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The pacing is good: the author makes sure to write about the MC when he trains, learns new jutsu and other important moments like missions, etc. It's good that the boring part is skipped. Quality is pretty good and the thing that sets this book apart from the rest is that this isn't a translation. It doesn't include shtty cultivation bs or talk about tribulations and what not. As for updates, it's got one of the best updates I've seen on this platform. The author goes from 1 to 6 per day, but since he has put in conditions for extra chapters and from the upload rate, it looks like the readers are doing a good job at reaching the goals. Due to this, the actual upload rate is around 3 to 6 per day. So far, I'm liking it a lot but if there are people who do not like the aburame clan, then this book isn't for you. But if there are people who still want to give it a try then there's a plus point about this book too. He's from the aburame clan, but from how the story is going, it looks like the Author plans on using the bugs as a supportive measure instead of the only way the aburame people fight, like in the anime. So yeah, I'm pretty hyped for how it'll turn out in the future.
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This is to spite the troll , Mister_robot. Please dont mind me . The novel is nice . Please read it. ............................................................
what's going on bro are u rewrite? woah???????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is not for me. The final straw was that the MC is clearly an idiot, but suddenly, he masters space-time ninjutsu in less than 24 hrs? just because modern people know about space??? We don't know about space more than people who can literally teleport. He makes one of the most difficult seals on his first day without prior fuinjustu training? The pacing is too fast for me too. Characterization is all off for all the characters as well. Others may enjoy it but not me.
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I think this is one of the best books I’ve read in a long while good job keep it going
Protagonista é do clã aburame. Preciso dizer algo a mais? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thx for the great novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing quality 5/5 (it's okay) Updating stability 5/5 (it's good) Story develooment 2/5 (very random) Character design 4/5 (normal I guess) World background 3/5 (the story contains mistakes about naruto world in general and I have no doubt more mistakes will appear) Current chap: 30
va muy bien hasta ahora no debilites los personajes en exceso por favor mantén el nivel y la velocidad del avance de poder y de la historia gracias
It's a good novel if you like Naruto and are bored I would recommend this since it's unique compared to others and fast paced to a degree so you can catch up easily.
ta bastante bueno no se si es tradición o no no me fijé si lo pone pero está de pana banana
Overall I’ve found this ff entertaining and intriguing. The system is unique, or at the very least different from most others i’ve seen, it isn’t overbearing and gifting him incredible power every few chapters, the pacing for growth and the story is nice. The MC is entertaining and likeable, has a lot of potential and with the system somewhat working in the background i’m interested to see how the MC further exploits the system and his path of development. In short, give it a chance even if it’s not for you you still get to enjoy a couple chapters with quality writing. My only complaint is the chapters are a bit short
Overall the story is pretty good, the MC isn't annoying and while he's not overpowered yet, he definitely has the potential to be eventually. The fights are also pretty well written , so far it's been better than most Naruto fics.
I have read 20 chapters and i can say it was good. The characters are typical ninjas that we know. The side character doesn't glaze mc yet. The point system is kinda simple and can become confusing but not really important to remember as the author will remind later ig overall: Keep pushing the chapter and keep the quality good. Take it slow
i like this ff very much , really nice and unique because he’s from aburame clan . now i already comment , give us more chatper please XD
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Its a good start, few issues but good start. you are reading a book with overpowered mc, keep that in mind. till now there is no setbacks for him. give it a try... one thing i dont understand is that he chose hashirama body as his cheat, system is there to quantify his power but even with this cheat his recovery is F rank ?? mc said he has unlimited recovery due to his cheat already at f rank... what happens at S rank then ? i believe considering his cheat, the recovery rank should have increased automatically.
Just following traditions. I'm writing this book for fun and to improve my skills as an author. I'm not claiming that my book is perfect, but I promise you that I'll listen to the comments. Ofc, only the comments that make sense. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them.
