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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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love it................................................................................................................................................
Started off cool, nice worldbuilding and the protag had some of the typical chinese novel stereotypes but they were tolerable because there wasn’t any ultra national, china number 1 type stuff but now its gone into this weird nebulous state where its about to cross the event horizon and just become the typical Chinese protag to a higher degree.
Awesome can't wait to see what happens next hopefully soon 🎇🎆🎊🎉.................................................,..,.,,.,.,..,,.,..,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.
it has a bit of uniqueness in its writing and plot lines which is quite weird but I love it please release more chapters fast. love this book <3
Not a bad story, but it's not a particularly good one. I'm not sure if it's a translation or not, but story progression is fine . My only problem with the story is mc being too frivolous. He doesn't really feel like a character but rather an observer. Sure, he might help here and there, but he does it for his own amusement. He's like a petulant child who has suddenly gotten massive powers and let it get to his head, which honestly a trademark of mtl translation. Anyway, thank you for the story.
Honestly i enjoyed what ive read so far. Hopefully it continues to on being like this and not turning shit
Writing quality is nice, development of the story is hectic and worst part of it the MC is a clown, a wuss and maybe a doormat. He is spanked on each and every chapter. Got duped, ordered around like the b*th he is and so on. Ancient one uses him as whatever she deems necessary, avengers uses him as shield. He has no respect for himself and all the jokes flying left and right does not change that even tho he has a strong system he has no backbone. No character.
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love it................................................................................................................................................
Started off cool, nice worldbuilding and the protag had some of the typical chinese novel stereotypes but they were tolerable because there wasn’t any ultra national, china number 1 type stuff but now its gone into this weird nebulous state where its about to cross the event horizon and just become the typical Chinese protag to a higher degree.
Awesome can't wait to see what happens next hopefully soon 🎇🎆🎊🎉.................................................,..,.,,.,.,..,,.,..,.,.,,..,,.,..,,.,.
it has a bit of uniqueness in its writing and plot lines which is quite weird but I love it please release more chapters fast. love this book <3
Not a bad story, but it's not a particularly good one. I'm not sure if it's a translation or not, but story progression is fine . My only problem with the story is mc being too frivolous. He doesn't really feel like a character but rather an observer. Sure, he might help here and there, but he does it for his own amusement. He's like a petulant child who has suddenly gotten massive powers and let it get to his head, which honestly a trademark of mtl translation. Anyway, thank you for the story.
Honestly i enjoyed what ive read so far. Hopefully it continues to on being like this and not turning shit
Writing quality is nice, development of the story is hectic and worst part of it the MC is a clown, a wuss and maybe a doormat. He is spanked on each and every chapter. Got duped, ordered around like the b*th he is and so on. Ancient one uses him as whatever she deems necessary, avengers uses him as shield. He has no respect for himself and all the jokes flying left and right does not change that even tho he has a strong system he has no backbone. No character.