Reviews of In My Hero Academia with a Jujutsu Kaisen Gacha System by GAF_00_TW - Webnovel

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Trashconsumer

So far so good, the story actually separates cursed energy as a foreign energy instead of letting the techniques work using the sheer will alone. The mc actions and thought process is entertaining to follow. And most importantly, this is a gacha themed system, thats one way to not let the mc become all powerful immediately

4mth
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GAF_00_TW

As is tradition, here is a five-star review from yours truly to boost the story. Instead of sucking myself off here, I want you all to use this review's comment section for you all to leave comments or suggestions regarding the story. Also, thank you all for reading my goofy story.

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4mth
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K_Moretti76

Started great but got weirder along the way , Mc has a sudden morality shift and just ruins an innocent dudes life , multiple ways to go around that problem but still chose the one that made no sense for mc at the time , then has another morality shift and becomes an upright vigilante again . Overall, had potential but got lost along the way

17h
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Jaehaerys83

Love it................................................................................................................................................

5d
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Ireallylikereading

most is good except when toga was included, at first it was understandable, but then it became forced and annoying, dude hatsune is best girl here but theres barely anything about her despite being in the story for so long and early on, meanwhile theres toga wasting the already few chapters before author goes hiatus, even at the end it was still all about toga and their victim. just because of that it became 5 stars to 3.5

6d
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LordAnime

Lots of whiny reviews. Just come back author all your fans miss you

7d
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Nemesis27

Author someone named Fluted_aka just stole your work and posted with Just changing the name of MC

7d
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Big_Nigg4

Guess this is it for this novel then. was waiting for mc to use cursed speech to make people shit themselves.

9d
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Anide_Oficial

No sé si el autor logró escribir nuevos capítulos. Pero realmente espero que la inspiración le haya llegado. De las mejores historias de MHA que he leído en años acá. Espero con muchas ansias que continúe y finalice... Eso sí, si el autor sigue disfrutando tanto escribiendo esta historia como me fascinó leerla

11d
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Mario_Cruz_2159

Perfecto Me encanta esta historia espero y la sigas trayendo ya que es muy buena y que sigas haciendo muchas más parecidas y que te motives para que no nos dejes a medias

14d
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dohvakindark

It's a good story overall, but chapter 26 is like a different character. So many dumb decisions, so many choices that had nothing to do with how the character was portrayed till that point. That chapter alone dropped the quality to almost 0 to me. Very disappointing. I also dislike the ongoing direction, the author said it was not harem, them forced Himiko Toga into it for whatever reason. Regardless, it's really very bad this part of the story. Compared with the rest, I'm finding myself skipping more and more paragraphs as those things happen. I might drop soon, but to each their own. Hope it gets better.

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Ash631

sadly the author chose gooner, romance # missing, mc at some point feels like using his d as a brain.

21d
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Shadow_monarch_Ash

author creator of realms I am waiting ....

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24d
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Que_Rayos

The story started well, but the rest was pure cliche, not to mention that the mc said he would punish criminals, he ruined the life of an innocent person just because the girl was his favorite character, I think he did not cover that topic well, if he wanted to help the girl there were other ways without needing to ruin the life of the victim, even if he helped the victim the damage has already been done and if later he tries to solve the problem I think he would only make it worse, and if he solves it with the magic of the script the reading would no longer make sense, In that aspect there would have to be a lot of plausibility.

25d
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Marcus_B_8698

Love your take on this. Can’t wait to see more!!!

25d
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D3vill
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I really loved the story, specifically with JJK powers. However, it would be much better if you add more dept to the villains and sorrounding character in the story. This would give it more life and I’m definitely sure that other people would also like it. @mr.author However, it’s been a week since you last updated and was wondering if you dropped the novel as it would be such a shame.

27d
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Dark_Dragon_2044

I loved the story so much everything I read it make me so happy

1mth
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Wns
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1mth
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Nyankya091

Esta buena la historia, a mi gusto personal, el prota me gusta. Mi parte fav es donde se peleo con los héroes estuvo chido esa parte. Ojala en un futuro recuperes la motivación y la creatividad para sacar más caps. Una idea se me ocurre es que creas nuevos villanos de los otros continentes usando la parte donde todo el mundo vio la pelea de Sukuna vs Los Héroes. Otro que puedes hacer es que el prota siga el entrenamiento de desbloquear la CE de su familia, posiblemente con una teoria que abarque los Dedos de Sukuna. Solo son sugerencias, las puedas tomar para que te hagas unas ideas en la historia. Gracias por la novela.