The pacing is good: the author makes sure to write about the MC when he trains, learns new jutsu and other important moments like missions, etc. It's good that the boring part is skipped. Quality is pretty good and the thing that sets this book apart from the rest is that this isn't a translation. It doesn't include shtty cultivation bs or talk about tribulations and what not. As for updates, it's got one of the best updates I've seen on this platform. The author goes from 1 to 6 per day, but since he has put in conditions for extra chapters and from the upload rate, it looks like the readers are doing a good job at reaching the goals. Due to this, the actual upload rate is around 3 to 6 per day. So far, I'm liking it a lot but if there are people who do not like the aburame clan, then this book isn't for you. But if there are people who still want to give it a try then there's a plus point about this book too. He's from the aburame clan, but from how the story is going, it looks like the Author plans on using the bugs as a supportive measure instead of the only way the aburame people fight, like in the anime. So yeah, I'm pretty hyped for how it'll turn out in the future.
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This is to spite the troll , Mister_robot. Please dont mind me . The novel is nice . Please read it. ............................................................
what's going on bro are u rewrite? woah???????????????????? ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This is not for me. The final straw was that the MC is clearly an idiot, but suddenly, he masters space-time ninjutsu in less than 24 hrs? just because modern people know about space??? We don't know about space more than people who can literally teleport. He makes one of the most difficult seals on his first day without prior fuinjustu training? The pacing is too fast for me too. Characterization is all off for all the characters as well. Others may enjoy it but not me.
Spoiler de révélation I think this is one of the best books I’ve read in a long while good job keep it going
Protagonista é do clã aburame. Preciso dizer algo a mais? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thx for the great novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Writing quality 5/5 (it's okay) Updating stability 5/5 (it's good) Story develooment 2/5 (very random) Character design 4/5 (normal I guess) World background 3/5 (the story contains mistakes about naruto world in general and I have no doubt more mistakes will appear) Current chap: 30
va muy bien hasta ahora no debilites los personajes en exceso por favor mantén el nivel y la velocidad del avance de poder y de la historia gracias
It's a good novel if you like Naruto and are bored I would recommend this since it's unique compared to others and fast paced to a degree so you can catch up easily.
ta bastante bueno no se si es tradición o no no me fijé si lo pone pero está de pana banana
Overall I’ve found this ff entertaining and intriguing. The system is unique, or at the very least different from most others i’ve seen, it isn’t overbearing and gifting him incredible power every few chapters, the pacing for growth and the story is nice. The MC is entertaining and likeable, has a lot of potential and with the system somewhat working in the background i’m interested to see how the MC further exploits the system and his path of development. In short, give it a chance even if it’s not for you you still get to enjoy a couple chapters with quality writing. My only complaint is the chapters are a bit short
Overall the story is pretty good, the MC isn't annoying and while he's not overpowered yet, he definitely has the potential to be eventually. The fights are also pretty well written , so far it's been better than most Naruto fics.
I have read 20 chapters and i can say it was good. The characters are typical ninjas that we know. The side character doesn't glaze mc yet. The point system is kinda simple and can become confusing but not really important to remember as the author will remind later ig overall: Keep pushing the chapter and keep the quality good. Take it slow
i like this ff very much , really nice and unique because he’s from aburame clan . now i already comment , give us more chatper please XD
Spoiler de révélation Its a good start, few issues but good start. you are reading a book with overpowered mc, keep that in mind. till now there is no setbacks for him. give it a try... one thing i dont understand is that he chose hashirama body as his cheat, system is there to quantify his power but even with this cheat his recovery is F rank ?? mc said he has unlimited recovery due to his cheat already at f rank... what happens at S rank then ? i believe considering his cheat, the recovery rank should have increased automatically.
Just following traditions. I'm writing this book for fun and to improve my skills as an author. I'm not claiming that my book is perfect, but I promise you that I'll listen to the comments. Ofc, only the comments that make sense. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them.