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- Développement de l’histoire
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- Contexte du monde
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The mc is boring. He’s kind of a one trick pony. He quickly gets a skill that lets him double his strength for a bit and just keeps playing the pig to catch the tiger. The author tries to offset this by making him tired after use but he’s always convinently fighting one on one with nobody around so the same trick works over and over. This would be fine if he was the one initializing the conflicts, I would even appreciate an mc that styles himself around a strategy, but as a pure hearted mc he’s very reactionary. He does initiate one fight but it’s so completely different from how he normally acts it comes across as almost bipolar.
A rather enjoyable read so far (for the free chapters). The main character is hard working with a happy attitude. No main issues with grammar and english, is it a translation? Small critic : sentences are too often too short with an overuse of the exclamation mark and some idioms seem asian (chinese?). I wish the interactions with the sheriff were handled better and that chance encounters will remain rare as they seem too forced by the author and remove agency from the main character. Same thing when people force the main character’s into a decision that seal his whole future and he happily agrees without taking the time to think about it or discuss it with his familly or more knowledgeable people about the consequences those choices entail to... especially when you just isekaied a few days ago into a completly different society. As most isekai, the previous life, familly, story, has no impact so far. I appreciate how the MC used his first sundays, it’s an exemple of agency and shows his character. Beside that, it’s a gpod start. Good luck author!
The mc is boring. He’s kind of a one trick pony. He quickly gets a skill that lets him double his strength for a bit and just keeps playing the pig to catch the tiger. The author tries to offset this by making him tired after use but he’s always convinently fighting one on one with nobody around so the same trick works over and over. This would be fine if he was the one initializing the conflicts, I would even appreciate an mc that styles himself around a strategy, but as a pure hearted mc he’s very reactionary. He does initiate one fight but it’s so completely different from how he normally acts it comes across as almost bipolar.
A rather enjoyable read so far (for the free chapters). The main character is hard working with a happy attitude. No main issues with grammar and english, is it a translation? Small critic : sentences are too often too short with an overuse of the exclamation mark and some idioms seem asian (chinese?). I wish the interactions with the sheriff were handled better and that chance encounters will remain rare as they seem too forced by the author and remove agency from the main character. Same thing when people force the main character’s into a decision that seal his whole future and he happily agrees without taking the time to think about it or discuss it with his familly or more knowledgeable people about the consequences those choices entail to... especially when you just isekaied a few days ago into a completly different society. As most isekai, the previous life, familly, story, has no impact so far. I appreciate how the MC used his first sundays, it’s an exemple of agency and shows his character. Beside that, it’s a gpod start. Good luck author!
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