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This novel has a solid foundation of action and an intriguing world. The plot unfolds in a future with advanced technology and bioterrorism, which gives it a unique twist. The pacing is fast, which works well for an action novel, but at times the descriptions feel a bit heavy and can slow down the reading. The fight scenes are well-executed, especially with the use of military technology, which makes the warlike setting believable.
The Arm Slaves concept reminds me quite a bit of the anime Full Metal Panic. And despite one or two grammatical issues that need to be fixed, I would say that this story has quite a bit of potential.
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This is great. It's rare to see a mecha novel but it reminds me of a game I used to play called Front Mission 3. Nostalgia came in as I read through it. World building is good, plot is also fast so it's not boring to read. Keep wrirting and improving. Looking forward to reading more of it soon.
This novel has a solid foundation of action and an intriguing world. The plot unfolds in a future with advanced technology and bioterrorism, which gives it a unique twist. The pacing is fast, which works well for an action novel, but at times the descriptions feel a bit heavy and can slow down the reading. The fight scenes are well-executed, especially with the use of military technology, which makes the warlike setting believable.
The Arm Slaves concept reminds me quite a bit of the anime Full Metal Panic. And despite one or two grammatical issues that need to be fixed, I would say that this story has quite a bit of potential.
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
This is great. It's rare to see a mecha novel but it reminds me of a game I used to play called Front Mission 3. Nostalgia came in as I read through it. World building is good, plot is also fast so it's not boring to read. Keep wrirting and improving. Looking forward to reading more of it soon.