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Pen_Drop

I mean, which writer wouldn’t give himself a five-star review? Anyways, you’re looking at your shameless Author, Pen_Drop here. Thank you for choosing this book as part of your daily reading. Your support is greatly appreciated! Alright, let’s dive in. This book covers a lot—intense action, slaughter, futuristic world-building, more slaughter, romance, and did I mention even more slaughter? Oh, and there’s a harem too! Isn’t that great? Anyway, the MC is awesome, his mom is cool, and his friends are great. But the real fun? That’s in the harem. Giving it a good read is a must. Once again, there's a lot of action and, as a man of culture, I assure you the romance won't disappoint either. Now, let me answer some questions about the spoiler grey area. Q1. Will there be arcs about the MC's past? = Yes. He will need to remember his past to shape his future. Q2. How many reincarnations has the MC been through? = Count the number of doors in his soul sea. Q3. Will the harem be large? = I mean, the guy has reincarnated several times, so draw your own conclusion. Lol. Q4. Who is Ohema? = Really, that’s what you’re concerned about? I can’t answer all the questions here, so you know what to do. Ask your questions, and I’ll do my best to answer them!

4mth
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cosmicslime

This book is good, better than most of the books that are on this site especially in regards to the writing quality, the sentences flow and its easy to follow. Not much in the way of grammatical errors either. As for the story, it starts off interesting but its a little hard to keep up with all the lore and worldbuilding, it comes off as an info dump right out the gate. Mind you it is interesting, but the execution could use some work. As for the main character Klaus, he seems likeable at the moment, just a dude trying to take care of his family. There's some serious potential here and the book is definitely worth a read.

3d
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Dalton_S

Should definitely turn this into a series and sell them on amazon/kindle!!!

8d
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Darq_Night_X

While I enjoy the story very much, the fact that the mc has an over reliance on the ice element when his talent allows his to wield all 8 primal elements, unlike everyone else, annoys me very much. At least until chapter 100, which is where I’m at, the mc has barely used fire, the only other element I’ve seen him use, for more than 3 times.

17d
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Dao_of_infinity

The writing and story seem good, but I just don't like how the Mc's personality is set up. I know he is supposed to be a "Paragon." But it just really erks me that just as soon as he gets strong he acts like this. And I don't like haram stories, I'll probably keep reading. But that's only because I paid to read this far. Or I'll just drop it because of the Mc. Hopefully, he changes later on. Hopefully...

17d
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Cristianmr2003

me puede dar una escala del nivel de cultivo de menor a mayor y si hay subniveles dentro de un nivel de cultivo ? es para tener aqui una tabla guardada

1mth
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Cristianmr2003

ya lo lei en otra cuenta y me gusta bastante , me gustaria preguntar si tiene un discord y en caso de que no lo tengas si lo quieres crear sea en breves o en un futuro y si tiene una wiki la novela ;)

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1mth
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pb_jelly

overall good, but when it gets to the 300s everything starts getting drawn out. it made me loose interest reading about him fighting lighting for 20 chapters. then just talking to the guy in his head forever.

1mth
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Loyfe
LV 3 Badge

Mc is way too naive. A lot of things get repeated multiple times. Mc acts too childish. The Writing is cliche chinese writing. Except for these things the novel is somewhat enjoyable.

2mth
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Lewis_Cooper_9575

not even going to lie I've read a lot of harem novels and most to overdo the lemon aspect but this story is very well thought out I like how it flows and you can tell the author put a great deal of time into creating a story that'll make you want to continue reading if you enjoy well written action-packed face slappers this novel is an absolute must read

2mth
Voir 1 Réponses
JustanAlt

Just want to say that if the mc never opened his mouth during a fight I would give it a five star regardless of anything else. I don't really like disabilities or nerfs in a mc but if he became a mute or had his tongue ripped out I'd like this story a whole lot more. If you can deal with all the cringe a Chinese wanna be talking then you should give it a go

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
TheWitcher

I was very thrilled at first about the potential of this novel. Everything is well put together and the background really paints the whole scenario. But sadly to say this, the overly protectiveness and unnatural relationship between Klaus and her mom seems cringe to me, to the point where I'm questioning if they are inlove with each other. And the display of uncharacteristic personality of the MC makes me think he's bipolar or something. Don't even get me started in the harem side, sorry but its not my taste. Overall, if the author puts more emphasis on character and behaviour of MC along with other side character personas, I would probably give it another chance because really, I like the world building in here and the background. It's just a shame though. 🤞 Honest personal opinion! Peace out!

