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It's great story, i loved the writing flow, tense of every battle i could feel it, Author has to do a great job describing about this. But, for story devp and other, it's pretty good and i think the star will increase as long as a read more chap of this stories. Keep it up a good work
I think this is good, the character development looks neat, from the beginning he could only use low sub talents, he became good at using ultimate sub talents. Grinding to gain power through towers is quite unique, especially when the MC experiences problems in the middle of the road, causing other conflicts to arise and making the plot unpredictable. I'm curious, what will the author show in the next chapter?
Best of luck to our new author. May he succeed in creating a great novel. .. ... . ... .. .. ...zh. ...eh .. ........ . . . e szhz h s h hze eh eeh
Let's be honest, this story is good and interesting. He got the OP power but because his level was not enough, he had to level up until it was. The moment he was trapped also made everything complicated for him, but it could be the best and fastest way to become powerful. Worldbuilding is quite good, a mix of real world, tower world, and post apocalypse. I wonder if there's another universe besides Earth? Because Aerith always says 'Other Worlds'. I hope you'll explain it later in the story.
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Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
I'm still reeling from the action and adventure. The main character, Aaron, is trying to come to terms with the fact that his mother was killed by a mysterious group. He's consumed by anger and a desire for revenge, which affects his powers. But things take a wild turn when Aaron discovers he has a special talent that lets him explore different dimensions and communicate with the souls of past heroes. He's suddenly thrust into a world of ancient warriors and powerful entities. I loved how the book combines elements of sci-fi and fantasy to create a unique and thrilling world. The author does a great job of building tension and suspense as Aaron navigates this new reality. One of the coolest things about this book is the system of powers and abilities. The way Aaron's talents evolve and change as he gains experience is really interesting and adds a fun element to the story. The stakes are high in this book, with Aaron fighting to free his mother's soul and become a powerful ruler. The action scenes are intense and exciting, and I loved how the author balances the action with moments of emotional depth. Overall, I highly recommend
The plot moves at a good pace, balancing action and character introspection effectively. The interactions between characters are well-written, adding depth to their relationships. However, at times, certain elements may feel familiar to genre enthusiasts, yet the execution keeps it fresh.
I think this would be my first try to read a book about systems. And lucky that I stumbled into this one. I'd definitely finish this. This is great author. The flow were good and nice writing quality. This would definitely stay in my library. Keep it up!
How shameless of this author to give the story five stars. Still, let me do it because it's my first novel. I wrote it passionately, and I think the story is interesting. 50 chapters in, a new beginning when I decided to go premium —I hope you don't hate me. There are a few things I need to tell you about the book's upcoming event. You can read the free chapters well and hope to find something interesting in them. I can confirm that there is no single filler chapter for free chapters. Everything has a plot and story progression. The battle scene will be divided into two chapters because I pretty much like writing tense moments in battle, including character development for the MC and other chars. You might think that the story will continue to focus on conquering towers until the highest one, but that's not entirely true. There will be other events that I have prepared for afterwards, such as mage tournaments, guild wars, slavery, prostitution, and more. However, that will happen in the upcoming chapters. It's really going to be exciting, you know. In this November, I will try to publish with an average publish chapter >= 3. I'm sorry if I only publish two chapters. Maybe I have other activities that cannot be avoided. However, I will try to publish three chapters daily so you can continue to follow and enjoy my story. For a specific moment, I will do a mass release of 4-5 chapters a day in a specific period to boost my novel in the market. I want you to help me by giving power stones, golden tickets, or gifts, and share it with your friends —I hope some of you will give me a castle xixi >< For those who actively comment, review, or give big gifts, I will let your name become one of the MC's supporting characters. That's my appreciation to you, I hope you like it. It's a bit long that I'm reviewing my story —it's confusing. I hope you can continue to stay with me and accompany me until the end. Cheers.
It's great story, i loved the writing flow, tense of every battle i could feel it, Author has to do a great job describing about this. But, for story devp and other, it's pretty good and i think the star will increase as long as a read more chap of this stories. Keep it up a good work
I think this is good, the character development looks neat, from the beginning he could only use low sub talents, he became good at using ultimate sub talents. Grinding to gain power through towers is quite unique, especially when the MC experiences problems in the middle of the road, causing other conflicts to arise and making the plot unpredictable. I'm curious, what will the author show in the next chapter?
Best of luck to our new author. May he succeed in creating a great novel. .. ... . ... .. .. ...zh. ...eh .. ........ . . . e szhz h s h hze eh eeh
Let's be honest, this story is good and interesting. He got the OP power but because his level was not enough, he had to level up until it was. The moment he was trapped also made everything complicated for him, but it could be the best and fastest way to become powerful. Worldbuilding is quite good, a mix of real world, tower world, and post apocalypse. I wonder if there's another universe besides Earth? Because Aerith always says 'Other Worlds'. I hope you'll explain it later in the story.
Spoiler de révélation Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
I'm still reeling from the action and adventure. The main character, Aaron, is trying to come to terms with the fact that his mother was killed by a mysterious group. He's consumed by anger and a desire for revenge, which affects his powers. But things take a wild turn when Aaron discovers he has a special talent that lets him explore different dimensions and communicate with the souls of past heroes. He's suddenly thrust into a world of ancient warriors and powerful entities. I loved how the book combines elements of sci-fi and fantasy to create a unique and thrilling world. The author does a great job of building tension and suspense as Aaron navigates this new reality. One of the coolest things about this book is the system of powers and abilities. The way Aaron's talents evolve and change as he gains experience is really interesting and adds a fun element to the story. The stakes are high in this book, with Aaron fighting to free his mother's soul and become a powerful ruler. The action scenes are intense and exciting, and I loved how the author balances the action with moments of emotional depth. Overall, I highly recommend
The plot moves at a good pace, balancing action and character introspection effectively. The interactions between characters are well-written, adding depth to their relationships. However, at times, certain elements may feel familiar to genre enthusiasts, yet the execution keeps it fresh.
I think this would be my first try to read a book about systems. And lucky that I stumbled into this one. I'd definitely finish this. This is great author. The flow were good and nice writing quality. This would definitely stay in my library. Keep it up!
How shameless of this author to give the story five stars. Still, let me do it because it's my first novel. I wrote it passionately, and I think the story is interesting. 50 chapters in, a new beginning when I decided to go premium —I hope you don't hate me. There are a few things I need to tell you about the book's upcoming event. You can read the free chapters well and hope to find something interesting in them. I can confirm that there is no single filler chapter for free chapters. Everything has a plot and story progression. The battle scene will be divided into two chapters because I pretty much like writing tense moments in battle, including character development for the MC and other chars. You might think that the story will continue to focus on conquering towers until the highest one, but that's not entirely true. There will be other events that I have prepared for afterwards, such as mage tournaments, guild wars, slavery, prostitution, and more. However, that will happen in the upcoming chapters. It's really going to be exciting, you know. In this November, I will try to publish with an average publish chapter >= 3. I'm sorry if I only publish two chapters. Maybe I have other activities that cannot be avoided. However, I will try to publish three chapters daily so you can continue to follow and enjoy my story. For a specific moment, I will do a mass release of 4-5 chapters a day in a specific period to boost my novel in the market. I want you to help me by giving power stones, golden tickets, or gifts, and share it with your friends —I hope some of you will give me a castle xixi >< For those who actively comment, review, or give big gifts, I will let your name become one of the MC's supporting characters. That's my appreciation to you, I hope you like it. It's a bit long that I'm reviewing my story —it's confusing. I hope you can continue to stay with me and accompany me until the end. Cheers.