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ok I saw the brief summary and I'll wait for it hope to see it(btw me like aether mc)
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The grammar is horrible, the relationship between the characters and the protagonist is too rushed, that is, they literally talk to each other as if they have known each other for a long time but they haven't even been there for 3 days, it's absurd.
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ok I saw the brief summary and I'll wait for it hope to see it(btw me like aether mc)
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The grammar is horrible, the relationship between the characters and the protagonist is too rushed, that is, they literally talk to each other as if they have known each other for a long time but they haven't even been there for 3 days, it's absurd.