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MrCouchPotato

So nobody is gonna talk about how horrendous his sense of grammar is in tense ?? Dude writes everything in present from. Seriously if he was a real book writer nobody would have agreed to publish this type of writing style.... Everything else is nice. If only he had used the tense correctly then it would have been one of the best JJK fic on the app...Pity.

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Celebron

Uma das melhores histórias de jujutsu que já li. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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Ash_D_Born

I won’t lie this was peak but the character Megumi himself diminished the story. Waifu Catalogue is such a boring trope if anything a CYOA is better. Mind control, slavery and complete lack of empathy and all round sim ping made this a hard read compared to your other works.

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Daoist170471

I'll write this once to make it clear. This is the best thing that has ever been released under the JJK logo. Hail Megumi the Chaste, LMAO.

17d
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Omar_Alflh

🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍

17d
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anubisthegoat

Absolute peak ff, Masterpiece, just please update more regularly!!!! I gave you 5 stars even with the low update rate to show my appreciation

19d
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Pocket_AI

At that point just write p*rn. Finished 6 chapters, no desire to continue. Reasons: - too much mentions how handsome mc is - meaningless scenes with school bullies. Who cares about them? WOW, mc with cheats is stronger that normal humans, who could have guessed. - info repeats itself

28d
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Eitan_

Yeah its one of the best jjk fanfic out there thats set in stone👌👌👌👌 Buuut when he goes to next world, what will happen to harem? They’ll go together with him? But how? He has like 5 girl in harem now, but wait before this, into next world will he going to another character’s body or will he directly transport to another world? And his girs will also transport? Or transmigrate into character?

1mth
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OkayLang

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1mth
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tiago_santos

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Daoist4vVVLN

This is peak..................... ..............................................................................................................................

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Xeather

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XAdamantiumX

This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation.

1mth
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H3L9M39L353

PEAK BRAINROT!! I love it, good job author-kun. WWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Dan4te
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Great fanfic Let Megyumi and his harem go to other worlds after completing Jujutsu Kaisen[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2mth
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DaoisteGdTpC

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2mth
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jacksonhdjdnskskn

The writing of this fanfiction is one of the best

2mth
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itachi_uchihar

Good story just wish that author won't have changed ever boy into girl for the sake of harem... His intake of 10 shadows is very different and suprisingly good, though he lacked to show sukuna as the evil king he his no slaughtering and getting suppressed... Good thing is that the story is not boring it doesn't necessarily follow jjk manga only draws inspiration from it....

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3mth
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HanSooyong_Empress

i have nothing to say this is peak at its finest

3mth
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delusionalxdreamer

Amazing stuff. I came here after reading Meta essence fic. I like Hector more. This mc is also likable but a bit shallow nonetheless. Overall this was a great read for me. Thanks keep up the good work Evans

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Moha_bz

The quality on this story are crazy. The mc have a good personality and the character are like in the anime

3mth
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Doge_Protagonist

This is almost as good as the Gacha story but we'll have to see how the story develops from here on out. Thumbs up and all that yeah. uhhhh..

3mth
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Nex_612

This fanfic is easily the best I've read about JJK in every sense, I can only say that I am very excited and intrigued about how Shibuya's arc will be approached and how Kenjaku will change his plan to adapt to Megumi or how characters like Hitomi and the disaster curses, Toji, femChoso, Sukuna and… Yuji will be approached

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BigBeans

Very good, I like .................................................................... ..........................................................

3mth
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Moha_bz

Please Author i need more chapter. Your story are kinda too good. 🙏🙏🙏

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3mth
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DaoisthKMXZg

Es una delicia de obra que emociona mucho al lector causando una gran impresión en el lector.Aunque lo unico q para mi es malo es que megumi actua muy pasivo con gojo fem.Pero despues de eso es perfecto

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RANCIDITY

A very good Waifu catalogue fanfic .... surprisingly i First readed your this story and then readed Meta essence one and didn't believe that you right that ( I like this protagonist more {subjective}) , the story is good and genderbend thing is done good for this fic ,i support this ..the protagonist is realistic (in his ideals ) at there core the story is good and light-hearted. thank you author and hope you don't drop it .............. ........ .... .. . WHERE IS THE UPDATE!!!!(⁠〒⁠﹏⁠〒⁠)

4mth
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Emptyentity

It's great. Some may find it quite different from your gacha one, but I love this one a lot. Never thought I would touch anything with "waifu catalog" in it, but MC uses it wisely. Thanks for your work.

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4mth
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Pedro_0000

Very goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

4mth
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LazyReaderAlways

I'm sorry, I really tried to like the story. I love the meta essence gacha and came here for more. But I really really hate the idea of a waifu gacha system. All the horrible smut interaction really put me off. in MEG, the romance was properly developed. The way the mc struggled with his love life, where he tried his best to give his all to the women he got, how he tried his best to be faithful to their wishes, how he was mindful of how his ability affected them mentally and tried to be extremely considerate, I don't see that here. Sure, I didn't read much because I don't ned to read 100 chapters to tell whether I like it or not. And I hate this. Again, I love the author, and after reading Meta Essence Gacha, this is such a disappointment. Thank you for releasing this author, but I see no point in this either being continued or you wasting your time on it to fix it. Sorry but I'm giving this a 1 star.

4mth
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MrCouchPotato

So nobody is gonna talk about how horrendous his sense of grammar is in tense ?? Dude writes everything in present from. Seriously if he was a real book writer nobody would have agreed to publish this type of writing style.... Everything else is nice. If only he had used the tense correctly then it would have been one of the best JJK fic on the app...Pity.

