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I don't know why I waited so long to review this novel when it's so peak but here I finally go. First writing quality, the writing is great, little to no grammar or spelling mistakes. The story really does hold the same poeticness of the og RI and the main character has his poetic lines(mainly Rizzing people but with the title of the novel what do expect). Simple and easy 5 stars. Story development, it has great plot with unique turns and twist added to the original plot. The story is great mix of seriousness, humor, and romance without ruining all three general tones. There is also little to no plot holes that would ruin immersion especially for those who are die hard fans of the original. The plot flows nice, there is never a time were I want to skip a section(or do that thing where you look at the next couple chapter names to get hyped especially through a boring part, but I don't know if thats just me)or think an arc is dragging too long or the opposite were I think an arc was too short or not explored enough. Plot almost never feels forced(if you think anything is seemingly forced, must be heavens will). Another easy 5 stars. Character development, I might not do the character justice but trust me, the author cooked with a main character that isn't some edge lord, horn dog, idiot, or any other annoying character flaws that can seriously hurt a novel. The main character truly does live up to the novels title, he is the rizzlord, rizziah(rizz messiah), rizzking, rizzhero, rizzemperor, etc. His romance with characters doesn't feel forced or more common something boring that doesn't flow into the novel but seems like an afterthough and than an addition to the story. The author obviously knows what he is doing. The mc is not naive but also neither is he faultless and unrelatable, he is not great guy but it's RI, those don't exist. Overall, for this novel and plot being used, 10/5 character. Updating stability, this one is subjective on what you want or more than often used when people review(especially webnovel), feel entitled to. The author doesn't dump out 3 to 4 chapters a week or one every day, it's more of a weekly basis with some quicker or longer releases. While taking a longer time to update than the top fanfics, it makes up for it in the fact that the chapters are always around 2 to 3 times the length of normal fanfic chapter. The reason why I am giving it five stars on stability is because I am using my own metric and so I personally have never felt that a novels update stability should ever affect thier review, nobody judges real books by how long it took to publish or make a new book in the series, it's about the plot, character, and story. As long as the author is pumping atleast something out once in awhile, the stability is always 5 stars for me. So I will reiterate again, 5 stars. World background, this will be the simplest of them. It is reverend insanity, a complex and big world that has already been thoroughly explained and shown by the original author and in using this in a fanfic makes a pretty simple 5 stars. Additionally even if you haven't read RI you, the author of this fanfic has the world explained enough for you too catch on and not be clueless or feel like you need to do your research to understand something. So overall 5 stars for world background. Overall review rating, definite 5/5. Additionally stuff: First, while not everyone is willing or capable, which includes me, there is a patreon that has 60 MORE chapters of this novel, as of writing this novel that basically doubles the story if you choose to buy it. So if you do get addicted, you got plenty more to read. Second, a trait that is pretty rare but common on all great fanfics here(which is a telling sign of this fanfics quality) an author who actively communicates and interacts with the community they have cultivated. The author will almost always like every single comment one every paragraph within the first few hours and almost always answer questions readers have or address problems, or even tell people when something has come up in thier personal life that has caused them to not post. No one is abliged to do that but you won't be suddenly ghosted and afraid of the author suddenly dropping the story with this author. Then third and last of all to finish this review is the community is also great, while not big it is very positive and not annoying. It is similar to the Nah I'd adapt community, if it wasn't as wild or as big but still just a good time and great atmosphere(which honestly can affect reading a novel when all the comments are hating or debating). Author thanks for writing something so genuinely enjoyable to read and interact with. 👍 also here a random pick from my gallery I guess 🤷♂️
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I can confidently say that it's the best fan fiction for RI. Everything about this is good, the only issue being less chapters , as I binge read everything in a day and now I want more. So Mr.Author please continue writing this and in no way please drop this as there are many women yet to be conquered like Hei luo lan and Feng jin huang. The mc Lo jik is also one of a kind as his mentality is good for surviving in the world of RI as it's a very tough world for you if are a good character unless you have OP cheats but then story would be bland and mc would play in easy mode. Thus mc being manipulative and Selfish is good although his trait is also kind of Op it's still acceptable . Another thing is that the author didnt't destroy Fang yuan's character, but is also not following the same plot as he is introducing changes in the story which is also good . please don't drop the quality of story development and also don't drop the novel. Other than that everyone who are a fan of RI should give it a try and those who haven't read RI , so first of all go read RI as you are missing something great.
