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the romance is rushed, there's no relationship development, instant op and edgylord mc, mc main goal is to collecting women. literally it's just like akikan fic. not approved 👎
great novel as usual. not fast paced or slow paced. a perfect balance and it doesnt reach a plateau story wise it keeps getting intriguing.
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oh, the new main character saves everyone, charms everyone in a matter of hours and also goes crazy with fast power, blabla... What the hell? Why can’t stories like this develop without such toothless and plastic techniques? Is this how human relationships work? I don’t care about the harem, but when the main character is presented on a silver platter with everything that much more worthy people are tearing their veins apart for, it’s just funny! The whole fanfic is a piece of continuous disappointment. Powers from nowhere. Love of Girls out of nowhere. Praise of others for any "good" deed of the main character, none of which he did simply out of good intentions. I may be wrong, but the fanfic reminds me of another Chinese story but with characters from Anime. That's all. It is literally difficult for me to describe what is happening in the fanfic, since it follows the same paths, like almost any Chinese story. Only here the Main Character Absolutely does not deserve the benefits he received, since any of his achievements cost him almost nothing.
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
good job for doing a good translation while its hard to do, however i like to suggest to make your own ff and make this an example of the ff.by the way, the story are good but i cant stand the story of the original author and good job, have a nice year and good luck
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You know... I think you should tone down that chinese MC attitude of the main character. At first, it’s kind of amusing, but after a while... it just becomes annoying. I haven’t read too many chapters so far, just around 20 or so, but so far the main character appears to be just dumb, selfish, and perverted.
Alta historia, sigua asi joven, esta padre la historia............................................................................................................................
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This fantasy novel is great and very enjoyable, and although it is still in its early stages, the hero's character is attractive and strong, which increases the excitement. I am excited to see how events will develop with him.🔥☠️
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I dont know what to say other than this is a peak fic, its amazing and so much fun to read Looking forward to more from you Author Arigato
Thank you for the wonderful translation, my brother, and your choice of this story is really successful, but I have a request, can you publish more chapters
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Really curious if girls from other anime will have cursed techniques? That would be cool. ..........................................................
I liked the story and its pace, not too slow and not too fast. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...........................[img=recommend]
Hi, I’ve taken the time to translate the names properly and smooth out any awkward lines, but there could still be a few errors. I’m open to any suggestions or feedback. I really believe it’s a great story, and I’ve put in a lot of effort to make it enjoyable for everyone. Have a nice read, Thank you
the romance is rushed, there's no relationship development, instant op and edgylord mc, mc main goal is to collecting women. literally it's just like akikan fic. not approved 👎
great novel as usual. not fast paced or slow paced. a perfect balance and it doesnt reach a plateau story wise it keeps getting intriguing.
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oh, the new main character saves everyone, charms everyone in a matter of hours and also goes crazy with fast power, blabla... What the hell? Why can’t stories like this develop without such toothless and plastic techniques? Is this how human relationships work? I don’t care about the harem, but when the main character is presented on a silver platter with everything that much more worthy people are tearing their veins apart for, it’s just funny! The whole fanfic is a piece of continuous disappointment. Powers from nowhere. Love of Girls out of nowhere. Praise of others for any "good" deed of the main character, none of which he did simply out of good intentions. I may be wrong, but the fanfic reminds me of another Chinese story but with characters from Anime. That's all. It is literally difficult for me to describe what is happening in the fanfic, since it follows the same paths, like almost any Chinese story. Only here the Main Character Absolutely does not deserve the benefits he received, since any of his achievements cost him almost nothing.
Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too. Good novel, i like it. don't forget to stop by my place to get good novels too.
good job for doing a good translation while its hard to do, however i like to suggest to make your own ff and make this an example of the ff.by the way, the story are good but i cant stand the story of the original author and good job, have a nice year and good luck
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You know... I think you should tone down that chinese MC attitude of the main character. At first, it’s kind of amusing, but after a while... it just becomes annoying. I haven’t read too many chapters so far, just around 20 or so, but so far the main character appears to be just dumb, selfish, and perverted.
Alta historia, sigua asi joven, esta padre la historia............................................................................................................................
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This fantasy novel is great and very enjoyable, and although it is still in its early stages, the hero's character is attractive and strong, which increases the excitement. I am excited to see how events will develop with him.🔥☠️
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I dont know what to say other than this is a peak fic, its amazing and so much fun to read Looking forward to more from you Author Arigato
Thank you for the wonderful translation, my brother, and your choice of this story is really successful, but I have a request, can you publish more chapters
I like it______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Really curious if girls from other anime will have cursed techniques? That would be cool. ..........................................................
I liked the story and its pace, not too slow and not too fast. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍...........................[img=recommend]
Hi, I’ve taken the time to translate the names properly and smooth out any awkward lines, but there could still be a few errors. I’m open to any suggestions or feedback. I really believe it’s a great story, and I’ve put in a lot of effort to make it enjoyable for everyone. Have a nice read, Thank you
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