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although the synopsis is good but it just feels like it's made using Ai I mean every sentence he gotta talk there's a too much descriptive words like it just ruins the immersive feeling I mean he keeps repeating he's cold,emotionless with every time I read Author if this is made by Ai then please put in in the synopsis so other readers won't regret it and it can ruin someone's time
I typed this review with slow deliberate moves, my cold calculating eyes flaring up as i knew the effectiveness that my review held, yet i showed no ounce of mercy as i rated it 5 stars, putting on a mask to hide my true opinions.
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Not cold, calculating, indifferent, cool, mechanical, or emotionless enough. His indifferent, emotionless, and calculating eyes are too much like a normal person's eyes. Don't get me started on how not calculating, cool, and dark he is on the inside. 0/10, needs to drown more pigeons tbh. In case you didn't get the joke in my cold, indifferent, calculating, and cool opinion this story is a little repetitive with it's descriptors and is a bit too edgy for me while I'm sober.
sasuke or hinata or the both ? ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Two chapters in, and i can say that this is one of most promising Naruto Fanfictions on this side i saw. Keep up with good work. You have solid start.
I already like it, the author, just don't rush Think about everything and do not be afraid to change the canon and let it be a slow pace in terms of romance and history
although the synopsis is good but it just feels like it's made using Ai I mean every sentence he gotta talk there's a too much descriptive words like it just ruins the immersive feeling I mean he keeps repeating he's cold,emotionless with every time I read Author if this is made by Ai then please put in in the synopsis so other readers won't regret it and it can ruin someone's time
I typed this review with slow deliberate moves, my cold calculating eyes flaring up as i knew the effectiveness that my review held, yet i showed no ounce of mercy as i rated it 5 stars, putting on a mask to hide my true opinions.
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Spoiler de révélation Not cold, calculating, indifferent, cool, mechanical, or emotionless enough. His indifferent, emotionless, and calculating eyes are too much like a normal person's eyes. Don't get me started on how not calculating, cool, and dark he is on the inside. 0/10, needs to drown more pigeons tbh. In case you didn't get the joke in my cold, indifferent, calculating, and cool opinion this story is a little repetitive with it's descriptors and is a bit too edgy for me while I'm sober.
sasuke or hinata or the both ? ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Two chapters in, and i can say that this is one of most promising Naruto Fanfictions on this side i saw. Keep up with good work. You have solid start.
I already like it, the author, just don't rush Think about everything and do not be afraid to change the canon and let it be a slow pace in terms of romance and history
Bruh sasuke using shadow clones as a three year old 😂