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Story is fabulous 💯, Mc is Psychopath + intelligent❤️, Mc remind of Dexter Morgan a Character from the TV show name 'Dexter' .................
Decent. Weird turn with him suddenly going kinda psycho but ig it might be cursed energy messing with him. Is kinda cringe edge though. Set in Marvel which is a decent enough world so can't really take points from that. Writing is decent, no glaring flaws, author just has a real bad case of repition. Honestly kinda reminds me of AI writing where they say the same thing 2 or 3 times in different ways. This paired with the MC constantly being introspective made it kinda annoying.
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Well this is just the review from my perspective till now so just bear with it.😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜
the work is good so far but please don't make him a hero ...........................................................................................
Story is good. Mc is developing wonderfully, Not too op but not nerfed as well. New ideas on how to improve his cursed technique and willingness to do the dirty work is a great feature of the story. Also liked the new abilities used by the mc. Mc also needs a more powerful method to defend not just his mind but his body as well. Hopefully mc would create more powerful techniques in the future.
Story is fabulous 💯, Mc is Psychopath + intelligent❤️, Mc remind of Dexter Morgan a Character from the TV show name 'Dexter' .................
Decent. Weird turn with him suddenly going kinda psycho but ig it might be cursed energy messing with him. Is kinda cringe edge though. Set in Marvel which is a decent enough world so can't really take points from that. Writing is decent, no glaring flaws, author just has a real bad case of repition. Honestly kinda reminds me of AI writing where they say the same thing 2 or 3 times in different ways. This paired with the MC constantly being introspective made it kinda annoying.
Spoiler de révélation Well this is just the review from my perspective till now so just bear with it.😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜
the work is good so far but please don't make him a hero ...........................................................................................
Story is good. Mc is developing wonderfully, Not too op but not nerfed as well. New ideas on how to improve his cursed technique and willingness to do the dirty work is a great feature of the story. Also liked the new abilities used by the mc. Mc also needs a more powerful method to defend not just his mind but his body as well. Hopefully mc would create more powerful techniques in the future.