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Tinha potencial ficou uma merda quando ele conseguiu a espada demoníaca com um espírito e trata o espírito como uma amante, perdeu toda graça
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till around 25 chapters MC is good but after that he is just simp and trash like every chinese fanfic young master. he tries to pretend to be cautious but he fails every time. SIMP
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Lo voy a leer, últimamente, necesito comedia y romance. Si tengo una queja, sería: porque solo hay buenas historias de atg, soul land, y similares? Tengo al menos tres historias simultáneas de estas tres series chinas que no paran de salir continuamente historias buenas! Realmente espero encontrar algo decente de otras series, como martial god asura o long live sumoners, incluso tail of demons and gods, son historias geniales(martial god asura solo es genial hasta que mc llega a la tierra santa de la marcialidad, admito que los elfos eran bonitos, pero perdió la emocion y adrenalina que habia mientras estaba en el reino inferior, sin decir que el muy bastardo en realidad abandonó a sus waifus... Esos mc chinos obsesionados con la fuerza se pasan...), pero sus fics en webnovel dejan mucho que desear, solo uno o dos decentes en total... En fin, si alguien tiene una recomendación de una serie de MGA o LLS, estaría feliz...
i don't understand why did majority of fanfic author use flame mantra or technique similar. that method is too hype. in other cultivation stories there many more better method. take some inspiration pls
The story is good, I just hope that in the future the harem is not just for decoration...................................................................................
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The translation is very good and fluid and the Chinese poison has also been removed 10/10.......................................................
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For now(Chapter 25)... Good 5⭐! Continue the update, a big update if possible muehehehe. . . . Well, that's all.
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This fic is very good, because in it, we see how Xiao Se moves towards the top of the Cultivation World, using the opportunities provided by the theft system. If possible, translate the other heist fic this author has as well.
Spoiler de révélation
Hey, Translator of this work here with his shameless 5 star review. This story has been one of my all time favourite BTTH fanfictions. And I wanted to share it with you guys. There are lots of funny moments in this fiction that'll make you laugh. So I hope you guys enjoy it. And also if you guys want to ask any questions. Please ask it here.
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Tinha potencial ficou uma merda quando ele conseguiu a espada demoníaca com um espírito e trata o espírito como uma amante, perdeu toda graça
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till around 25 chapters MC is good but after that he is just simp and trash like every chinese fanfic young master. he tries to pretend to be cautious but he fails every time. SIMP
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Lo voy a leer, últimamente, necesito comedia y romance. Si tengo una queja, sería: porque solo hay buenas historias de atg, soul land, y similares? Tengo al menos tres historias simultáneas de estas tres series chinas que no paran de salir continuamente historias buenas! Realmente espero encontrar algo decente de otras series, como martial god asura o long live sumoners, incluso tail of demons and gods, son historias geniales(martial god asura solo es genial hasta que mc llega a la tierra santa de la marcialidad, admito que los elfos eran bonitos, pero perdió la emocion y adrenalina que habia mientras estaba en el reino inferior, sin decir que el muy bastardo en realidad abandonó a sus waifus... Esos mc chinos obsesionados con la fuerza se pasan...), pero sus fics en webnovel dejan mucho que desear, solo uno o dos decentes en total... En fin, si alguien tiene una recomendación de una serie de MGA o LLS, estaría feliz...
i don't understand why did majority of fanfic author use flame mantra or technique similar. that method is too hype. in other cultivation stories there many more better method. take some inspiration pls
The story is good, I just hope that in the future the harem is not just for decoration...................................................................................
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The translation is very good and fluid and the Chinese poison has also been removed 10/10.......................................................
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For now(Chapter 25)... Good 5⭐! Continue the update, a big update if possible muehehehe. . . . Well, that's all.
Good ...........................................................................................................................................................
This fic is very good, because in it, we see how Xiao Se moves towards the top of the Cultivation World, using the opportunities provided by the theft system. If possible, translate the other heist fic this author has as well.
Spoiler de révélation
Hey, Translator of this work here with his shameless 5 star review. This story has been one of my all time favourite BTTH fanfictions. And I wanted to share it with you guys. There are lots of funny moments in this fiction that'll make you laugh. So I hope you guys enjoy it. And also if you guys want to ask any questions. Please ask it here.