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I rarely post a review on fanfics but I gotta say, this is one of the best pokemon fanfics I've read. I like some of the explanations the author gave to some questionable moments in the anime, the MC isn't so OP but is still very strong, combined with s1 trainers being really weak, he is a good balance of strength, so far, he still loses to the goats like Lance and mewtwo. The character interactions are really funny especially when he's playing as ash's rival. The translation quality could be better but it's not bad and unreadable as some commenters are saying, I still perfectly understand the story. Overall this is definitely worth your time if u like the OG Pokemon and want to see a strong MC.
It is pretty good just has translation mistakes Breed=Train Learning machine device=TM Stephinea=teenage girl Kill=Defeat Itsuki or itasi for got the name=Giovani For now juniors that is all I have for you
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I hope it gets more appreciated.Worth reading and one of best Pokemon fanfiction novel ..Hope it doesn't get dropped midway.
disappointment. author just translate the raw and just post it without reading and use the correct term for example i read so far, was usually when pokemon can battle, it use "pokemon name unable to battle but this it was "pokemon name lose combated ability" and second was when pokemon win over opponent pokemon, it use defeat not killed or killing. I don't waste time reading to a book that author himself doesn't appreciate his own work, author just straight throw it in 👋👋
One of the my favorite character in pokemon series and i totally love the story and has great potential in story _______________&&&__
simply fantastic...................................................................................................................................................
a good fanfic .................... ...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............................................ not boring to say the least
Best Gary reincarnation story ever. best thing is it update very fast, and i reaaly like it.i have read it till 87 chapters and i can say that the pokemon team garry has is good not too powerfull not too weak its really balanced .and the best part of this novel is system doesn't give any pokemon to gary and this is the best thing............
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Except the writing quality being a little low, everything else seems good for a translation.
First- Can you give raw link. Synopsis SI into Gary Oak with system. Female Lead-> Sabrina System-> give rewards for fighting imp battles like gym and important characters. He has Blue's Team and more. Pokemon: Blastoise Alkazam Tyranitar Arcanine Buterfree Zapdos Scizor Rhyperior Glaceon Eevee etc and may more Review: Its worth a read. But caution for some words: Breeding -> Training Water Flow Break -> Aquatail and some more I can't remember.
WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, just tell me what the story is about. Something more than what is said in the title.
The story Originally had issues with translation quality yes there are still one or two words with mistakes per chapter. But he overall quality of the story has risen from Barley readable to fully understandable so I will give the author a thumbs up for this and the release frequency of new chapters is very good! I see that the story rating has been dropping while the quality is improving and decided to give a good review.
thank you so much author for fast update I really like this story I hope it goes a long way
One of the best pokemon fics I’ve read on here and absolutely love the constant multi chap uploads. Not too many mistakes made compared to most so very enjoyable read. Keep up the uploads thx for translating.
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Tbh best gray oak fanfic I’ve personally read so far. You had done a great job improving the past few chapters and we as readers appreciate your hard work. Keep the massive releases comin, thank u for ur hard work🙏🥳
It's a very good fanfic, and it's a shame that the translation leaves a little to be desired, the Chinese level still has to be reduced
tf is this shit so many errors my brain hurts when reading it author don't know what is difference of breeding and training pokemon trainer and pokemon breeder are different type of shits
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Muito bom com otimo potencial para estar em todas as regiões , espero que nao caia esta fic ........................................................................
Yo personalmente ya me leí todo lo que ha subido hasta ahora. Eso quiere decir antes de los cambios. Y no me molestaba para tanto. Pero es verdad que ahora es más fácil dejarse envolver en la historia. La historia es buena. El autor original no quiere interferir con Ash. Se nota y algunas veces es molesto. Piensa demasiado si capturar un pokemon qué sería de Ash y cuando lo intentó ni siquiera quedo claro si era o no. Otro tema que el sistema de sugerencias con recompensas sobre que capturar pokemones también molesta un poco. Pero en general la historia es bastante buena.
The story is very close to my childhood memories and please keep it going. I love this _____________________________________________&&____________________________________________________ ✅✅✅✅✅✅
In terms of story quality , it might not be that bad, but sadly, there is so much mistranslation. It completely destroyed the immersion . Saying the sound of squirtle as jenny or Johnny, sometimes saying kami , then there is mistranslation of pokemon names. Using the word "breeding" instead of training constantly got me confused. I'm still not sure what he's talking about arcanine getting killed also. If the translator fixed this minor mistakes, this story has got incredible potential.
