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Interesting... If you actually execute it right, it'll be a very interesting and worthy of reading fic, although, you know what? Nah, do your thing. Your doing gud.
when ITS started by get to naruto world with martial art skill and cultuvator by system ITS good but when the naruto world is changing to acomodating martial sect become au It destroy my familiarity of the naruto world it self
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really entertaining, interesitin n smth diff too. Please keep going on 👍 5 stars for you. ydoydudyodogyjydkydkydykdkydykdkydydukdudludhldlhdhlxhldlhdlhdlhdulfulfldludludludlhdlhdljdljdjldjldjl
Since I'm a shameless author, of course, I'll be giving my fic a five-star review. So, what can you expect from this story? One) A truly evil MC — not an anti-hero or a simp villain, but a genuine, ruthless villain. Two) A scheming and cunning MC. In the first arc, he might not be too crafty, but as the story progresses, he'll become more and more devious. Three) An OP MC. He has the Heavenly Demon template — one who stands above the heavens. Though he won't be overpowered right away, he'll get there. Four) Regular updates. I'll be uploading chapters daily, but I need comments and power stones to keep me motivated! Five) I'm open to suggestions to help me improve and create something you'll all enjoy reading.
It's a little interesting, and although according to my memories everywhere in novels and manhwas where there was a heavenly demon in the title, there were failures for me, but I hope it will be something interesting. To begin with, I like the fact that the MC did not grow in the body of some beggar, and also without memories. I hope MC will not change in the direction when he is indifferent to everything, it should be fun for him to rob, kill and ahem, help girls and women against their will (well, you understand), break living beings psychologically and physically, because if all this is absent, then it is not clear to me at all why MC is the receiver of the heavenly demon, and also for him the routine should be appendages, you know, when the MC kills a "friend" because it's profitable...
I’m prepared to give this review just for the potential alone. Please do not drop I have been looking for heavenly demon fanfics for so long
At time I'm writing this there are only ten chapters but these ten chapters are excellent. I recommend giving this story a chance.
I saw the title “ The heavenly demon “and my hands clicked on it automatically…… So let’s see how the strongest person in murim take over one piece
Though it might be too early to give this fic a review but meh I do it anyways. But author remember if I see you turn the mc into a simp or an righteous idiot. I will change my review to an automatic 1-star.
Loved it so far. The system is quite unique compared to other template system and It is of the heavenly demon at that. I am in..........................
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It's about the heavenly demon do I have to say more? [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
Interesting... If you actually execute it right, it'll be a very interesting and worthy of reading fic, although, you know what? Nah, do your thing. Your doing gud.
when ITS started by get to naruto world with martial art skill and cultuvator by system ITS good but when the naruto world is changing to acomodating martial sect become au It destroy my familiarity of the naruto world it self
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
really entertaining, interesitin n smth diff too. Please keep going on 👍 5 stars for you. ydoydudyodogyjydkydkydykdkydykdkydydukdudludhldlhdhlxhldlhdlhdlhdulfulfldludludludlhdlhdljdljdjldjldjl
Since I'm a shameless author, of course, I'll be giving my fic a five-star review. So, what can you expect from this story? One) A truly evil MC — not an anti-hero or a simp villain, but a genuine, ruthless villain. Two) A scheming and cunning MC. In the first arc, he might not be too crafty, but as the story progresses, he'll become more and more devious. Three) An OP MC. He has the Heavenly Demon template — one who stands above the heavens. Though he won't be overpowered right away, he'll get there. Four) Regular updates. I'll be uploading chapters daily, but I need comments and power stones to keep me motivated! Five) I'm open to suggestions to help me improve and create something you'll all enjoy reading.
It's a little interesting, and although according to my memories everywhere in novels and manhwas where there was a heavenly demon in the title, there were failures for me, but I hope it will be something interesting. To begin with, I like the fact that the MC did not grow in the body of some beggar, and also without memories. I hope MC will not change in the direction when he is indifferent to everything, it should be fun for him to rob, kill and ahem, help girls and women against their will (well, you understand), break living beings psychologically and physically, because if all this is absent, then it is not clear to me at all why MC is the receiver of the heavenly demon, and also for him the routine should be appendages, you know, when the MC kills a "friend" because it's profitable...
I’m prepared to give this review just for the potential alone. Please do not drop I have been looking for heavenly demon fanfics for so long
At time I'm writing this there are only ten chapters but these ten chapters are excellent. I recommend giving this story a chance.
I saw the title “ The heavenly demon “and my hands clicked on it automatically…… So let’s see how the strongest person in murim take over one piece
Though it might be too early to give this fic a review but meh I do it anyways. But author remember if I see you turn the mc into a simp or an righteous idiot. I will change my review to an automatic 1-star.
Loved it so far. The system is quite unique compared to other template system and It is of the heavenly demon at that. I am in..........................
Göksel İblis mı ben varım[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries]
It's about the heavenly demon do I have to say more? [img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]
wouldve been nice if there wasnt a word count chapter