1mth
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Wns
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1mth
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1mth
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Apollyon1864

Love this fic but please make souta make sense in his actions and not just because he likes a character like I get it but mans gotta slowly stop thinking they are just characters because I think he still sees them as that rather than real people??

1mth
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1mth
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Axolotl22

I love this. It's good, fun and overall it is a fantastic read. The system makes sense and the development of the MC is well-written and paced.

1mth
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1mth
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luke_dalron

Like what the fuck are you doing this novel is what happen when author have the iq of an infant, its full of self fulfilling fantasy of its author ,typical bitch who wont feel the touch of a woman

1mth
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Kuro_5651

Its actually really nice! I thought it was gonna be dogshit cause of some of the reviews but it turns out its just webnovel users being webnovel users! Don't knock this book till ya try it! Only complaint I have is how frickin' op he is right now! He could realistically beat All for one with ease so I'm looking forward to how the author tackles that problem

1mth
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1mth
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Odd_Individual

It started off strong but lost its spark as it went on. Letting people vote to decide what path the protagonist took really hurt the flow, as a cohesive narrative needs clear intent, not a mix of competing ideas. Additionally, the harem dynamic doesn’t fit here. I’ll admit I’m biased, as I’m not a fan of harem stories in general, but even without that, it feels out of place in this setting. Still, even after all of that, it’s not that bad just somewhere in the middle. Not good, not bad

1mth
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1mth
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Haku_Ouroboros

Está reseñas solo es para equilibrar un poco los bots de 5 estrellas , como puede haber tantos bots dando 5 estrellas en un mismo fic ??? [img=Out of it][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]

1mth
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Trashconsumer

So far so good, the story actually separates cursed energy as a foreign energy instead of letting the techniques work using the sheer will alone. The mc actions and thought process is entertaining to follow. And most importantly, this is a gacha themed system, thats one way to not let the mc become all powerful immediately

4mth
Voir 14 Réponses
GAF_00_TW

As is tradition, here is a five-star review from yours truly to boost the story. Instead of sucking myself off here, I want you all to use this review's comment section for you all to leave comments or suggestions regarding the story. Also, thank you all for reading my goofy story.

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4mth
Voir 34 Réponses
K_Moretti76

Started great but got weirder along the way , Mc has a sudden morality shift and just ruins an innocent dudes life , multiple ways to go around that problem but still chose the one that made no sense for mc at the time , then has another morality shift and becomes an upright vigilante again . Overall, had potential but got lost along the way

17h
Voir 0 Réponses
Jaehaerys83

Love it................................................................................................................................................

5d
Voir 0 Réponses
Ireallylikereading

most is good except when toga was included, at first it was understandable, but then it became forced and annoying, dude hatsune is best girl here but theres barely anything about her despite being in the story for so long and early on, meanwhile theres toga wasting the already few chapters before author goes hiatus, even at the end it was still all about toga and their victim. just because of that it became 5 stars to 3.5

6d
Voir 0 Réponses
LordAnime

Lots of whiny reviews. Just come back author all your fans miss you

7d
Voir 0 Réponses
Nemesis27

Author someone named Fluted_aka just stole your work and posted with Just changing the name of MC

7d
Voir 0 Réponses
Big_Nigg4

Guess this is it for this novel then. was waiting for mc to use cursed speech to make people shit themselves.

9d
Voir 0 Réponses
Anide_Oficial

No sé si el autor logró escribir nuevos capítulos. Pero realmente espero que la inspiración le haya llegado. De las mejores historias de MHA que he leído en años acá. Espero con muchas ansias que continúe y finalice... Eso sí, si el autor sigue disfrutando tanto escribiendo esta historia como me fascinó leerla

11d
Voir 0 Réponses
Mario_Cruz_2159

Perfecto Me encanta esta historia espero y la sigas trayendo ya que es muy buena y que sigas haciendo muchas más parecidas y que te motives para que no nos dejes a medias

14d
Voir 0 Réponses
dohvakindark

It's a good story overall, but chapter 26 is like a different character. So many dumb decisions, so many choices that had nothing to do with how the character was portrayed till that point. That chapter alone dropped the quality to almost 0 to me. Very disappointing. I also dislike the ongoing direction, the author said it was not harem, them forced Himiko Toga into it for whatever reason. Regardless, it's really very bad this part of the story. Compared with the rest, I'm finding myself skipping more and more paragraphs as those things happen. I might drop soon, but to each their own. Hope it gets better.

