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I don't know how to write ✍️ a review But I don't know how many chapters so that it will be TYPE MOON Fate Movie 🎥😔
I give this fanfiction 2.5 stars only because of the MC. Pure Japanese MC (who is passive in relationships, but wants to have a harem). Apart from the character of the MC, I can safely give it 4.5
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If you could endure the wordcount of this fic then this is good. No seriously, this fic explain something by using examples, quotes from some chinese poems, reference and they're explaining about the economy... it makes me feel like I'm reading a thesis honestly.
I think this is a good book, it has potential. But I think you need to focus more. I see there are still Chinese characters in this book and everything is fine. . . .
I don't know how to write ✍️ a review But I don't know how many chapters so that it will be TYPE MOON Fate Movie 🎥😔
I give this fanfiction 2.5 stars only because of the MC. Pure Japanese MC (who is passive in relationships, but wants to have a harem). Apart from the character of the MC, I can safely give it 4.5
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If you could endure the wordcount of this fic then this is good. No seriously, this fic explain something by using examples, quotes from some chinese poems, reference and they're explaining about the economy... it makes me feel like I'm reading a thesis honestly.
I think this is a good book, it has potential. But I think you need to focus more. I see there are still Chinese characters in this book and everything is fine. . . .