Champion Of Lust: Gods Conquer's Harem Paradise!

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DeadBeatWeeb

So, Author, (although I doubt you’ll see this) here’s some feedback from me as of chapter 38. Firstly, some positives-I think you’re making pretty likeable an interesting characters. At least, I can see myself being interested. I also like the idea of him needing to clean up the business before they become too problematic. For some areas of improvement-I think you could be slowing down on the characters and the focus. Especially when it comes to Pyris’ relationships with these ladies. We jumped from his sister to the vampire princess to his assistant to now this succubus. It feels that you’re eager to get to the harem and the excitement that not all of your intent is coming through. It’s as if you’re trying to explain why someone should watch a series by jumping into the highlights with minimal context given. Let yourself and the characters linger and build into the world via varying dynamics. I don’t mean to talk shit author. I’m actually enjoying your series so far and I think you can get much better.

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Zakir_Rana_3088

it's very fantastic 👌, [img=update][img=update]

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Grim_Reaper_73

Ugh, brother Ugh, what's that, what's that brother?

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Sully122

This is a very promising story, keenly following it to see how it develops 👍

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Rolando_Maresma

So far I'm on chapter 40, it's my first review and I must say author that the novel is very interesting but the only detail is that the R18 parts are very short and when you're in the best part and you're immersing yourself in the story you leave it and just say after 3 hours of snu snu I would prefer you to leave it complete at least 2 chapters so that it would be more entertaining and that perverts like us readers would like it.

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EyeOfSilver

Beta male mc. . .

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great_lord

Very promising plot, hope the author won't drop it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Muhammed_Farhan_8609

THIS NOVEL IS FANTASTIC WITH GOOD WORLD BUILDING AND CHARACTERS. THE WRITING PACE IS ALSO GOOD

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Fi3l

Don’t know about anyone else but I’ve been having a blast reading this, keep up the good work author!

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Anim3God69

good read other than the spelling errors.

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multiverses_sage

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Bruce_Overton

So far I have read 30+ chapters and I love it characters are pretty well fleshed out and world well put together great read really

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alex_molsbee

author is there chapters missing cause it jumped from him taking over the business to chasing liez and talking about Silas and how he's been running the company but there isn't any chapters explaining what Silas did or what happened when he took over as ceo

LV 4

SweetnessSaintess

Thanks for the Books!!!!! 😆 📖🍻 Oh, I haven't reviewed this novel yet? Then let me give all five stars for all five categories for your new book 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 We are all looking forward for the next chapters 🥰📖🍷

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Daoist_Supra_21

The writing quality is lacking a lot you should put more work into it . So far the rest is good for me [img=recommend]

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sgtcwby

This story started off good, but then took a unexpected turn. Multiple forced plots were introduced. A lot of teenage drama occurred in relation to said forced plots and immature personality was introduced for the MC. It’s truly a shame, this novel could have been one of the greats. The direction the author took it just slammed the train off the rails unfortunately. Additionally, the MCs relationships are very undeveloped and PLOT (smut) scenes are rushed at best.

LV 14

Aaron_Moore_3225

it could be a good storyline and I actually like the storyline when it's there problem is it's extremely long winded and the being cut off after a sentence in the middle of a chapter to ask for power stones that's supposed to be done at the end and you don't have to do it every chapter we know now honestly I was going to wait a little longer into the story to do a review but I got tired of hearing leave a review so I am I'm still going to listen to the story and I am willing to update my review but right now it's so long-winded it gets boring a lot of the time

LV 4

BibAsXettri

(Sorry For my Bad English ) Author probably gonna delete this comment but welp. When i first saw the sequel I thought I found a hidden gem but guess what......NO!! The Whole story seems trash i cringed out after the first 2 chapters and it was not trash, it's an humiliation to call this even a story when you are using ai so heavly that it's so hard to read and the way the mc acts and the interaction with the system on those chapters are childish and cringe or seems more like you trying to be like that.....anyways. +I don't think the story is trash but the way you implement the story is trash, as far as I have read till now, I don't have a good impression of they way it's so jesty and i think many will agree with my statement, you made the story unreadable if you are not some 16 y.o tweek who wants to get isekaied in anime and i don't have the intention of reading it any further i just want to write this so you can improve the story and stop being heavly dependent on ai generated story, its not improving the story quality it's making it even worse, better to read an unfiltered novel so at least you could get some recommendations and improve your writing. And stop making those cringe interaction....i really liked the story and world background but the way you made the story look at the beginning just made it vanished.

LV 12

demon025

Dropped at around chapter 100. First free part of the novel is decently written with interesting story and good pacing. Unfortunately once locked chapters are kicking in everything degrades pretty quickly. Most of the chapters nothing of substance is happening, first half of some chapters is a straight up repetition of a previous chapter. Some chapters consist entirely of beating around the bush so much that you can summarise entire chapter in a single sentence. By the time you reach chapter 100 names Dragomir Skalethorn and Valeria Sangrave will become a meme with how frequent they are mentioned. Like we understood that they are key figures behind rival mining company after first 15 times, no need to remind us even more. Almost no harem developement, 1 and a half 18+ episode in 100 chapters make mc feel like he's a dragon of chastity and celibacy not lust. 1.5/5 Not recommended.

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Devil023

The plot is average but i don't like the story development at all.