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19d
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Ash631

sadly the author chose gooner, romance # missing, mc at some point feels like using his d as a brain.

21d
Voir 0 Réponses
Shadow_monarch_Ash

author creator of realms I am waiting ....

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24d
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Que_Rayos

The story started well, but the rest was pure cliche, not to mention that the mc said he would punish criminals, he ruined the life of an innocent person just because the girl was his favorite character, I think he did not cover that topic well, if he wanted to help the girl there were other ways without needing to ruin the life of the victim, even if he helped the victim the damage has already been done and if later he tries to solve the problem I think he would only make it worse, and if he solves it with the magic of the script the reading would no longer make sense, In that aspect there would have to be a lot of plausibility.

25d
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Marcus_B_8698

Love your take on this. Can’t wait to see more!!!

25d
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D3vill
LV 14 Badge

I really loved the story, specifically with JJK powers. However, it would be much better if you add more dept to the villains and sorrounding character in the story. This would give it more life and I’m definitely sure that other people would also like it. @mr.author However, it’s been a week since you last updated and was wondering if you dropped the novel as it would be such a shame.

27d
Voir 0 Réponses
Dark_Dragon_2044

I loved the story so much everything I read it make me so happy

1mth
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Wns
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1mth
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Nyankya091

Esta buena la historia, a mi gusto personal, el prota me gusta. Mi parte fav es donde se peleo con los héroes estuvo chido esa parte. Ojala en un futuro recuperes la motivación y la creatividad para sacar más caps. Una idea se me ocurre es que creas nuevos villanos de los otros continentes usando la parte donde todo el mundo vio la pelea de Sukuna vs Los Héroes. Otro que puedes hacer es que el prota siga el entrenamiento de desbloquear la CE de su familia, posiblemente con una teoria que abarque los Dedos de Sukuna. Solo son sugerencias, las puedas tomar para que te hagas unas ideas en la historia. Gracias por la novela.

1mth
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Wns
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1mth
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Mar_del_Hype

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1mth
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Apollyon1864

Love this fic but please make souta make sense in his actions and not just because he likes a character like I get it but mans gotta slowly stop thinking they are just characters because I think he still sees them as that rather than real people??

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
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Gaal_Gul

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1mth
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Axolotl22

I love this. It's good, fun and overall it is a fantastic read. The system makes sense and the development of the MC is well-written and paced.

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Mar_del_Hype

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1mth
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luke_dalron

Like what the fuck are you doing this novel is what happen when author have the iq of an infant, its full of self fulfilling fantasy of its author ,typical bitch who wont feel the touch of a woman

1mth
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Kuro_5651

Its actually really nice! I thought it was gonna be dogshit cause of some of the reviews but it turns out its just webnovel users being webnovel users! Don't knock this book till ya try it! Only complaint I have is how frickin' op he is right now! He could realistically beat All for one with ease so I'm looking forward to how the author tackles that problem

1mth
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Mar_del_Hype

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1mth
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Odd_Individual

It started off strong but lost its spark as it went on. Letting people vote to decide what path the protagonist took really hurt the flow, as a cohesive narrative needs clear intent, not a mix of competing ideas. Additionally, the harem dynamic doesn’t fit here. I’ll admit I’m biased, as I’m not a fan of harem stories in general, but even without that, it feels out of place in this setting. Still, even after all of that, it’s not that bad just somewhere in the middle. Not good, not bad

1mth
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Mar_del_Hype

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Haku_Ouroboros

Está reseñas solo es para equilibrar un poco los bots de 5 estrellas , como puede haber tantos bots dando 5 estrellas en un mismo fic ??? [img=Out of it][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]

1mth
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