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Awesome read so far!!! Great character development!! Love to see the progression of the story![img=golden ticket]
Reviewing for fp but sounds like its full of hooks and all the stuff you love in a dramatic romance
I have enjoyed reading the story so far (up to chapter 38). I don’t understand why Lucy wants to get revenge against Landon. I hope it gets gets explained or meshed out in later chapters because it didn’t make any sense to me. As for writing quality it is good except for a few places where the words were not in the right order or the wrong word was used.
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I love the story, but I wish the author didn't lock the chapters after chapter six. That's really not enough chapters to read so your readers can decide if they want to spend their hard earned coins or not. At least give us ten or so free chapters to really get invested in the plot. The story is good so far but I'm not sure i'm going to continue. I don't have many coins & fp, so I have got to be picky about which stories I read. Sorry. Good luck with the story.
I like this story, it’s really sigma but the only beta thing about it is that I don’t really like this kind of skibidi trope
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Gonna rate this 5/5 because I am the AUTHOR. This is the first time I'm writing something that's bad for my heart. As in, I'm about to be sent to the ER because my heart just broke into pieces writing this. To my old readers, they know I don't write angst or full of misunderstanding stories. Sweet romance stories are my comfort zone. But, maybe, I'm opening the portal to a new door of becoming a m*******. Ahem. Anyway, to my (old and new) readers. This novel is gonna a ride for me and you. There will be DRAMA (had to uppercase it, cause why not?). A gallon of Misunderstandings. An Elephant of Face Slapping. A stairway to heaven of Male Lead grovelling. A nice dose of Female Lead being savage and vicious. BABIES! And lastly, a good amount of romance and smut scenes. Spice level: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🔥 Now to finish this long review. I'm going to serve a bit of SPOILER for the readers who are hesitant to read angst romance and doesn't want to read because of the Male Lead. YOU CAN LEAVE. I'll even give you taxi fare to go home. Just kidding, not really. Lol. The male lead is redeemable. More precisely, there's no need to do that because he is...... *BEEP* Webnovel doesn't want me to spoil. Xoxo Poisonlily💋
Awesome read so far!!! Great character development!! Love to see the progression of the story![img=golden ticket]
Reviewing for fp but sounds like its full of hooks and all the stuff you love in a dramatic romance
I have enjoyed reading the story so far (up to chapter 38). I don’t understand why Lucy wants to get revenge against Landon. I hope it gets gets explained or meshed out in later chapters because it didn’t make any sense to me. As for writing quality it is good except for a few places where the words were not in the right order or the wrong word was used.
Spoiler de révélation I love the story, but I wish the author didn't lock the chapters after chapter six. That's really not enough chapters to read so your readers can decide if they want to spend their hard earned coins or not. At least give us ten or so free chapters to really get invested in the plot. The story is good so far but I'm not sure i'm going to continue. I don't have many coins & fp, so I have got to be picky about which stories I read. Sorry. Good luck with the story.
I like this story, it’s really sigma but the only beta thing about it is that I don’t really like this kind of skibidi trope
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Gonna rate this 5/5 because I am the AUTHOR. This is the first time I'm writing something that's bad for my heart. As in, I'm about to be sent to the ER because my heart just broke into pieces writing this. To my old readers, they know I don't write angst or full of misunderstanding stories. Sweet romance stories are my comfort zone. But, maybe, I'm opening the portal to a new door of becoming a m*******. Ahem. Anyway, to my (old and new) readers. This novel is gonna a ride for me and you. There will be DRAMA (had to uppercase it, cause why not?). A gallon of Misunderstandings. An Elephant of Face Slapping. A stairway to heaven of Male Lead grovelling. A nice dose of Female Lead being savage and vicious. BABIES! And lastly, a good amount of romance and smut scenes. Spice level: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🔥 Now to finish this long review. I'm going to serve a bit of SPOILER for the readers who are hesitant to read angst romance and doesn't want to read because of the Male Lead. YOU CAN LEAVE. I'll even give you taxi fare to go home. Just kidding, not really. Lol. The male lead is redeemable. More precisely, there's no need to do that because he is...... *BEEP* Webnovel doesn't want me to spoil. Xoxo Poisonlily💋