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I really like the story development and characters, the only thing it lacks is regular/frequent updates.............................................
In your title "what am i in India in 2014?" please put ' , ' or ' ? ' after "what", It will make more sense.
Finally I was waiting for the Indian fan fiction story, please don't drop it.
I would like to look forward this book ....an indian novel with good storytelling
Gold pure gold, U can make some improvement in story' progression but don't worry too much, I just want to say don't give up this novel. Its rare to see this kind of quality in a novel based on India.
Author keep on writing I will keep supporting you. I was also planning to write a story with a reincarnated indian boy in the Alternate Universe, where he re lives his childhood and School Life while slowly becoming a person with great influence. Your story ands the way of writing about our childhood things gave me direction. I keep thinking of my school life, your story made me remember and reminisce it in a greater detail. Thank you.
finally a good Indian fanfic pls don't drop it I am really starting to like it
Amazing Story and Finally an Story with Indian Background and that to with Indian Gods. this is everything you need in a story. one thing i don't like was author-san is adding Harem. although till now there is no harem, so when we see it, at that time i would judge by the character development.
I really like the story development and characters, the only thing it lacks is regular/frequent updates.............................................
In your title "what am i in India in 2014?" please put ' , ' or ' ? ' after "what", It will make more sense.
Finally I was waiting for the Indian fan fiction story, please don't drop it.
I would like to look forward this book ....an indian novel with good storytelling
Gold pure gold, U can make some improvement in story' progression but don't worry too much, I just want to say don't give up this novel. Its rare to see this kind of quality in a novel based on India.
Author keep on writing I will keep supporting you. I was also planning to write a story with a reincarnated indian boy in the Alternate Universe, where he re lives his childhood and School Life while slowly becoming a person with great influence. Your story ands the way of writing about our childhood things gave me direction. I keep thinking of my school life, your story made me remember and reminisce it in a greater detail. Thank you.
finally a good Indian fanfic pls don't drop it I am really starting to like it
Amazing Story and Finally an Story with Indian Background and that to with Indian Gods. this is everything you need in a story. one thing i don't like was author-san is adding Harem. although till now there is no harem, so when we see it, at that time i would judge by the character development.