reviewing and I love where the story is going can’t wait for more!
It is well written but is is clear for all to see that it was written with no planning and no research. Author just waves away all the inconsistencies with saying ''It's AU''. Vegeta is good all of a sudden and is in a relationship with Bulma weeks after Namek Saga, - Author:''Its AU'' Dende is Earth's Kami after Namek Saga - Author:''Its AU'' Dende's Eternal Dragon only granting one wish - Author:''I forgot and Its AU'' Vegeta being Super Saiyan weeks after Namek Saga - Author:''Its AU'' Cold Empire being fractured days after Namek Sage - Author:''Its AU'' Any weird, lore breaking thing happening - Author:''Its AU'' If you had shown the reader the cause of the changes that made the ''AU'' no one would have cared. It's just lazy writing with no research and no planning...
Spoiler de révélation Starts off real promising but then has spent a crazy amount of chapters just sat in a room repeating spirit control & god ki without doing anything which is a real shame.
this is better than most cus frieza is still frieza with some headstart, has clear goals and utilizes dragon balls, great kingdom building, chad mindset and great development
The author is developing a masterpiece so far as I am this review it is at chapter 30 the author manages to grab the essence of Freiza perfectly and masterfully writes the story since I am mobile I have to do a minimum of 130 words so ignore the rest fee fi fo fum you grabbed my golden goose puny human prepare to be crushed
Muy buena historia...................... Me gustaría que sigas así hasta que la termines, pocas son las historias sobre este emblemático emperador del mal. Sigue así autor
There aren't many frieza fan fics I hope author doesn't drop it . like many author does
I know bangers and this is going to be a banger p.s please don't drop you can take my power stones
This is one of the best Dragon Ball fanfic I've read. The quality of this is just topnotch. Can't wait for more chapters. I hope the author finishes this story with the same quality till the end.
I have always thought why there is no fanfic as friza? I have procrastinated and made at least 4 versions of it in my mind!!! Seeing this i can already tell you have a great mind as we think alike!!!
Read up until chapter 8 this is my first time reviewing and I love where the story is going can’t wait for more!
please am begging you don't drop this just plssssssss 😢😢😢😢😢😢