Best Gary reincarnation story ever. Hope this translation gets recognition. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
Such a great and fun story to read I highly recommend it’s so fun although I don’t like how every female keeps calling him so handsome etc it’s gets annoying
I rarely post a review on fanfics but I gotta say, this is one of the best pokemon fanfics I've read. I like some of the explanations the author gave to some questionable moments in the anime, the MC isn't so OP but is still very strong, combined with s1 trainers being really weak, he is a good balance of strength, so far, he still loses to the goats like Lance and mewtwo. The character interactions are really funny especially when he's playing as ash's rival. The translation quality could be better but it's not bad and unreadable as some commenters are saying, I still perfectly understand the story. Overall this is definitely worth your time if u like the OG Pokemon and want to see a strong MC.
It is pretty good just has translation mistakes Breed=Train Learning machine device=TM Stephinea=teenage girl Kill=Defeat Itsuki or itasi for got the name=Giovani For now juniors that is all I have for you
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Spoiler de révélation I hope it gets more appreciated.Worth reading and one of best Pokemon fanfiction novel ..Hope it doesn't get dropped midway.
disappointment. author just translate the raw and just post it without reading and use the correct term for example i read so far, was usually when pokemon can battle, it use "pokemon name unable to battle but this it was "pokemon name lose combated ability" and second was when pokemon win over opponent pokemon, it use defeat not killed or killing. I don't waste time reading to a book that author himself doesn't appreciate his own work, author just straight throw it in 👋👋
One of the my favorite character in pokemon series and i totally love the story and has great potential in story _______________&&&__
simply fantastic...................................................................................................................................................
a good fanfic .................... ...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............................................ not boring to say the least
Best Gary reincarnation story ever. best thing is it update very fast, and i reaaly like it.i have read it till 87 chapters and i can say that the pokemon team garry has is good not too powerfull not too weak its really balanced .and the best part of this novel is system doesn't give any pokemon to gary and this is the best thing............
Spoiler de révélation Except the writing quality being a little low, everything else seems good for a translation.
First- Can you give raw link. Synopsis SI into Gary Oak with system. Female Lead-> Sabrina System-> give rewards for fighting imp battles like gym and important characters. He has Blue's Team and more. Pokemon: Blastoise Alkazam Tyranitar Arcanine Buterfree Zapdos Scizor Rhyperior Glaceon Eevee etc and may more Review: Its worth a read. But caution for some words: Breeding -> Training Water Flow Break -> Aquatail and some more I can't remember.
WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, just tell me what the story is about. Something more than what is said in the title.
The story Originally had issues with translation quality yes there are still one or two words with mistakes per chapter. But he overall quality of the story has risen from Barley readable to fully understandable so I will give the author a thumbs up for this and the release frequency of new chapters is very good! I see that the story rating has been dropping while the quality is improving and decided to give a good review.
thank you so much author for fast update I really like this story I hope it goes a long way
One of the best pokemon fics I’ve read on here and absolutely love the constant multi chap uploads. Not too many mistakes made compared to most so very enjoyable read. Keep up the uploads thx for translating.
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Tbh best gray oak fanfic I’ve personally read so far. You had done a great job improving the past few chapters and we as readers appreciate your hard work. Keep the massive releases comin, thank u for ur hard work🙏🥳
It's a very good fanfic, and it's a shame that the translation leaves a little to be desired, the Chinese level still has to be reduced
tf is this shit so many errors my brain hurts when reading it author don't know what is difference of breeding and training pokemon trainer and pokemon breeder are different type of shits
Tiene demasiados errores, esta novela es un revuelto de palabras tonta[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
Muito bom com otimo potencial para estar em todas as regiões , espero que nao caia esta fic ........................................................................
Yo personalmente ya me leí todo lo que ha subido hasta ahora. Eso quiere decir antes de los cambios. Y no me molestaba para tanto. Pero es verdad que ahora es más fácil dejarse envolver en la historia. La historia es buena. El autor original no quiere interferir con Ash. Se nota y algunas veces es molesto. Piensa demasiado si capturar un pokemon qué sería de Ash y cuando lo intentó ni siquiera quedo claro si era o no. Otro tema que el sistema de sugerencias con recompensas sobre que capturar pokemones también molesta un poco. Pero en general la historia es bastante buena.
The story is very close to my childhood memories and please keep it going. I love this _____________________________________________&&____________________________________________________ ✅✅✅✅✅✅
In terms of story quality , it might not be that bad, but sadly, there is so much mistranslation. It completely destroyed the immersion . Saying the sound of squirtle as jenny or Johnny, sometimes saying kami , then there is mistranslation of pokemon names. Using the word "breeding" instead of training constantly got me confused. I'm still not sure what he's talking about arcanine getting killed also. If the translator fixed this minor mistakes, this story has got incredible potential.
Best Gary reincarnation story ever. Hope this translation gets recognition. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
Such a great and fun story to read I highly recommend it’s so fun although I don’t like how every female keeps calling him so handsome etc it’s gets annoying