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MCs who spoil the story is just a turn off and this MC can't keep his mouth shut. Also time and time again he kept meeting canon characters, it's just a series of deux machinas at this point. The crew is also bunch of kids, Kid MC is another turn off. Sun Wukong is such an effective click bait, ngl.
The story is incredible, I like the direction it's going, but this delay for the MC to start using the baton is killing me, finally it's time to start accumulating chapters
4/5/5/5/5 Really interesting concept executed wonderfully. MC's personality is similar to Luffy, except with the MC having a more mature understanding of the world and a slightly greyer morality, essentially the author captures the essence of "Sun Wukong" sufficiently enough. I really like the creative placement of the events and character interactions the plot brings the protagonist through, and the MC's personality allows for him to really bounce off a lot of the more friendly characters. Humor can be a bit too meta for my tastes and sometimes the dialogue has felt stiff, those are my only gripes though. Really fun and fantastic story so far.
You know the moment I saw the game black myth wukong I started liking sun wukong and I just realized Goku is exactly like Sun wukong o hope this story has a harem and I hope the story gets more popular and luffy is like a monkey crazy right
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Started of good but went to hell with his Oda bs. Just like a typical trash tl novel .
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MCs who spoil the story is just a turn off and this MC can't keep his mouth shut. Also time and time again he kept meeting canon characters, it's just a series of deux machinas at this point. The crew is also bunch of kids, Kid MC is another turn off. Sun Wukong is such an effective click bait, ngl.
The story is incredible, I like the direction it's going, but this delay for the MC to start using the baton is killing me, finally it's time to start accumulating chapters
4/5/5/5/5 Really interesting concept executed wonderfully. MC's personality is similar to Luffy, except with the MC having a more mature understanding of the world and a slightly greyer morality, essentially the author captures the essence of "Sun Wukong" sufficiently enough. I really like the creative placement of the events and character interactions the plot brings the protagonist through, and the MC's personality allows for him to really bounce off a lot of the more friendly characters. Humor can be a bit too meta for my tastes and sometimes the dialogue has felt stiff, those are my only gripes though. Really fun and fantastic story so far.
You know the moment I saw the game black myth wukong I started liking sun wukong and I just realized Goku is exactly like Sun wukong o hope this story has a harem and I hope the story gets more popular and luffy is like a monkey crazy right
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Started of good but went to hell with his Oda bs. Just like a typical trash tl novel .