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2mth
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pepero0

The actual story is interesting but there are wayyy to many plot holes and several of the numbers don’t add up. Not to mention, as soon as I got to the paid chapters the quality diminished and there were several unfinished words or missing numbers (ex: 0 min instead of 10), it really interrupted the flow and I couldn’t continue reading

2mth
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Steve_Crown

This is better than I initially thought. nice one author. Also, be sure to give the mother enough screen time.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ReaderAlert

This novel is awesome. The settings and how the MC handles himself and his enemies, I Love it all. Please don't spoil it in the future.

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3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Cristianmr2003

increible novela , tienes mis 5 estrellas , buena calidad y buen desarrollo y por lo que veo las mujeres no son trofeos y las relaciones se desarrollan, por cierto la madre se une al harem?

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
DaddyYxwn

So far it’s a pretty decent title, (ch 134), but the inconsistencies in the details are far too frequent and decimate the flow of the book. It felt like every 3 or 4 paragraphs the author would directly contradict what he wrote in the previous chapters. If the author kept track of his own words it would be worth a few coins, but until then I’ll be finding something else.

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Vicky_Kumar_7852

Everything in this novel is good. It has potential but too much harem thing and even including MC’s in teasing and all, just destroyed the story. Sometimes it feels like i am reading an adult novel…..🥲. I have loved this but had to drop. Lost interest in this novel.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Ray_optics

WAYYYYY better than expected. kuddos to author, would be nice if we got more illustrations maybe in a discord.(author do you have one?)

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
AstroXVXV

It did take just a little bit for the story to get going but it was worth it. The world building isn’t bad but seems pretty average for now. I like the mcs personality and powers. Thanks for the story author.

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Sil3nt_1

I am really enjoying the novel so far, so much in fact I am reading it for a second time. I recommend this novel to anyone looking for a good read.

5mth
Voir 6 Réponses
Pen_Drop

I mean, which writer wouldn’t give himself a five-star review? Anyways, you’re looking at your shameless Author, Pen_Drop here. Thank you for choosing this book as part of your daily reading. Your support is greatly appreciated! Alright, let’s dive in. This book covers a lot—intense action, slaughter, futuristic world-building, more slaughter, romance, and did I mention even more slaughter? Oh, and there’s a harem too! Isn’t that great? Anyway, the MC is awesome, his mom is cool, and his friends are great. But the real fun? That’s in the harem. Giving it a good read is a must. Once again, there's a lot of action and, as a man of culture, I assure you the romance won't disappoint either. Now, let me answer some questions about the spoiler grey area. Q1. Will there be arcs about the MC's past? = Yes. He will need to remember his past to shape his future. Q2. How many reincarnations has the MC been through? = Count the number of doors in his soul sea. Q3. Will the harem be large? = I mean, the guy has reincarnated several times, so draw your own conclusion. Lol. Q4. Who is Ohema? = Really, that’s what you’re concerned about? I can’t answer all the questions here, so you know what to do. Ask your questions, and I’ll do my best to answer them!

4mth
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cosmicslime

This book is good, better than most of the books that are on this site especially in regards to the writing quality, the sentences flow and its easy to follow. Not much in the way of grammatical errors either. As for the story, it starts off interesting but its a little hard to keep up with all the lore and worldbuilding, it comes off as an info dump right out the gate. Mind you it is interesting, but the execution could use some work. As for the main character Klaus, he seems likeable at the moment, just a dude trying to take care of his family. There's some serious potential here and the book is definitely worth a read.

3d
Voir 0 Réponses
Dalton_S

Should definitely turn this into a series and sell them on amazon/kindle!!!

8d
Voir 0 Réponses
Darq_Night_X

While I enjoy the story very much, the fact that the mc has an over reliance on the ice element when his talent allows his to wield all 8 primal elements, unlike everyone else, annoys me very much. At least until chapter 100, which is where I’m at, the mc has barely used fire, the only other element I’ve seen him use, for more than 3 times.