I felt like I was actually reading RI again. I hope you don’t drop it and complete it even if it takes hundreds of chapters. Love the effort by the way
Avaliação em português mesmo, enfim li essa pérola no qq e adorei, recomendo a todos que curtem uma boa obscenidade e amam o universo de RI, o sistema não é op, na verdade é bem equilibrado , e os plots são os melhores, levemente AU mas nada de mais, e essa é minha avaliação, recomendo muito.
Amazing writing skills, MC has a clear moral compass and his emotions are pretty clear (he doesn't want to rely on others, only himself), personality is consistent and his interest in women is pretty diverse excluding kids. Loads of sexual experience that makes sense, amazing smut chapters for it, MC is PATIENT, 10/10 so far. LONG chapters btw.
One of the best RI fics I've read without a doubt, the author knows how to carry the story and maintains a certain coherence with its development.
Esta historia definitivamente merece más reconocimiento. Increíble la escritura y el plot 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
this is peak fanfic, the interactions, the fights, the plot, the mc, the world building, the writing quality, everything is peak, plus this is a rare RI fanfic and that's another plus point, Author i hope you will never drop this masterpiece.
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Best FanFiction I’ve ever read. They say one’s characters can only be as smart as the writer. If that’s true, this author must have the highest IQ on Webnovel. Fang Yuan has got nothing on Lo Jik!
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
Finally! I've been waiting for RI fic from you for ages. Fei Cai's Ascension was amazing and this one mama mia! it too was amazing. Thank You Author. Although there's a thing I would like to recommend. Pacing, while to me this pacing is working and quite amazing, it worries me a bit. I knew you've already written over hundreds of chapters but going forward I would recommend you to increase the pacing. RI has a tedious amount of chapters, at this pace it would take what?, 400-500 maybe more chapters to be finished. I'm sorry to say this but at this pace there's a very high chance that you would either hit a writer block or lose interest in this fic. So please 🥺 increase the pace going forward. By some miracle you wouldn't stop writing and finished this I would be eternally grateful. 🙏🏻
Man i lost my appetite for reading this novel when he lost his wife, tho this a good novel so definitely recommend it. I have to stop at chapter 41.
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one of the best fics I've ever read it reminds me of my time reading the original RI keep going aurhor
the mc personality is peak. and the story has multitude of funny interaction and great moments 😄. the mc is intelligent he is if fang yuan and lust devil had child and went to be an actor lol. and I appreciate lemons won't say no to lemons they add spice to the story ( a wise man once said) give it a try it really good 👍
Ты должен продолжать писать... ВО ЧТО БЫ ТО НИ СТАЛО! Слишком сложно найти ПОЛНОЦЕННО законченный или хотя-бы достаточно продолжительный и увлекательный фанфик! Давай твой станет этим "единственным и не повторимым"?
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I love your Soul Land fan fic and I love this too keep up the good work////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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RI with harem? No need say anything else.___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Amazing,Wonderful,Captivating Great time management this author has No chapter feels unnecessary or stale The characters will flushed and interesting And the most important thing is the fun and interesting and somewhat evil MC. I like the way he process his thoughts and emotions. Highly recommend.
five stars This is one of the best ri stories I've ever seen. The plot is fluid. The Mc is interesting and fun, and it also has a Harem. They're finally making ri stories that have a harem, as well as the romance. Of course, you couldn't expect less from the legendary FanHarem. It's also very fun to read. Mc is learning the recipes and refining the Gu, of course. Like the rewards of the system, I'm very anxious to know what he's going to get. His character development is very good, so there's only one thing to say. It's worth reading.
Writing quality is great but the plot is horrible together with the mc. The mc is an emotionless doll, youll understand once you read past 40 chapters. And the once thought female lead also dies for plot convenience. Iay be ranting but this is my review, no one wants to see something so tragic from a somewhat happy fantasy fan fic. Dropped this.
