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full of plot holes, the chapters repeat info,the system makes almost no sense and the author seems to have forgot the most basic powers of sayians.
It’s an alright read. Most fight scenes are meaningless tbh, specially later on. Like there are entire chapters dedicated to fights between people with a power level of 40k vs people with a power level of like 5… this has some of the most dogshit power scaling you would ever see, don’t expect reasonable fights or entertaining ones for that matter. Read if you want, it’s between being trash and passable.
As you can see from the picture - it's ai fanfic. Writing doesn't have grammar errors, but it sucks because of AI brainrot 2/5 Updates are frequent so 5/5 Story - canon even when it shouldn't make sense, so 2/5 (it's worse than canon) Characters are just there for plot, and due to nonsensical harem 2/5 World background - I have no doubt the world background will be a simplified version of canon as it is now, so 2/5
if the author made a dragon ball story with a transmigrate it would be great but it seems that the story is about a pervert who only thinks with his p*nis
é raro encontrar boas histórias de dragon ball mano a sua história está incrível espero que continue escrevendo e não desista dela também espero que não se importe com comentários negativos que aparecerem sempre tem pessoas querendo jogar palavras horríveis no trabalho duro de outros 🤔😁😁👍👍👍
Nice dragonball one of my fav plus harem thx for the novel[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello thare, I just added this story to my collection, and wanted to Ask you if this story has Harem and Lemons elements in it? if it is, who will be in it?
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full of plot holes, the chapters repeat info,the system makes almost no sense and the author seems to have forgot the most basic powers of sayians.
It’s an alright read. Most fight scenes are meaningless tbh, specially later on. Like there are entire chapters dedicated to fights between people with a power level of 40k vs people with a power level of like 5… this has some of the most dogshit power scaling you would ever see, don’t expect reasonable fights or entertaining ones for that matter. Read if you want, it’s between being trash and passable.
As you can see from the picture - it's ai fanfic. Writing doesn't have grammar errors, but it sucks because of AI brainrot 2/5 Updates are frequent so 5/5 Story - canon even when it shouldn't make sense, so 2/5 (it's worse than canon) Characters are just there for plot, and due to nonsensical harem 2/5 World background - I have no doubt the world background will be a simplified version of canon as it is now, so 2/5
if the author made a dragon ball story with a transmigrate it would be great but it seems that the story is about a pervert who only thinks with his p*nis
é raro encontrar boas histórias de dragon ball mano a sua história está incrível espero que continue escrevendo e não desista dela também espero que não se importe com comentários negativos que aparecerem sempre tem pessoas querendo jogar palavras horríveis no trabalho duro de outros 🤔😁😁👍👍👍
Nice dragonball one of my fav plus harem thx for the novel[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello thare, I just added this story to my collection, and wanted to Ask you if this story has Harem and Lemons elements in it? if it is, who will be in it?
AI slop with no soul.