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I really like the story but I wish the ML was less obnoxious. I also find the dialogue very forced.
FL is tough and smart. She is the best part of the story. Romance is okay. Second MLs are better IMO.
FL is awesome. I am not a fan of the ML. I care more about the FL’s back story and want her to dominate the world. I don’t care for the ML and would rather he get replaced for someone cooler.
not entirely which category this story falls in. the Mc does her best to remain invisible until the likely love interest begins targeting her because of an accident that left him embarrassed. then things go downhill for her from there. she's also trying to hide from her father, but it isn't clear as to what the specific reason is. nor is it clear if it'll come into play later on. overall, rather interesting and has me interested in finding out more about where the story will go.
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Enemies to lover is my favorite setup. FL is awesome. Sadly, the ML’s personality is not attractive at all. FL’s backstory is interesting but I am having a hard time rooting for the ML getting with the FL.
The bet keeps changing. I love the story but the details aren’t consistent. I find this with a lot of stories, not just this one. It’s almost like the author forgets what she has already established and then changes it. I’m not sure if it’s on purpose or inadvertent. It makes the story a bit confusing of what the bet terms are bc they keep changing.
I really like the story but I wish the ML was less obnoxious. I also find the dialogue very forced.
FL is tough and smart. She is the best part of the story. Romance is okay. Second MLs are better IMO.
FL is awesome. I am not a fan of the ML. I care more about the FL’s back story and want her to dominate the world. I don’t care for the ML and would rather he get replaced for someone cooler.
not entirely which category this story falls in. the Mc does her best to remain invisible until the likely love interest begins targeting her because of an accident that left him embarrassed. then things go downhill for her from there. she's also trying to hide from her father, but it isn't clear as to what the specific reason is. nor is it clear if it'll come into play later on. overall, rather interesting and has me interested in finding out more about where the story will go.
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Enemies to lover is my favorite setup. FL is awesome. Sadly, the ML’s personality is not attractive at all. FL’s backstory is interesting but I am having a hard time rooting for the ML getting with the FL.
The bet keeps changing. I love the story but the details aren’t consistent. I find this with a lot of stories, not just this one. It’s almost like the author forgets what she has already established and then changes it. I’m not sure if it’s on purpose or inadvertent. It makes the story a bit confusing of what the bet terms are bc they keep changing.
just here for the fps mate sorry ...........