Spoiler de révélation I don't know why I waited so long to review this novel when it's so peak but here I finally go. First writing quality, the writing is great, little to no grammar or spelling mistakes. The story really does hold the same poeticness of the og RI and the main character has his poetic lines(mainly Rizzing people but with the title of the novel what do expect). Simple and easy 5 stars. Story development, it has great plot with unique turns and twist added to the original plot. The story is great mix of seriousness, humor, and romance without ruining all three general tones. There is also little to no plot holes that would ruin immersion especially for those who are die hard fans of the original. The plot flows nice, there is never a time were I want to skip a section(or do that thing where you look at the next couple chapter names to get hyped especially through a boring part, but I don't know if thats just me)or think an arc is dragging too long or the opposite were I think an arc was too short or not explored enough. Plot almost never feels forced(if you think anything is seemingly forced, must be heavens will). Another easy 5 stars. Character development, I might not do the character justice but trust me, the author cooked with a main character that isn't some edge lord, horn dog, idiot, or any other annoying character flaws that can seriously hurt a novel. The main character truly does live up to the novels title, he is the rizzlord, rizziah(rizz messiah), rizzking, rizzhero, rizzemperor, etc. His romance with characters doesn't feel forced or more common something boring that doesn't flow into the novel but seems like an afterthough and than an addition to the story. The author obviously knows what he is doing. The mc is not naive but also neither is he faultless and unrelatable, he is not great guy but it's RI, those don't exist. Overall, for this novel and plot being used, 10/5 character. Updating stability, this one is subjective on what you want or more than often used when people review(especially webnovel), feel entitled to. The author doesn't dump out 3 to 4 chapters a week or one every day, it's more of a weekly basis with some quicker or longer releases. While taking a longer time to update than the top fanfics, it makes up for it in the fact that the chapters are always around 2 to 3 times the length of normal fanfic chapter. The reason why I am giving it five stars on stability is because I am using my own metric and so I personally have never felt that a novels update stability should ever affect thier review, nobody judges real books by how long it took to publish or make a new book in the series, it's about the plot, character, and story. As long as the author is pumping atleast something out once in awhile, the stability is always 5 stars for me. So I will reiterate again, 5 stars. World background, this will be the simplest of them. It is reverend insanity, a complex and big world that has already been thoroughly explained and shown by the original author and in using this in a fanfic makes a pretty simple 5 stars. Additionally even if you haven't read RI you, the author of this fanfic has the world explained enough for you too catch on and not be clueless or feel like you need to do your research to understand something. So overall 5 stars for world background. Overall review rating, definite 5/5. Additionally stuff: First, while not everyone is willing or capable, which includes me, there is a patreon that has 60 MORE chapters of this novel, as of writing this novel that basically doubles the story if you choose to buy it. So if you do get addicted, you got plenty more to read. Second, a trait that is pretty rare but common on all great fanfics here(which is a telling sign of this fanfics quality) an author who actively communicates and interacts with the community they have cultivated. The author will almost always like every single comment one every paragraph within the first few hours and almost always answer questions readers have or address problems, or even tell people when something has come up in thier personal life that has caused them to not post. No one is abliged to do that but you won't be suddenly ghosted and afraid of the author suddenly dropping the story with this author. Then third and last of all to finish this review is the community is also great, while not big it is very positive and not annoying. It is similar to the Nah I'd adapt community, if it wasn't as wild or as big but still just a good time and great atmosphere(which honestly can affect reading a novel when all the comments are hating or debating). Author thanks for writing something so genuinely enjoyable to read and interact with. 👍 also here a random pick from my gallery I guess 🤷♂️
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I can confidently say that it's the best fan fiction for RI. Everything about this is good, the only issue being less chapters , as I binge read everything in a day and now I want more. So Mr.Author please continue writing this and in no way please drop this as there are many women yet to be conquered like Hei luo lan and Feng jin huang. The mc Lo jik is also one of a kind as his mentality is good for surviving in the world of RI as it's a very tough world for you if are a good character unless you have OP cheats but then story would be bland and mc would play in easy mode. Thus mc being manipulative and Selfish is good although his trait is also kind of Op it's still acceptable . Another thing is that the author didnt't destroy Fang yuan's character, but is also not following the same plot as he is introducing changes in the story which is also good . please don't drop the quality of story development and also don't drop the novel. Other than that everyone who are a fan of RI should give it a try and those who haven't read RI , so first of all go read RI as you are missing something great.
