3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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LV 1
The story is good. But I hope you will finish it and update it regularly. Looking forward to it.
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Hello everyone. I'm the author of this novel. I have been trying to improve my writing for this whole year. I hope this time I didn't make those silly mistakes. Hope you all will enjoy it even though it might be lacking as I'm not a professional yet. Thank you.
LV 1
The story is good. But I hope you will finish it and update it regularly. Looking forward to it.
Hello everyone. I'm the author of this novel. I have been trying to improve my writing for this whole year. I hope this time I didn't make those silly mistakes. Hope you all will enjoy it even though it might be lacking as I'm not a professional yet. Thank you.