The Strongest Swordmaster in the World of Naruto

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Miegoreng

so many mistake already in the early chap, from how low his chakra is because of sickness? (low Syndrome chakra) what the heck is that?, even dare to say dai, gai and Lee have the same syndrome..

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Dabi_Bida

A well-written story, I am quite surprised by some people who always ask about the issue of Natural Energy, isn't this like a mystery? Does the author want to create a mystery at the beginning? And will explain that mystery later? Why doesn't anyone understand? I'm confused, and I'm also amazed by the foolish people who judge only by reading the first chapter, then give a bad review. I'm even more surprised that some people like that person; truly a group of foolish individuals. If you only judge a book by its beginning, then you are just a selfish, foolish, and very silly person. Don't you understand the saying not to judge a book by its cover? And not to read a book only at the beginning? Don't mind other people, author! Just keep going! I support you!

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lezra97

La historia se va mucho por las ramas quiere ser un espadachín y solo asta el episodio catorce sostiene una espada, las etiquetas dicen sin trampas y en el episodio trece empieza a aprender senjutsu simplemente porque lo pidió, cuando unos capítulos atrás dijo que no quería pedirle a myght duy que le enseñara Taijutsu por qué no le enseñaria tan facil

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Morpherusx

It's a good fanfiction that deserves five stars and I hope you don't drop it and it's always healthy for the author! It's a good fanfiction that deserves five stars and I hope you don't drop it and it's always healthy for the author!

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HooLeeFuk

I see anti-hero, I read. From the synopsis it looks pretty good. Will review after 20ish chapters.

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Undarks

I like the story; at least it's not like most Naruto stories that only use a system. This one is quite good for me, and the story development is pretty decent, even though there are some strange things here and there. But overall, I can say it's quite good, so just keep going.

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NPSC2377

I really like your writing, so I would like to ask for permission to translate this novel of yours into my language. [img=exp][img=coins][img=coins]

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Ole_Tessmann

The story is ‘good’ at least for webnovel standards. Nowadays all you see is ai translated bullshit so first of all big appreciation going out to the author. With that said, it’s good enough but not a great story. There’s too many inconsistencies all around and in my humble opinion a lot of character flaws (at least unappealing character traits to me). I think some decisions made just make little sense. On the flipside I actually like the fact that the author is playing with theories concerning his little chakra body and overall leaning towards swordmanship. The idea with absorbing a bit of natural energy is a good theory in my opinion. It can also develop into something cultivation like where you gradually atune your body to the energy of the world or some shit lol. All in all I think there could be a lot of improvement, but it’s still a good read!

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God_Peter_Star

The story is interesting, without relying on any overly strange systems—I like it. It can be said that the concept is intriguing. Honestly, I really enjoy slow-paced stories like this, especially since the main character uses Breathing Techniques from Kimetsu no Yaiba. That’s incredibly captivating. As for the Sage Mode issue, I’m willing to wait until later, because if the author can take their time, then so can I. Aside from that, I don’t see any other issues. Oh, I’m quite curious—how many women will be in the MC’s harem? That’s all.

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aproc_c

I think author is too fixated on the fact that he has little chakra or not a full sage mode . The point of senjutsu and sage mode is to balance your chakra and natural chakra in a safe ratio, and I think you need to have a talent for this. Like the 2nd and 4th hogake's sense of space or seal mastery . Jiraiya just didn't have enough talent , and Tsunade just spent 15 years drinking and playing