I felt like I was actually reading RI again. I hope you don’t drop it and complete it even if it takes hundreds of chapters. Love the effort by the way
Avaliação em português mesmo, enfim li essa pérola no qq e adorei, recomendo a todos que curtem uma boa obscenidade e amam o universo de RI, o sistema não é op, na verdade é bem equilibrado , e os plots são os melhores, levemente AU mas nada de mais, e essa é minha avaliação, recomendo muito.
Amazing writing skills, MC has a clear moral compass and his emotions are pretty clear (he doesn't want to rely on others, only himself), personality is consistent and his interest in women is pretty diverse excluding kids. Loads of sexual experience that makes sense, amazing smut chapters for it, MC is PATIENT, 10/10 so far. LONG chapters btw.
One of the best RI fics I've read without a doubt, the author knows how to carry the story and maintains a certain coherence with its development.
Esta historia definitivamente merece más reconocimiento. Increíble la escritura y el plot 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
this is peak fanfic, the interactions, the fights, the plot, the mc, the world building, the writing quality, everything is peak, plus this is a rare RI fanfic and that's another plus point, Author i hope you will never drop this masterpiece.
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Best FanFiction I’ve ever read. They say one’s characters can only be as smart as the writer. If that’s true, this author must have the highest IQ on Webnovel. Fang Yuan has got nothing on Lo Jik!
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
Finally! I've been waiting for RI fic from you for ages. Fei Cai's Ascension was amazing and this one mama mia! it too was amazing. Thank You Author. Although there's a thing I would like to recommend. Pacing, while to me this pacing is working and quite amazing, it worries me a bit. I knew you've already written over hundreds of chapters but going forward I would recommend you to increase the pacing. RI has a tedious amount of chapters, at this pace it would take what?, 400-500 maybe more chapters to be finished. I'm sorry to say this but at this pace there's a very high chance that you would either hit a writer block or lose interest in this fic. So please 🥺 increase the pace going forward. By some miracle you wouldn't stop writing and finished this I would be eternally grateful. 🙏🏻
Man i lost my appetite for reading this novel when he lost his wife, tho this a good novel so definitely recommend it. I have to stop at chapter 41.
Spoiler de révélation one of the best fics I've ever read it reminds me of my time reading the original RI keep going aurhor
the mc personality is peak. and the story has multitude of funny interaction and great moments 😄. the mc is intelligent he is if fang yuan and lust devil had child and went to be an actor lol. and I appreciate lemons won't say no to lemons they add spice to the story ( a wise man once said) give it a try it really good 👍
Ты должен продолжать писать... ВО ЧТО БЫ ТО НИ СТАЛО! Слишком сложно найти ПОЛНОЦЕННО законченный или хотя-бы достаточно продолжительный и увлекательный фанфик! Давай твой станет этим "единственным и не повторимым"?
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I love your Soul Land fan fic and I love this too keep up the good work////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Spoiler de révélation RI with harem? No need say anything else.___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Amazing,Wonderful,Captivating Great time management this author has No chapter feels unnecessary or stale The characters will flushed and interesting And the most important thing is the fun and interesting and somewhat evil MC. I like the way he process his thoughts and emotions. Highly recommend.
five stars This is one of the best ri stories I've ever seen. The plot is fluid. The Mc is interesting and fun, and it also has a Harem. They're finally making ri stories that have a harem, as well as the romance. Of course, you couldn't expect less from the legendary FanHarem. It's also very fun to read. Mc is learning the recipes and refining the Gu, of course. Like the rewards of the system, I'm very anxious to know what he's going to get. His character development is very good, so there's only one thing to say. It's worth reading.
Writing quality is great but the plot is horrible together with the mc. The mc is an emotionless doll, youll understand once you read past 40 chapters. And the once thought female lead also dies for plot convenience. Iay be ranting but this is my review, no one wants to see something so tragic from a somewhat happy fantasy fan fic. Dropped this.
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