2d
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Celebron

Uma das melhores histórias de jujutsu que já li. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

5d
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Ash_D_Born

I won’t lie this was peak but the character Megumi himself diminished the story. Waifu Catalogue is such a boring trope if anything a CYOA is better. Mind control, slavery and complete lack of empathy and all round sim ping made this a hard read compared to your other works.

17d
Voir 0 Réponses
Daoist170471

I'll write this once to make it clear. This is the best thing that has ever been released under the JJK logo. Hail Megumi the Chaste, LMAO.

17d
Voir 0 Réponses
Omar_Alflh

🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍🤩👍

17d
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anubisthegoat

Absolute peak ff, Masterpiece, just please update more regularly!!!! I gave you 5 stars even with the low update rate to show my appreciation

19d
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Pocket_AI

At that point just write p*rn. Finished 6 chapters, no desire to continue. Reasons: - too much mentions how handsome mc is - meaningless scenes with school bullies. Who cares about them? WOW, mc with cheats is stronger that normal humans, who could have guessed. - info repeats itself

28d
Voir 0 Réponses
Eitan_

Yeah its one of the best jjk fanfic out there thats set in stone👌👌👌👌 Buuut when he goes to next world, what will happen to harem? They’ll go together with him? But how? He has like 5 girl in harem now, but wait before this, into next world will he going to another character’s body or will he directly transport to another world? And his girs will also transport? Or transmigrate into character?

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
OkayLang

---------------------------------------- xd

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
tiago_santos

GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!GO MAKI!

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1mth
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Daoist4vVVLN

This is peak..................... ..............................................................................................................................

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1mth
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Xeather

............ ..................... .....

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
XAdamantiumX

This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation. This is to show support , I trust you auther make it awesome, me not good with English. Thanks for this creation.

1mth
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H3L9M39L353

PEAK BRAINROT!! I love it, good job author-kun. WWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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2mth
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Dan4te
LV 13 Badge

Great fanfic Let Megyumi and his harem go to other worlds after completing Jujutsu Kaisen[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
DaoisteGdTpC

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
jacksonhdjdnskskn

The writing of this fanfiction is one of the best

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
itachi_uchihar

Good story just wish that author won't have changed ever boy into girl for the sake of harem... His intake of 10 shadows is very different and suprisingly good, though he lacked to show sukuna as the evil king he his no slaughtering and getting suppressed... Good thing is that the story is not boring it doesn't necessarily follow jjk manga only draws inspiration from it....

Spoiler de révélation
3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
HanSooyong_Empress

i have nothing to say this is peak at its finest

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
delusionalxdreamer

Amazing stuff. I came here after reading Meta essence fic. I like Hector more. This mc is also likable but a bit shallow nonetheless. Overall this was a great read for me. Thanks keep up the good work Evans

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3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Moha_bz

The quality on this story are crazy. The mc have a good personality and the character are like in the anime

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Doge_Protagonist

This is almost as good as the Gacha story but we'll have to see how the story develops from here on out. Thumbs up and all that yeah. uhhhh..

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Nex_612

This fanfic is easily the best I've read about JJK in every sense, I can only say that I am very excited and intrigued about how Shibuya's arc will be approached and how Kenjaku will change his plan to adapt to Megumi or how characters like Hitomi and the disaster curses, Toji, femChoso, Sukuna and… Yuji will be approached

Spoiler de révélation
3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
BigBeans

Very good, I like .................................................................... ..........................................................

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Moha_bz

Please Author i need more chapter. Your story are kinda too good. 🙏🙏🙏

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3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
DaoisthKMXZg

Es una delicia de obra que emociona mucho al lector causando una gran impresión en el lector.Aunque lo unico q para mi es malo es que megumi actua muy pasivo con gojo fem.Pero despues de eso es perfecto

Spoiler de révélation
4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
RANCIDITY

A very good Waifu catalogue fanfic .... surprisingly i First readed your this story and then readed Meta essence one and didn't believe that you right that ( I like this protagonist more {subjective}) , the story is good and genderbend thing is done good for this fic ,i support this ..the protagonist is realistic (in his ideals ) at there core the story is good and light-hearted. thank you author and hope you don't drop it .............. ........ .... .. . WHERE IS THE UPDATE!!!!(⁠〒⁠﹏⁠〒⁠)

4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Emptyentity

It's great. Some may find it quite different from your gacha one, but I love this one a lot. Never thought I would touch anything with "waifu catalog" in it, but MC uses it wisely. Thanks for your work.

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4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Pedro_0000

Very goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

4mth
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LazyReaderAlways

I'm sorry, I really tried to like the story. I love the meta essence gacha and came here for more. But I really really hate the idea of a waifu gacha system. All the horrible smut interaction really put me off. in MEG, the romance was properly developed. The way the mc struggled with his love life, where he tried his best to give his all to the women he got, how he tried his best to be faithful to their wishes, how he was mindful of how his ability affected them mentally and tried to be extremely considerate, I don't see that here. Sure, I didn't read much because I don't ned to read 100 chapters to tell whether I like it or not. And I hate this. Again, I love the author, and after reading Meta Essence Gacha, this is such a disappointment. Thank you for releasing this author, but I see no point in this either being continued or you wasting your time on it to fix it. Sorry but I'm giving this a 1 star.

4mth
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