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Writing wise, it is very good. The plot and world building makes sense and doesn't seem unbelievable. Also it tells the perspective of what original genshin events would have been like without Lumine/Aether and replaced with another being on par with Morax. Updating wise is amazing. People would think that having an overpowered Geo Archon would be boring but no, its actually pretty funny to see Zhongli get shocked everytime (since this man always nonchalent in the game).
It's good, funny, and entertaining. Putting this little segment of text here so that I can post it, and be done with it even though this damn thing seems long enough.
Excellent story. I also really like the translation, I recommend it. If you are looking for the original story it will be difficult to read since it is paid 原神：变成幼龙，我竟成新任帝君 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
To pass the time and see something interesting that I never saw in a genshin fanfic, I recommend it, if you want to see another point of view that is not a human protagonist.
Writing wise, it is very good. The plot and world building makes sense and doesn't seem unbelievable. Also it tells the perspective of what original genshin events would have been like without Lumine/Aether and replaced with another being on par with Morax. Updating wise is amazing. People would think that having an overpowered Geo Archon would be boring but no, its actually pretty funny to see Zhongli get shocked everytime (since this man always nonchalent in the game).
It's good, funny, and entertaining. Putting this little segment of text here so that I can post it, and be done with it even though this damn thing seems long enough.
Excellent story. I also really like the translation, I recommend it. If you are looking for the original story it will be difficult to read since it is paid 原神：变成幼龙，我竟成新任帝君 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
To pass the time and see something interesting that I never saw in a genshin fanfic, I recommend it, if you want to see another point of view that is not a human protagonist.