17d
Voir 0 Réponses
Dao_of_infinity

The writing and story seem good, but I just don't like how the Mc's personality is set up. I know he is supposed to be a "Paragon." But it just really erks me that just as soon as he gets strong he acts like this. And I don't like haram stories, I'll probably keep reading. But that's only because I paid to read this far. Or I'll just drop it because of the Mc. Hopefully, he changes later on. Hopefully...

17d
Voir 1 Réponses
Cristianmr2003

me puede dar una escala del nivel de cultivo de menor a mayor y si hay subniveles dentro de un nivel de cultivo ? es para tener aqui una tabla guardada

1mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Cristianmr2003

ya lo lei en otra cuenta y me gusta bastante , me gustaria preguntar si tiene un discord y en caso de que no lo tengas si lo quieres crear sea en breves o en un futuro y si tiene una wiki la novela ;)

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1mth
Voir 1 Réponses
pb_jelly

overall good, but when it gets to the 300s everything starts getting drawn out. it made me loose interest reading about him fighting lighting for 20 chapters. then just talking to the guy in his head forever.

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Loyfe
LV 3 Badge

Mc is way too naive. A lot of things get repeated multiple times. Mc acts too childish. The Writing is cliche chinese writing. Except for these things the novel is somewhat enjoyable.

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Lewis_Cooper_9575

not even going to lie I've read a lot of harem novels and most to overdo the lemon aspect but this story is very well thought out I like how it flows and you can tell the author put a great deal of time into creating a story that'll make you want to continue reading if you enjoy well written action-packed face slappers this novel is an absolute must read

2mth
Voir 1 Réponses
JustanAlt

Just want to say that if the mc never opened his mouth during a fight I would give it a five star regardless of anything else. I don't really like disabilities or nerfs in a mc but if he became a mute or had his tongue ripped out I'd like this story a whole lot more. If you can deal with all the cringe a Chinese wanna be talking then you should give it a go

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
TheWitcher

I was very thrilled at first about the potential of this novel. Everything is well put together and the background really paints the whole scenario. But sadly to say this, the overly protectiveness and unnatural relationship between Klaus and her mom seems cringe to me, to the point where I'm questioning if they are inlove with each other. And the display of uncharacteristic personality of the MC makes me think he's bipolar or something. Don't even get me started in the harem side, sorry but its not my taste. Overall, if the author puts more emphasis on character and behaviour of MC along with other side character personas, I would probably give it another chance because really, I like the world building in here and the background. It's just a shame though. 🤞 Honest personal opinion! Peace out!

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2mth
Voir 2 Réponses
pepero0

The actual story is interesting but there are wayyy to many plot holes and several of the numbers don’t add up. Not to mention, as soon as I got to the paid chapters the quality diminished and there were several unfinished words or missing numbers (ex: 0 min instead of 10), it really interrupted the flow and I couldn’t continue reading

2mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Steve_Crown

This is better than I initially thought. nice one author. Also, be sure to give the mother enough screen time.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ReaderAlert

This novel is awesome. The settings and how the MC handles himself and his enemies, I Love it all. Please don't spoil it in the future.

img
3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Cristianmr2003

increible novela , tienes mis 5 estrellas , buena calidad y buen desarrollo y por lo que veo las mujeres no son trofeos y las relaciones se desarrollan, por cierto la madre se une al harem?

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
DaddyYxwn

So far it’s a pretty decent title, (ch 134), but the inconsistencies in the details are far too frequent and decimate the flow of the book. It felt like every 3 or 4 paragraphs the author would directly contradict what he wrote in the previous chapters. If the author kept track of his own words it would be worth a few coins, but until then I’ll be finding something else.

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Vicky_Kumar_7852

Everything in this novel is good. It has potential but too much harem thing and even including MC’s in teasing and all, just destroyed the story. Sometimes it feels like i am reading an adult novel…..🥲. I have loved this but had to drop. Lost interest in this novel.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Ray_optics

WAYYYYY better than expected. kuddos to author, would be nice if we got more illustrations maybe in a discord.(author do you have one?)

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
AstroXVXV

It did take just a little bit for the story to get going but it was worth it. The world building isn’t bad but seems pretty average for now. I like the mcs personality and powers. Thanks for the story author.

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Sil3nt_1

I am really enjoying the novel so far, so much in fact I am reading it for a second time. I recommend this novel to anyone looking for a good read.

5mth
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