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Gabe it 5 star rating simply because it's a FanFic about SCP foundation but in all honesty it could have been netter. But then again I am not baba yaga. I am but humble reader.
I try to be fair in my judgment. Writing quality 4/5 not perfect but it's not like it has a lot of grammatical. Story development 1/5 the title is about making SCP games, the 90+ chapters so far are about 1 single game so far. Heck, I even forgot the name of the MC because we've been focused on the players playing the game. Updating stability 4/5 it updates faster compared to other where it take months for 1 single chapter. In any case, this story updates 1 chapter every few days, there are times when it goes to hiatus but so far, nothing too long. World Background 1/5 fuq are we looking at the world background? We're here to make SCP games and so far only 1 game has been made and the whole story has been about players trying to beat the game.
5 stars overall!! this is one of the best fan fic novels here in qidian dang you must be out of your mind not reading this! also hope the author dont abandon this and keep this updated, this has lots of potential guys pls support this fanfic novel!! the best!
nothing really special about this novel. MC is barely in it. It's just extras playing the games and the Mc doing nothing it..
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It was great and all but the Povs are too long it takes a lot of chapters and the mc barely has screentime like it's too long i got bored 🥱
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the update so slow i started reading the raw through google translate and my eyes bled
I really liked the novel and I recommend reading it. I thank the author for the novel. Thank you and see you another day or in another chapter of the novel.
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Well here’s my review. This book is a work of art, the writing imersive and trilling at the same time. The update frequency is good, but I just neeeeed morrrrrrrreeee. Well anyways really good book, I definitely recommend it.
Honestly, this is a very basic time-killer story. It's certainly not bad, but it's nothing special. For anyone who has played SCP containment breach, the story so far boils down to: Streamer plays the game. Oh my god it's so scary, describing the start of the game! Now a different streamer is playing the game! They also think it's scary! Repeat through a variety of shamelessly copied names of popular or once-popular streamers, and that's it. The "Main character" is involved in maybe 5% of the chapters so far. And when he's around, it's "I spent points, system do the thing for me." He's done nothing. Most people do more than the main character has done all story within an hour of waking up. But the story is FINE. If you WANT to read about streamers saying "Yep, SCP is scary!" then it passes the time. I read it, and I didn't dislike the experience, it just felt very, very predictable. Maybe it's more interesting if you haven't played SCP containment breach yourself, but in that case, you probably wouldn't read an SCP story. I'll still follow it, to see how things develop, but as of right now the entire story reads like a video reaction of the first 15 minutes of SCP containment breach made into a novel.
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this novel translation is peak! but the cliffhanger is killing me! Fortunate someone in the reviews, CALE_HENITSU review, named dokias75 found the original novel: 开发收容游戏,吓懵全球玩 家! Props to them! I'm just posting it here (please don't delete this review author!!!)
The story is good, no complaintsㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Empezare a verlo. Por la descripción se ve bueno. por ahora dare 4 estrellas para no parecer mezquino. Aquí imagen Ramdon. Lalalalalalalalaa
Does anyone have the original name? ......................................... . ................................................................... . .................................................................. . ....................................... . ................................................................... . .................................................................. . ....................................... . ................................................................... . .................................................................. . ............................................................................................................................................... . ..........................
hello guys,I'm trying to look for the original translation of this novel to see how the story will develop and can't seem to find it. on a page some one talked about Chinese novel called foundation games and it's description is like this novel. if you have any idea plz help, i hate it when I read a novel and it ends up as a harem or discontinued for whatever reason
Hmp! This commoner better be grateful for I have blessed you with my presence! Be grateful! Or should I let you see Mt. Tai!
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Gabe it 5 star rating simply because it's a FanFic about SCP foundation but in all honesty it could have been netter. But then again I am not baba yaga. I am but humble reader.
I try to be fair in my judgment. Writing quality 4/5 not perfect but it's not like it has a lot of grammatical. Story development 1/5 the title is about making SCP games, the 90+ chapters so far are about 1 single game so far. Heck, I even forgot the name of the MC because we've been focused on the players playing the game. Updating stability 4/5 it updates faster compared to other where it take months for 1 single chapter. In any case, this story updates 1 chapter every few days, there are times when it goes to hiatus but so far, nothing too long. World Background 1/5 fuq are we looking at the world background? We're here to make SCP games and so far only 1 game has been made and the whole story has been about players trying to beat the game.
5 stars overall!! this is one of the best fan fic novels here in qidian dang you must be out of your mind not reading this! also hope the author dont abandon this and keep this updated, this has lots of potential guys pls support this fanfic novel!! the best!
nothing really special about this novel. MC is barely in it. It's just extras playing the games and the Mc doing nothing it..
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It was great and all but the Povs are too long it takes a lot of chapters and the mc barely has screentime like it's too long i got bored 🥱
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the update so slow i started reading the raw through google translate and my eyes bled
I really liked the novel and I recommend reading it. I thank the author for the novel. Thank you and see you another day or in another chapter of the novel.
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Well here’s my review. This book is a work of art, the writing imersive and trilling at the same time. The update frequency is good, but I just neeeeed morrrrrrrreeee. Well anyways really good book, I definitely recommend it.
Honestly, this is a very basic time-killer story. It's certainly not bad, but it's nothing special. For anyone who has played SCP containment breach, the story so far boils down to: Streamer plays the game. Oh my god it's so scary, describing the start of the game! Now a different streamer is playing the game! They also think it's scary! Repeat through a variety of shamelessly copied names of popular or once-popular streamers, and that's it. The "Main character" is involved in maybe 5% of the chapters so far. And when he's around, it's "I spent points, system do the thing for me." He's done nothing. Most people do more than the main character has done all story within an hour of waking up. But the story is FINE. If you WANT to read about streamers saying "Yep, SCP is scary!" then it passes the time. I read it, and I didn't dislike the experience, it just felt very, very predictable. Maybe it's more interesting if you haven't played SCP containment breach yourself, but in that case, you probably wouldn't read an SCP story. I'll still follow it, to see how things develop, but as of right now the entire story reads like a video reaction of the first 15 minutes of SCP containment breach made into a novel.
Spoiler de révélation this novel translation is peak! but the cliffhanger is killing me! Fortunate someone in the reviews, CALE_HENITSU review, named dokias75 found the original novel: 开发收容游戏,吓懵全球玩 家! Props to them! I'm just posting it here (please don't delete this review author!!!)
The story is good, no complaintsㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Empezare a verlo. Por la descripción se ve bueno. por ahora dare 4 estrellas para no parecer mezquino. Aquí imagen Ramdon. Lalalalalalalalaa
Does anyone have the original name? ......................................... . ................................................................... . .................................................................. . ....................................... . ................................................................... . .................................................................. . ....................................... . ................................................................... . .................................................................. . ............................................................................................................................................... . ..........................
hello guys,I'm trying to look for the original translation of this novel to see how the story will develop and can't seem to find it. on a page some one talked about Chinese novel called foundation games and it's description is like this novel. if you have any idea plz help, i hate it when I read a novel and it ends up as a harem or discontinued for whatever reason
Hmp! This commoner better be grateful for I have blessed you with my presence! Be grateful! Or should I let you see Mt. Tai!
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