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KNOWNONE

This is a very good book. I like it a lot. MC is smart and fast its one of the best books i have found out there [img=recommend][img=Cries] =)

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16h
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Chris_Wal

I was already suspicious of this fanfic after noticing a lacking synopsis for the story, but I decided to give it a try anyways. The story is written as if only trying to cater to the author who wrote it. Thus, the story is extremely chaotic and feels all over the place. I have nothing against a self insert story or a catering story that has some kind of power fantasy or “I can do whatever I want” fantasy but there is just no charm to keep the randomness and chaos in check. I didn’t read much of the story admittedly (had to stop at chapter 8) but I felt like I had seen enough by that point. I would imagine the type of person to enjoy this story would be someone who is just curious about the author’s interpretation of the powers and characters of different media and how they react to each other. [WARNING SPOILER AHEAD CH.8] The dealbreaker for me was the MC literally summoning Kaiba from Yugioh and spawning an entire company with money and assets out of thin air. Just why???

1mth
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Samuel812753

I absolutely love the story it's such a great story. Love the characters and all of it. Is he gonna have an imperial sized Harem, a small harem or just be with 2 woman's or 1 lady. Can't wait for the next chapter

2mth
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Radioactive_Noodle

Holy sh#! Bro does not know how to use paragraphs. two chapters in and theres wordwalls every time a character speaks. the author puts a dot to indicate finished sentence but doesn't bother to make them paragraphs

3mth
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Saimon_Navarrete

a qui voy acer muy sincero me encanta las historias que tengan esas situaciones de comedia y serio es muy buena para mí y ablano de la historia está bien para leer y los personajes es tan bien es echos para mí y se agrácese de sobre la música para desarrollar el texto y la historia es buena y la pregunta del millón te debería recomendar esta historia si tienes gustos en historias sobre la comedia, serio y la ira creo posdata: es lo que en tendí yo oki y es solo una opinión

3mth
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Red_Dragon_7597

Good story, some funny moments, world background is expanding with other franchises mixed in the world, a fairly good wish fulfilling Mc, characters/companions are not just women like those op mc/harem fics, no romance yet, and enjoyable and makes you hunger for another Chp especially if your bored as hell.

4mth
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ghostensaop

i love the story it reads nice and a nice way to pass the time

4mth
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DJMLucarionite

I have seen Authors do a 5 star review. This is my first novel so I am not sure how good it is so I will give it 4 stars. I am just writing for fun and I hope readers like my novel as well.

4mth
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BindgeBindge

mid work, bro turned himself into an alicorn, which is a pony, I think. Also, bro can't google the definition of harem, blud can fight a dictionary if he disagrees

4mth
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KNOWNONE

This is a very good book. I like it a lot. MC is smart and fast its one of the best books i have found out there [img=recommend][img=Cries] =)

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16h
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Chris_Wal

I was already suspicious of this fanfic after noticing a lacking synopsis for the story, but I decided to give it a try anyways. The story is written as if only trying to cater to the author who wrote it. Thus, the story is extremely chaotic and feels all over the place. I have nothing against a self insert story or a catering story that has some kind of power fantasy or “I can do whatever I want” fantasy but there is just no charm to keep the randomness and chaos in check. I didn’t read much of the story admittedly (had to stop at chapter 8) but I felt like I had seen enough by that point. I would imagine the type of person to enjoy this story would be someone who is just curious about the author’s interpretation of the powers and characters of different media and how they react to each other. [WARNING SPOILER AHEAD CH.8] The dealbreaker for me was the MC literally summoning Kaiba from Yugioh and spawning an entire company with money and assets out of thin air. Just why???

1mth
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Samuel812753

I absolutely love the story it's such a great story. Love the characters and all of it. Is he gonna have an imperial sized Harem, a small harem or just be with 2 woman's or 1 lady. Can't wait for the next chapter

2mth
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Radioactive_Noodle

Holy sh#! Bro does not know how to use paragraphs. two chapters in and theres wordwalls every time a character speaks. the author puts a dot to indicate finished sentence but doesn't bother to make them paragraphs

3mth
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Saimon_Navarrete

a qui voy acer muy sincero me encanta las historias que tengan esas situaciones de comedia y serio es muy buena para mí y ablano de la historia está bien para leer y los personajes es tan bien es echos para mí y se agrácese de sobre la música para desarrollar el texto y la historia es buena y la pregunta del millón te debería recomendar esta historia si tienes gustos en historias sobre la comedia, serio y la ira creo posdata: es lo que en tendí yo oki y es solo una opinión

3mth
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Red_Dragon_7597

Good story, some funny moments, world background is expanding with other franchises mixed in the world, a fairly good wish fulfilling Mc, characters/companions are not just women like those op mc/harem fics, no romance yet, and enjoyable and makes you hunger for another Chp especially if your bored as hell.

4mth
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ghostensaop

i love the story it reads nice and a nice way to pass the time

4mth
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DJMLucarionite

I have seen Authors do a 5 star review. This is my first novel so I am not sure how good it is so I will give it 4 stars. I am just writing for fun and I hope readers like my novel as well.

4mth
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BindgeBindge

mid work, bro turned himself into an alicorn, which is a pony, I think. Also, bro can't google the definition of harem, blud can fight a dictionary if he disagrees

4mth
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