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It's fun for a while, but the wish fulfilling is too strong with this one... Everything comes easy, everyone is in his harem, every power is at his disposal... It got boring and stale quick for me, and this is just the first world.
AS A FAN OF KAGUYA LOVE THIS NOVEL..OK, EVERYONE WAS KAGUYA EVIL OR SHE WAS A CLONE OF THANOS THE MAD TITAN TRYING TO STOP A GREAT EVIL LIKE THE CELESTIALS BUT KAGUYA HER CLAN THAT EATS WORLDS..THANOS WAS RIGHT AND THE AVENGERS WRONG AND THEY HELP THE REAL EVIL.WAS NARUTO USE like total DUMBAZZ THE TOADS AND KAGUYA CLAN..PS AUTHOR YOUR HERO needs to destroy those rats toads destroy they are also the root of the world's problems in naruto world.
AUTHOR LOVE THIS NOVEL STORY READ BUT WHY THE FxUxCxk NO MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE...MASS EFFECT IS A AWESOME GAME STORY AND YOUR CHARACTERS SHOULD VISIT MASS EFFECT..AND FxUxCxK mine BLUE ALIEN BABE AzSzS LIARA TSONI AND KICK THE OLD MACHINES GODS AzSzS.
I honestly don’t understand this he should be sent back to earth first and then earn his way up to other worlds instead of the other way around because once he explore other worlds, he’s not going to wanna go back to earth by the time he gets back to earth his family and stuff would probably end up being dead anyways
I can't support a novel that is lazily written and relies on copypasting regurgitated AI prompts. Using AI for writing is fine, but using it to write literally everything in the novel just makes the writing feel bland and uninspired. Seriously, stop using AI to write your characters, it makes every character in the novel feel like they're the same person wearing different clothes.
It's fun for a while, but the wish fulfilling is too strong with this one... Everything comes easy, everyone is in his harem, every power is at his disposal... It got boring and stale quick for me, and this is just the first world.
AS A FAN OF KAGUYA LOVE THIS NOVEL..OK, EVERYONE WAS KAGUYA EVIL OR SHE WAS A CLONE OF THANOS THE MAD TITAN TRYING TO STOP A GREAT EVIL LIKE THE CELESTIALS BUT KAGUYA HER CLAN THAT EATS WORLDS..THANOS WAS RIGHT AND THE AVENGERS WRONG AND THEY HELP THE REAL EVIL.WAS NARUTO USE like total DUMBAZZ THE TOADS AND KAGUYA CLAN..PS AUTHOR YOUR HERO needs to destroy those rats toads destroy they are also the root of the world's problems in naruto world.
AUTHOR LOVE THIS NOVEL STORY READ BUT WHY THE FxUxCxk NO MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE...MASS EFFECT IS A AWESOME GAME STORY AND YOUR CHARACTERS SHOULD VISIT MASS EFFECT..AND FxUxCxK mine BLUE ALIEN BABE AzSzS LIARA TSONI AND KICK THE OLD MACHINES GODS AzSzS.
I honestly don’t understand this he should be sent back to earth first and then earn his way up to other worlds instead of the other way around because once he explore other worlds, he’s not going to wanna go back to earth by the time he gets back to earth his family and stuff would probably end up being dead anyways
I can't support a novel that is lazily written and relies on copypasting regurgitated AI prompts. Using AI for writing is fine, but using it to write literally everything in the novel just makes the writing feel bland and uninspired. Seriously, stop using AI to write your characters, it makes every character in the novel feel like they're the same person wearing different clothes.