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The work of the author (translation work ) is good. It is just that the original source of the story feels like a cliche anime plot and not a good one either. There is no depth to the Main character here and the main supporting characters also lack that depth which adds to the story. it represents a less than average work and honestly in the beginning I thought given the background of the characters there would another interesting take for the genre, but the anime like plot with flat character, little to none development just takes away that charm and the story all in all feels like a badly written play
Not only does the MC have no advantage, but he arrives in a damaged body, and nothing ever happens correctly, everything he does ends in drama. I feel like I'm watching The Young and the Restless, a horror, I stop at chapter "66" I can't imagine being reincarnated as Luca, it's not fun and cool.
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La novela es muy buena, pero el problema es que el MC es un pringado con un exterior bonito, todos se meten con el, no le respetan, nadie. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena.
Author made an incident that had false charges against mc but could have been simply cleared by logic but author forced it so it became a huge plot hole.
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It's at chapter 118 that I'm going to stop following the story, I've given quite a few reviews, hoping that the writing will improve, unfortunately. From what I've been able to see, I'm one of the few who gives a review, the others just give it a thumbs up or put tyfc. So nothing changes, as I've already said, but reincarnating him is too much trouble. The main characters are more or less the same, especially Kate and Lima, who seem to be the same person just with a different nickname. Right now they're still in trouble, it's a pain now and then but not all the time, and the projects aren't moving forward. Lucas has barely appeared in a series and has two or three problems, but we're still at 118 chapters. I hope you'll read other Hollywood reincarnation stories and get inspired, because these are really good (not that yours is bad, but it's too conflicted and not work-oriented enough).
The work of the author (translation work ) is good. It is just that the original source of the story feels like a cliche anime plot and not a good one either. There is no depth to the Main character here and the main supporting characters also lack that depth which adds to the story. it represents a less than average work and honestly in the beginning I thought given the background of the characters there would another interesting take for the genre, but the anime like plot with flat character, little to none development just takes away that charm and the story all in all feels like a badly written play
Not only does the MC have no advantage, but he arrives in a damaged body, and nothing ever happens correctly, everything he does ends in drama. I feel like I'm watching The Young and the Restless, a horror, I stop at chapter "66" I can't imagine being reincarnated as Luca, it's not fun and cool.
Mc is femboy, cuck boy and pathetic . [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
La novela es muy buena, pero el problema es que el MC es un pringado con un exterior bonito, todos se meten con el, no le respetan, nadie. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena. Es una pena.
Author made an incident that had false charges against mc but could have been simply cleared by logic but author forced it so it became a huge plot hole.
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It's at chapter 118 that I'm going to stop following the story, I've given quite a few reviews, hoping that the writing will improve, unfortunately. From what I've been able to see, I'm one of the few who gives a review, the others just give it a thumbs up or put tyfc. So nothing changes, as I've already said, but reincarnating him is too much trouble. The main characters are more or less the same, especially Kate and Lima, who seem to be the same person just with a different nickname. Right now they're still in trouble, it's a pain now and then but not all the time, and the projects aren't moving forward. Lucas has barely appeared in a series and has two or three problems, but we're still at 118 chapters. I hope you'll read other Hollywood reincarnation stories and get inspired, because these are really good (not that yours is bad, but it's too conflicted and not work-oriented enough).